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| First Character: Theos Halkias- Spoiler:
Name: Theos Exypnos Halkias
Age/Birthday: 16yo - 27th April.
Gender: Male
God Parent: Athena
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Adonis Halkias.
Years in Camp: Fourth year. Brief History: Adonis was, and still is, an Architect. He is a very wise and humble man, which is what drew Athena to him. Both Athena and Adonis were studying at Yale - Though Adonis was double majoring in Architecture and Greek Mythology. He spent most of his time studying, and the rest of the time was spent with Athena where he found out her true identity and they consequently fell in love. Adonis completed his studies and was ready to travel the world when he received a gift from Athena, a Golden Cradle carried down by none other than Zephyrus from Olympus.
Theos is the illegimate son of Adonis, his mortal father - And Athena, the Goddess of Wisdom among other things. Theos was born the same way the rest of his siblings were, which is through the mind of his mother and father. Theos has a very close relationship with his father, and tries to see him as often as he can, though Theos knows the entire story of his relationship with Athena and the burden which he became - Preventing his father from travelling for many years. To make up for this, Theos now lives at Camp Half-Blood so his father can travel without worry because he knows he's safe.Physical Appearance: Theos has the appearance of a regular teenage male, standing at approximately 6 feet tall and weighing 180 pounds. He has a well proportioned face with stormy grey eyes, much like the other children of Athena. Moving onto his nose, which is thin but sits gently in the centre of his face - Though it is not seen very often because of the long white silk scarf he commonly wears, often lifting it to cover most of his face – Aside from when he is eating. Theos' lips sit about three-quarters of a centimetre below his nose and are rarely seen, other than when he is seated and eating, or if he should lose his scarf. Theos possesses a soft smile which matches his child like face. He is always completely clean shaven, disliking facial hair altogether.
Theos has short blond hair that is often spiked, aside from a few strands which bunch together and fall forward over his right eye. His attire is always neat and tidy, opting to look his best at all times as it provides a clean image and sticking to the aspect that first impressions do count. Theos is often seen wearing white , long white pants and generally wears a black long sleeve shirt with a white vest over the top of it – As well as his scarf which is one of the easiest ways to identify what he looks like.Personality: Theos has a very kind and soft hearted personality, always offering help to those in need and expecting nothing in return. He is a firm believer in 'Karma' and also commonly references to the saying "No good deed goes unnoticed." Theos is also shows kindness and mercy to some who others think shouldn't deserve it, like allowing Enemies to live, and only killing when absolutely necessary - Though he will often try to find a way out of it, such as incapacitating an opponent instead of delivering a killing blow.
Along with being kind and soft hearted, Theos is also a very humble and honourable person, having a lot of Integrity. He is extremely honest and holds to sound ethical principles. He never lies, cheats or steals - No matter the consequence it may bring upon himself or others around him and isn't afraid to list his own shortcomings. He holds firm to the belief that "If a leader is not honest, they cannot be relied upon" No matter the person he is addressing, he is consistent in the way he treats everyone - Which is with the utmost respect.
Apart from these traits, Theos is a very loyal person with a firm belief in team work. He is quick to put the group's needs before his own, doing whatever is necessary to ensure they are safe. Whilst knowing that loyalty alone can earn someone respect and confidence, he also knows that every action he takes reflects his loyalty to his commanders, whoever they may be. With his loyalty comes a strong grasp of teamwork, believing it to be a key factor as to the success of a village as well as the effectiveness of the team to work together for any reason necessary. To Theos, teamwork and loyalty are the building blocks to equality, trust, reliability and friendship.
Aside from the qualities known, he also possesses a high level of Commitment to everything he does - Being told from a young age that he could do anything if he put his mind to it. It was this line told to him by his father which has somewhat shaped him into the person he is today. Theos is extremely committed to protecting those around him. He maintains high degrees of discipline and self discipline, constantly seeking self improvement and knowing that he isn't the best - But he will always give his best. Theos never tries to seem modest or arrogant, and would rather seek to demonstrate humility instead of arrogance.
Theos has also shown to be a responsible individual who accounts for his own actions. He has shown that with these qualities he can become a strong leader, being a rare individual who not only admits his mistakes - But takes full responsibility of the consequences. Not only those, Theos will always represent his subordinates and take complete responsibility and punishment for their actions - No matter what the consequence is. He is extremely reliable and takes on tasks no matter the risk, believing that he is setting a strong example for the younger generation to follow.Fatal Flaws: Theos is too trusting of strangers, often going against his own decisions to help those in need - Theos is also known to be rather merciful. Whilst this may not be a bad thing in other people's eyes, it can be a terrible thing should he find himself in a fight for he often ops to incapacitate his opponent instead of kill them. He also holds friendship highly, and would risk everything he has to save a friend.Pets: Theos possesses a White Owl named Sofia which was a gift to him from his mother on his 15th birthday. Theos holds the Owl close to him, as it is a gift from his mother and also one of her symbols - But also because he can use the Owl to send messages to his father if he's close to Camp Half-Blood. Talents: Theos possesses the talents that most children of Athena have. He possesses his mother's Wisdom, making him an Extremely Intelligent person. Because of both his mother's Wisdom, and his father's Wisdom - Theos has a great deal of knowledge in Architecture, as well as the Greek Gods and the other Mythilogical creatures: This knowledge aids him greatly in both quests and battles. Theos is also an Excellent Strategist and has been trained with both weapons as well as Hand-to-Hand. Theos also possesses the 2 main qualities which almost all Demigods have - He is both Dyslexic as well as having ADHD.Weapons: Theos to date has one weapon - Which is in the shape of a 6ft Bo-Staff. The secret to Theos weapon is that the Bo-Staff can twist and separate at the center - Turning it into twin swords. The blades are made entirely of Celestial Bronze, including most of the handle aside from about 4 inches on both sides which is made of Tungsten - This means Theos can harm Mortals with the very ends of his Staff, or the handles of the swords... As well as strike down anything Mythilogical. Year-Round or Summer: All year round.
Second Character: Dean Nole.- Spoiler:
Name: Dean Nole.
Age/Birthday: 14 - 15th of August.
Gender: Male.
God Parent: None.
Claimed: No, Dean has no God Parent.
Mortal Family:
Mother: Christy Nole - Demigod of Chronos.
Father: Daniel Nole - Demigod of Apollo.
Sister: Rebecca Nole - Demigod.
'Uncle': Johnathan Peters - Demigod of Hephaestus.
Aunty: Lee Peters - Mortal.
Years in Camp: This is Dean's first year in camp. Brief History: To understand Dean's history, you must first understand his parent's history. Both of Dean's parents attended Camp Half Blood when they were younger, and it was there they had their first encounter as teenagers. Dean's Mother Christy is a child of the God Chronos, whom is commonly known as the Personification of Time - His Father is a child of the God Apollo, whom is the God of Prophecy. With both of his parents being Demigods, they knew the full risks which came with the title, and it was one they didn't want for their child - But ultimately, it was also one which they couldn't control.
Dean never knew his Father, for he had died when Dean was only just a child, though from all the stories he heard from his mother - He felt as if he knew him. His mother, however, Dean knew and loved and she was someone he would go to the ends of the world and back to protect. After Dean's father had passed away, they moved to his Uncle John's house, whom actually wasn't his Uncle - But he was his father's best friend and also happened to be a Demigod. His Uncle John resided in a house right next to Central Park with his wife Lee.
There was nothing important about Aunty Lee, she was a simple Mortal woman from a wealthy family - But she possessed the ability to see through the Mist and had actually saved my Uncle John's life when they were younger from, what she described as a scaly and very ugly woman which Dean now knows is a Dracaena. She had his Uncle John pinned down and was about to strike when it found a sword plunged deep into it's back and was ultimately killed. When my Uncle glanced up, he described the moment as "Love at first sight", something that Dean knew he would never be able to understand.
When Dean was 7, his mother gave birth to another child - Dean's younger sister Rebecca. Dean loved his sister very much, and they grew up close, especially since his Mother and Uncle never let them attend normal schools like other children - They kept them at home, home schooling them with tutors as well as teaching them both how to fight with a sword to protect themselves from the horrors which awaited Demigods in the world. Dean wouldn't know this now, but Ares was actually the father of his Sister - Ares had raped his mother after she had not only recognized him, but refused to sleep with him, which angered the God.
When Dean had found out this news, he had began to hate not only Ares, but the other Olympians as well. When Dean turned 14, his whole world - To him - Was perfect, but that was very far from the truth, a truth that his mother and uncle had tried desperately to keep from him and his sister. Suddenly one night, everything for Dean had changed. They were sitting in the lounge room, watching Jeopardy when 3 giants crashed through the front door and attacked the 4 Demigods. Uncle John fought valiantly, as did Aunty Lee - But they were both struck down in combat and killed.
Rebecca screamed in terror, and tried to run - But the Giant swung his club and Rebecca vanished before Dean's eyes: A large crater was where his sister once was. Dean headed towards the back of the house, and his mother shouted at him "The chest under my bed! That's yours, head to Half Blood Hill in Montauk!" His mother shouted as she turned to fight, his Uncle and Aunt also fighting to protect him - And he felt helpless. Dean prayed to the Gods to help him, but they didn't show. Dean opened the chest and found some equiptment there, as well as some money and took everything within it, placing it all in a large luggage bag.
Dean made his way back towards the lounge room, when he heard a huge crash and stood completely still in shock and horror, for 3 giants stood in the lounge room and he saw his mother's mangled body laying on the lounge room floor. Dean couldn't wait for long, as the Giants turned towards him - But their size and speed would aid him in his escape. Dean ran out the back and jupmed out the window in his parent's bedroom, as he turned and heard the Giants destroying his house, he hadn't realized it, but he was crying - Though he found strength he never knew he had to continue going.
Dean caught a taxi to Montauk just like his mother had said, and as he got out of the taxi - He saw nothing. Thinking his mother could have been mistaken until he heard a roar behind him and saw what he recognized as a Satyr running past him with 2 other people. "RUN!" The Satyr said to him as he looked where the Satyr and others had come from to see the large frame of a beast running towards them. Dean wanted to stay and fight, but heard a voice in his head which told him to follow the Satyr - And so he did. As he made it to the top of the hill, he laid his eyes on the camp and the place that he would now call home.Physical Appearance: Dean was always told he looked like both of his parents, he had lightly tanned skin with light brown hair - But possessed Aqua colored eyes, which were often confused for being either green or blue depending on the lighting in the room. His hair was medium length and often in a mess as he never bothered to brush it, he usually just put on a hat. Dean was about 5'6 and weighed 130 pounds, keeping in shape from training with his Mother and Uncle, who were always preparing him for the life which would come - Something he would never forget.
After the incident at his house with the Giants, Dean always wore the armor within the Case which his mother and father had left for him. He wore a custom made breastplate, which was completely black - But had a white edges, the armor being made by his Uncle John whom was a child of Hephaestus. The armor itself was the strongest which could possibly be forged, being made of Tungsten steel - One of the hardest natural minerals to be found on Earth. Any weapon which clashed against the armor would undoubtedly richocet off the armor and leave Dean with no damage - Though there was more.
Over his arms and legs, Dean wore Black and White Tungsten armor, though the inside of the armor was leather so it was soft against his skin. The material for the Breastplate was the same material used for the bracers and was virtually unbreakable. The leather underneath was dyed white, as the Tungsten steel was completely black, to continue the pattern that Dean had running with his Breastplate, which also meant he wore a white t-shirt underneath the breastplate. With his legs and arms armored, Dean also had more pieces to his armor.
Dean wore Tungsten sandles on his feet which had straps that were actually under his Tungsten leg bracers, though the back of the sandles - Which was a piece of armor that held his sandles together - Was also made of the very same strong Metal, making both sides of his leg virtually impossible to cut through, especially since a Demigod of the God of Forging had made these items himself. To match his armor, Dean also wore a custom made helmet which fit his head perfectly.
The Helmet which also happened to be Tungsten steel was completely black, except for the trimming and the feathering on top, which was actually half black and half white - To keep up with the theme which his Uncle had created for him with the armor, which was coincidentally Black and White. At full glance of his Armor, Dean looked like a huge threat, as his Tungsten steel armor shimmered in the light, producing almost no glow or shine from the metal except for the trimmings which were completely white, though this wasn't the Demigod's largest threat.
Dean possessed 3 items which would ultimately protect him from enemies, a Sword, a Spear and Shield - All of which had a perfect place within his specifically crafted armor. The sword found it's sheathe on the back of the Shield - And the shield found that it could clip itself to the back of his armor if it was ever lost from him, or found itself without out an owner... The sword often also appearing there. The Spear, however, was a bit more difficult and would only appear if Dean had requested or needed the Spear, which was because of the magic which had been put in the weapon itself.Personality: Dean had a mixed personality, he was often quiet and didn't speak unless spoken too - Though whenever he opened his mouth, it was only to say something important or something which needed to be said... Though he often found himself speaking bluntly about feelings and thoughts he had, as if he didn't care about anyone around him. Though Dean appeared to have a soft spot for those whom had experienced the same things he had, he often hid it and tried to show no weakness.
Dean also had a strong hate for the Olympians, because of what Ares did to his mother, and also because they were unable to save his Mother and Uncle, even though they were both children of the Gods, this often caused Dean to be extremely violent to those around him whom were Demigods, often not allowing them to get close to him for things which had happened in his past, and things he had wanted the Gods to pay for - He never paid them respect and promised to harm their children as much as he could until he felt he had revenged them enough.
Because of his mother's sacrifice, as well as that of his Uncle and Aunt, he was often depressed and always thinking about them, often cursing the Gods and not wanting anything to do with them. Dean had never thought himself alone until the point when he realized he had no one he could trust, as everyone whom had promised him something in his life all perished - Leaving the Demigod with no hope or faith in anything which would happen.
One of Dean's obvious traits was a severe hatred and anger, one which was easily accessable to anyone whom would annoy him or piss him off, and was often only quenched when he destroyed that person - No matter the consequence. His anger against the Gods knew no bounds and he would open Pandora's Box itself to bring end to the Olympians, often feeling they were responsible for what had happened to his parents and family. Dean did everything within his power to defy the Gods and show them disrespect, which was not a smart thing by anyone's books, but something he felt needed to be done.
Dean is completely introverted - Being extremely quiet, his voice is rarely heard. The only time his voice is usually heard, is to curse the Gods and in his dreams - A place he has no control over, but he is always told he screams out his mother's name before he wakes up shaking, or is woken up by his fellow cabin members. Dean chooses to keep the mystery of his parents alive, deciding against talking about them and choosing to do his own thing - Even if others find it strange or weird, but he doesn't care about what the others think of him, for the destruction of Olympus is all he cares about.Fatal Flaw: Dean's largest flaw is that he is easily angered, and once angered - He knows no bounds. If angered enough, Dean would take on all of Olympus for the sake of his family and never give up. When Dean is angered, he loses control of both his actions and powers - An evil spirit within his body usually taking over and controlling his actions: Which either lead to his triumph or demise - Though he doesn't care.
Dean also has another flaw, he is extremely confident of his abilities and believes himself to be immortal. Though he is introverted, when Dean enters a battle - His confidence and spirit rise tenfold, giving what he believes to be the strength and wisdom of 1000 men, though this belief often leaves him open to counter attacks and puts his life at jeopardy.Pets: Dean has no pets, finding them to be only distractions and possible threats to his future.
Talents: Dean has multplie talents, coming from both of his parents - But essentially from his Grandparents which he would never acknowledge. Like almost all Demigods, Dean has ADHD - Which allows him to react quickly to actions, though because of the powers his parents possess - His reactions are further enhanced, allowing him to react much faster than usual.
When Dean isn't angered, he has the power to completely freeze everything within 5 meters of himself, no matter what the thing may be... Though they can still talk and anger Dean, causing his power over them to faulter and fail - And because of his fatal flaw, this happens often. He also has another ability, he is capable of slowing down everything within 2 meters of himself to half his speed - Meaning whilst the object may appear to move at full speed to the opponent, Dean would be moving at twice their speed and be easily able to counter everything thrown at him.
Dean also has the weird ability to always know what the time is, though he figured this out because of his mother being the Demigod of Chronos, the God of Time, and so - Dean finds himself able to always tell the time no matter where he is - Whether it be the Underworld or even Olympus itself. He is unsure whether he can tell the time in different parts of the world, for he has never tried and doesn't care - He only wishes the demise of Olympus for what they did to his family.
Because his father was a Demigod of Apollo, Dean inhereted some of his abilities - Able to tell the future by only up to 30 seconds ahead, which is more than enough for what he needs in battle. This ability in itself makes him virtually undefeatable in battle, for he can counter an opponent's move before they've even thought about making it - The only problem is, if their opponent changes their mind with their movements, Dean doesn't realize until it's too late and often relies on his quicker than usual reflexes to get him out of trouble.
Because of his ability to both see the future briefly and also slow down time around him, Dean is one of - If not - The hardest warrior anyone will ever face in battle, possessing the skills to severely wound even a God themself should they ever face him in a battle.Weapons: Dean has a Tungsten Sword and Shield which were made by his Uncle John, both were blessed with magic and possess the ability to kill both Mortal and Monster alike - Even if that Monster happened to be a God or Demigod. Dean's shield is also made of the same hard Metal and blessed with the same Magic - All his weapons being somewhat cursed and carrying on his rage. Because of Dean's abilities and training - He is a very experienced warrior with both sword and spear, capable of duelling even Ares himself to a battle.Year-Round: All year round.Other: D ean hates the Olympians with all his heart and would see nothing more than their complete demise, though he often tries to hide this part of himself - Not wanting to warn them of any treachery he may try in the future.
Third Character: Phoebe Willow- Spoiler:
Name: Phoebe Willow.
Age/Birthday: 14; Born on the 19th of September.
Gender: Female.
God Parent: Apollo; The God of the Light and the Sun;
Oracles, the Truth and Prophecy;
Medicine and Healing;
Music, Poetry and the Arts.
Claimed: Yes.
Mortal Family:
Mother - Priscilla Willow (Deceased)
Step Father - James O'Connor (Cyclopes)
Step Sister - Sally O'Connor (Cyclopes)
Years in Camp: None. History: - Phoebe's mother Priscilla used to be a Model for various surf wear magazines, this meant she was extremely beautiful, and it was her beauty which first caught the attention of the God Apollo. Priscilla met John - which is what Apollo's name at the time was - only a couple of weeks after her 18th birthday and she described him as a dazzling young man with an odd charm, though a running joke is that Priscilla commonly calls him 'Hot' - Most likely in reference to the fact that he is The God of the Sun. Priscilla and John spent a lot of time together, and as such they fell in love - Phoebe's mother could only describe the time with Apollo as "Utter perfection." Both my mother and my father were surprised with her pregnancy, but alas - 9 months later, a beautiful baby girl was into the world: Phoebe.
As with most Demigod children, there came a point where Apollo had to leave Priscilla and return to his duties; Though promising her that he would always be there to watch and guide over us both. When Apollo left, Priscilla has told Phoebe many times that she was often sad and depressed that she was alone, but everyday when the sun rose high into the sky - She felt happy and warm and said she knew that Phoebe's father was watching over her. When Phoebe was only 2 years old, her mother had been dating James for about 18 months and there were extremely happy. James' father was a successful businessman and so, the ability seemed to be genetic - Since James also appeared to possess the same qualities as his father and when the time came, James eventually took over the company from his father.
A few months after James took over his father's company, he proposed to Priscilla and they were then Engaged. Almost a year passed and it was only a month after Phoebe's 3rd birthday that they got married, but it was also around this time that both Priscilla and Phoebe started to notice some particular changes with James. One night after work, James came home but he seemed completely different then what he was before, though Priscilla thought nothing of it, and so; she didn't press the point... Though, strange things kept happening around James and around the house, that Priscilla began to worry about - But because James had told her not to worry, she chose to listen to him and she often turned her head away from many of the things that happened around the house.
Of the strange things, most of them seemed to be revolving around Phoebe. Strange men and women would walk up to the family, often holding random objects but acting as if they were extremely dangerous weapons - And this scared Priscilla slightly, but James hadn't seemed phased in the slightest. Fast forwarding a few years now to when Phoebe was 7 - The strange occurences kept happening, but because of how long it'd been happening, Phoebe had grown up being used to it and was completely unknown to the dangers which faced her because of whom her biological father is. Priscilla gave birth to a daughter, Sally - And this would be James and Priscilla's first child; Though the strangest thing occured to Phoebe, she didn't ever remember her mother being pregnant.
As the months passed by, and Phoebe constantly argued with her mother about Sally - James would give Phoebe suspicious looks, and often punish her severly for small things. This caused Phoebe to begin to hate James, often screaming and shouting that she wasn't as loved as Sally because she wasn't his daughter. To keep Phoebe away from the violence, Priscilla found that Phoebe had a natural ability towards music - And she also loved the sport of Archery, which Priscilla enroled her daughter into; Hoping this would give James and Phoebe more time away from each other, and this proved to be successful for a little while. 2 days a week, Phoebe would be picked up by one of her friends from school whom also did Archery, and for another 2 days she would head off to music lessons.
On Phoebe's 9th Birthday whilst she was down at the Archery Range, she was firing arrows at the targets when her Bow snapped from overuse. Phoebe sat down and cried, holding onto her bow. Unknown to Phoebe, but her father Apollo had been watching and he felt quite saddened by this, so, when the day had ended and Phoebe had returned home - Apollo decided he would come down and visit his daughter, though as he made his way down Lightning lit the sky and Thunder rumbled - Zeus had seen what Apollo was attempting to do. Knowing he would be unable to defy Zeus, his own father and also the Leader of the Olympians, Apollo simply left his gift on the doorstep - Ringing the doorbell before vanishing from sight and returning to his home on Olympus.
Phoebe opened the door and looked around, seeing no one she was about to close the door when a small shimmer alerted her to something at her feet - The young girl looked down and picked up the package, all it said was "To Phoebe" - Slightly surprised by the gift, she took it inside to show her mother and when they opened the package there was actually 2 gifts; A majestic Golden Bow which glimmered even in the dull light, and a Golden Quiver that looked identical to the Bow. When Phoebe picked up the bow and quiver, she found them both to be exceptionally light with a strange picture engraved onto each item. When Priscilla saw the picture she gasped and tears began to dwell in her eyes - Though the moment of happiness wouldn't last very long.
James walked in the door with Sally and looked straight at Phoebe, whom had a new Bow and Quiver, and was holding both of them as she sat on the lounge. James eyes narrowed and he took the Bow and Quiver from Phoebe, though at one glance of the symbol on the side his entire face seemed to change. "I knew you were one of them..." he said - His tone being a lot darker, though that wasn't the strangest thing. The strangest thing was Sally who not only started laughing, but she appeared to be about 2 feet taller than when she walked in the door. Priscilla screamed as Phoebe blinked and James was now, not even human - Phoebe wasn't even sure if it was still James.
Before the young girl could do anything, she heard a loud crash and looked over towards her mother whom had just thrown a vase at James and was running towards her. James roared in agony and threw the Bow and Quiver away as Priscilla grabbed Phoebe and ran through the hallway. The new large figures of Sally and James made it harder for them to run through the door hallway. As Phoebe and Priscilla ran, Phoebe closed her eyes and began to pray - Hoping someone or something would be able to save her. Priscilla ran as fast as she could, holding tightly onto Phoebe where they ran out the backdoor and into the backyard - Heading towards the shed. As they reached the shed, Priscilla placed Phoebe down and as Phoebe ran towards the car, she realized her mother wasn't heading that way.
Priscilla lifted up a small rug to reveal a trap door, though the roar of James and Sally was louder - They were already in the yard. Phoebe glanced up and squinted, she thought she was seeing things. "Mummy..." she said softly "James and Sally have 3 eyes." she finished, though as she stared further she realized she had made a mistake - They didn't have 3 eyes, they only had 1 eye. Phoebe put her hands over her mouth to prevent herself from screaming when her mother spoke to her softly and ushered into the trap door and down into a tunnel which she had never known existed. As they ran, Phoebe heard her footsteps echo and when she went to put her hair back into a pony-tail, she realized she was wearing a hair clip which she didn't remember putting in.
Now that she thought about it, Phoebe didn't remember putting a backpack on either. Not pondering on the thought for any longer because she had other things to worry about, Phoebe followed her mother up a small ladder - "Mummy, where are we going? And what is this place?" she asked, her mother still moving forward but answered her - "We're going to a safe place. As for the tunnel, it was built by your father.... Your real father." she replied. Phoebe looked down at the trap door and saw the same symbol that was on her bow and quiver - But a brief moment of sadness hit Phoebe, she didn't have her bow or quiver because James had taken them from her. The young girl started to cry, though as her mother turned around, she screamed in terror and Phoebe had no idea why.
"You think I didn't know about the tunnel!?!" A dark voice called from behind Phoebe, and she recognized it almost immediately. When she turned, she saw him standing there about 10 meters away from her with Sally, though she didn't look like Sally now - And he didn't even look like James. The 2 Cyclopes advanced forward now as Priscilla hugged Phoebe tightly - They had no where left to go. When James reached them both, he raised his right hand and hit Priscilla, knocking both of the girls to the ground. Priscilla groaned in pain and Phoebe started to cry, though before the Cyclopes could advance, they both stopped and glanced up - As if they were in fear.
Suddenly, as if there were a thousand archers, dozens of arrows rifled from behind Phoebe and slammed into the 2 Cyclopes - Killing them almost instantly. Phoebe tried to get up, but struggled - Her head was spinning in a thousand different directions. "Hush my child." A soothing voice from behind her said softly, and as the young child slowly turned, she was met with a teenage girl who was only a few years older than her - But when Phoebe looked at her, she saw a breathtakingly beautiful girl who's eyes seemingly painted her story. Whilst she only looked like a teenager, Phoebe then realized she was far older than one, and she wasn't alone - About 14 girls scattered to check the area, all eventually coming back.
About 3 hours had passed, and after a long conversation with the female known as Artemis, Phoebe was quite slow to take it all in. Her father was a God by the name of Apollo, meaning Artemis was her Aunt. After another hour of talking with Artemis and her friends known as 'The Hunters', Phoebe's mother Priscilla was pronounced dead, the injury she sustained to the head was much to damaging for her fragile body. Phoebe cried and after a while, when her tears had turned into small sobs - Artemis made her an offer, to join as one of her Hunters. At first, Phoebe thought she may have liked the idea, to live forever and hunt monsters such as the ones that had attacked her and her mother.
But something changed her mind when she heard more about them, Phoebe wanted to have a child - Her own little girl to hold and cradle in her arms, and she already had a name planned out for it: Priscilla, just like her mother whom was a wonderful person. Artemis gracefully accepted Phoebe's choice and told her of a camp that was in New York, a special camp for children like her. A place where she would be safe, where she could grow up and a place where she would have brothers and sisters who were just like her. Phoebe liked the idea of this camp, and the thought of this camp was in her mind as she drifted off to sleep, thinking about what the camp would be like.
When Phoebe awoke the next day, she was hoping it would all be just a dream - Though when she saw where she was, she knew it wasn't. Phoebe realized that the conversation she had with Artemis was real, and remembered one of the last things they talked about - Camp Half-Blood. The only problem now was, Phoebe had to make her way to New York by herself, and she kinda knew that a 9-yr old would never be able to get there by herself, especially if many monsters like James and Sally were still out there.
5 years had passed of being on the run and Phoebe was now 14. A few things had happened in the last 5 years - But the main goal hadn't. Phoebe still made her way towards New York and on her travels she had acquired 2 small daggers which had the power to kill Monsters. There was also 2 others major things, firstly - The hair clip she had found in her hair that day was actually her Bow, it was magic and reformed itself into that - Though now it houses itself as a bracelet on her right wrist and all she has to do is give it a slight pull, to unleash the bow. The second thing is the backpack was actually the Quiver, it too was also magic - Both of these were gifts from her father and she cherished them dearly.
The backpack was still in that form, though it's design altered - Phoebe could simply reach back and pull an arrow from the bag without opening any pockets. Not only were these important things, but Phoebe was certain she wasn't alone and that her father was watching over her closely. It was obvious that he loved his Demigod children, and he would send down gifts in random forms to Phoebe when she needed them most - Which was something she loved about him. One of his more recent gifts was an arrow - Known as a Sonic Arrow, but this wasn't the only type of arrow she had. Phoebe had arrows for all different kinds of situations, and when she wished for them, they would come from her Quiver. The last monster Phoebe killed was a Spirit whom was attacking innocent people - Then decided it would attack her. It didn’t take her long to get into the groove of killing monsters, and so, this monster was like every other one that had come across her – The fight ending before it could really begin.
The young Demigod had lost count of how many monsters she had destroyed, but now: She had finally made it to New York. Phoebe was happy that she had made it here, it had been 5 long years and she was here at last. Not wanting to stay for too long in any one place, Phoebe continued moving towards the destination given to her by her Aunt Artemis. Along the years, Phoebe had come across monsters that had dropped money - But she'd also resorted to thievery to get herself here, it was something she wasn't proud of: But at the time, it was extremely necessary, especially after the supplies that her mother and Artemis left her had run out.
Phoebe got in the first cab and headed off. About an hour had passed and the sun had set when Phoebe realized she was almost there. She didn't know how, but it was as if a light was guiding her and she became nervous, but also extremely cautious. Phoebe paid the cab driver who wondered if she was in the right spot and as she exited the cab, Phoebe glanced up to see a tree sitting atop of a small hill - Though it wasn't the tree which caught her attention, or the huge mound of leaves in front of it: It was the shiny fabric which hanged over it... Then the weirdest thing happened, the pile of leaves moved by themselves and Phoebe realized it wasn't a pile of leaves, it was... A dragon, a living breathing Dragon.
Phoebe realized she had to be in the right place and proceeded up the hill cautiously, her bow in her hands and a piercing arrow notched and ready should she feel threatened by the beast - But she doubted she'd be able to much damage with her arrow. When she reached the top of the hill, Phoebe was breath taken by what she saw - The camp actually existed and here she was. Phoebe walked down the back of the hill slowly and was greeted by a girl whom was about 16, asking if she knew who her God parent was, however before Phoebe could respond the girl gasped and glanced up. She didn't know what this girl was doing and turned abruptly, but saw nothing, however when she looked up: Phoebe saw the same symbol as on her bow and quiver - The sign of Apollo, her father.
Phoebe felt tears dwell in her eyes and before she could wipe them, she blinked and they began cascading down her cheek. After 5 long and pain staking years, Phoebe had finally made it. From that little girl back home, to a teenager who had travelled to what seemed as the other side of the world, and it was all for this. Phoebe kissed the necklace around her neck, which was actually her mothers, and followed the teenage girl in front of her - As they both spoke about her adventures and what life would be like on the camp. Phoebe knew that out there somewhere, both of her parents were watching over her and though this made her feel sad that she wasn't with them - She was still eager to take the new challenge head on.Physical Appearance: Phoebe is currently 5 foot 4 inches tall, which is probably just above average for other kids her age. Phoebe has long and wavy hair which sits halfway down her back - Though she almost never wears her hair down, usually opting to wear it up in a ponytail as it can sometimes get in the way and bug her. Like her father, Phoebe has sandy colored hair which she does her best to look after and a bright smile, though not quite as cocky as he father's. Her skin is lightly tanned, giving her an olive complexion that is almost a warm and natural skin tone - Which goes well with her smile and often gets her age mistaken by many people, claiming her to be older than what she actually is.
Phoebe's body has never been seen by anyone but herself within the last 5 years, however she has quite an athletic looking figure - Keeping in shape with all the exercise she has done over the past few years. She wears a long black v neck shirt which goes down to just past her elbow, though over the top of that is a white cardigan with black trimming. On colder days or quests, Phoebe wears a long black Abercrombie snow jacket which cuts off at her waist - The sleeves travelling all the way down the length of her arms, and she is usually seen wearing thin black gloves with a 'P' on the back of the hands, this distinguishing her name as well as her mother's name.
Moving onto her legs, Phoebe has long sleek legs, though like the rest of her body - They are never seen. Phoebe wears long Black tights which are there to keep her warm because over the top of those she wears tight black jeans which hug tightly to her body, though she is still able to do everything normally with them on, like running and jumping. Phoebe has often been described as statuesque and beautiful, though she often ignores these remarks - Not wanting to bother about a relationship because she had better things on her mind to worry about. Phoebe wears simple but stylish black flat black shoes which protect her feet and keep them warm.
Aside from her basic clothing, Phoebe has a lot of accessories which she almost always wears. Phoebe has the golden bracelet around her right wrist - Which is actually her Bow. She has noticed that no matter what happens, the Bracelet always appears on her wrist. On her left hip is an 11-inch dagger which is made of Celestial Bronze that she often uses as a back up weapon should she find herself in close combat. On her back is a white Dinzeo back pack, that is actually her Quiver - Though it is magical and allows her to summon basic items, however, Phoebe is unable to summon many things at once as the bag will close itself automatically. Under the bag and hanging on an angel is a second 11-inch dagger that Phoebe can secretly pull out if she loses her other dagger or is unable to use her bow.
The last 2 features that Phoebe has, is: a Gold necklace she always wears - Which has a loveheart, a Bow and the letter 'P' on it. The necklace originally belonged to her mother, but after she passed away, Phoebe took the necklace as a reminder so that she would never forget her mother - Not that she would forget her anyway. The second feature is one that she is commonly seen with, though not always, and it is a small bamboo flute approximately 40 centimeters long, though the flute itself can seemingly sink into a small object which she sits inside the side pocket of her bag. Because her father is also the God of Music, she sometimes plays songs that she dedicates to him.Personality: Phoebe has a very mixed Personality. On one hand, she is extremely extroverted and loud - Often talking a lot or seen having long conversations with people, though on the other hand, she is also extremely cautious and weary of any new people she meets. This is mainly a result of what happened in the past with her step father as well as many of the other monsters she faced. Phoebe would describe herself as cute and lovable, but also extremely dangerous - She has many years experience with her Bow and Daggers, and possesses a dangerous arsenal of Arrows - But those whom are friends with her would find her extremely caring and loving, not to mention Protective.
Phoebe can easily become Sad or Angry at anyone or anything that may insult, harm or pose as a harm to one of her friends - Believing the bonds of friendship to be an extremely great and important thing that someone should hold very highly and dearly. Even though Phoebe may appear beautiful, she doesn't see herself that way, often saying she's very down to earth. She has high levels of compassion, as well as high levels of both Empathy and Apathy. Whenever possible, Phoebe will try not show Sympathy to people, as she believes Sympathy to be condescending and in her books, that's a very bad thing, as speaking down to someone can be extremely disrespectful.
Phoebe tries to show everyone the same level of respect regardless of who they are, however when she is annoyed or frustrated, this particular trait often eludes her and she can be extremely harsh and brutal. Phoebe is also extremely Stubborn and people would find it very hard, if not impossible for her to change her mind about something she believes deeply in. As well as being extremely Stubborn, Phoebe is also an extremely proud person - Which may be a good thing in her eyes, but can also be a terrible thing in the eyes of others. She often believes she can do anything, and can put herself and her friends in danger before she realizes her mistakes, though she is quick to apologize.
Not only this, but Phoebe seems to be a depressed child. Whilst appearing happy and bubbly on the outside, this is all just a facade to how she truly feels, which is usually sad and alone. After spending 5 years by herself and not trusting anyone, Phoebe has been able to successfully put up a strong shield which prevents people from knowing the real her... Which is both a good thing and a bad thing, but only time will tell if she'll ever be able to meet the right person.Fatal Flaw: Phoebe has 2 major Fatal Flaws. The first one is that she is extremely proud, commonly known as Hubris. Because of this, Phoebe believes that she is able to do anything and that nothing can stop her - But it is only after making a mistake that she realizes what she's done and how much danger she's put herself and her friends in, causing Phoebe to hate herself and expecting her friends to leave or abandon her so she would be alone again.
Her second Fatal Flaw is an extreme loyalty to go beyond the norm to risk anyone she cares about and bring them back to safety. Whilst this may seemingly contradict her first Fatal Flaw, Phoebe will often have both of these work hand in hand, believing she not only can save her friends - But she will save them. Both of these combined can either be extremely great, or extremely dangerous.
A few other flaws noticed in Phoebe is a) Her depression which sometimes hits her like a truck, causing her to not want to do anything but close her eyes and never wake up, and b) Phoebe possesses slight abilities of inferiority which can hurt her confidence - Though she knows that with a bit of confidence, she would be able to do anything she put her mind to.Pets: As much as she would like a pet, Phoebe doesn't have one because her last 5 years of travelling.Talents: Phoebe has numerous talents, the most obvious ones are with a Bow and Arrow, possessing a flawless aim, as well as with any form of Instrument that has ever been created due to her father. Phoebe also possesses an extensive knowledge into the Human Body and will often know how to heal any injury just by looking at it, which would also reflect on her father - But like most Apollo siblings, when there is an injury that is too great for her to heal, Phoebe plays a song to her father and he aids her in the healing process - Speeding it up exponentially.
Phoebe's last major talent is one she acquired from her Father and Aunt - She is able to control the flight path of her Arrows, as well as - With her special arrows - Detonate or Set them off whenever she pleases to allow for a complete surprise against her opponent. Like other Demigods, Phoebe has ADHD which causes her to be extremely fidgety but also means she has faster than normal reflexes which aid her greatly in battle - Though when Phoebe has a Bow, she finds her body doesn't shake, almost as if the ADHD is negated by the Bow. She can also fluently read Ancient Greek, because her brain has been "hard wired" for that specific reason, not English or any common languages.Weapons: Phoebe carries 3 main weapons with her - Those being her Golden Bow and her twin Celestial Daggers. However, aside from these weapons she also possesses her Golden Quiver as well as an almost unlimited supply of arrows which are supplied through the Quiver. Another thing Phoebe possesses is different types of arrows, though they all look the same, she only has to wish for the type of Arrow she wants and it will appear in her Quiver."Sonic Arrows" - Sonic Arrows produce an ear shattering sound when they're fired, and upon contact with any surface or if Phoebe should will it, the arrows produce a tremendous blast of sound. Because the balance part of the body is located in the ear, the sound usually disorientates the opponent and throws them completely off balance."Explosive Arrows" - Explosive Arrows detonate on contact to create a small explosion, mimicing that of a Hand grenade. Like the other arrows, Phoebe is able to will the Arrow to Explode when she wishes, or on contact with a surface. The explosion is large enough to kill multiple enemies, though she must be careful none of her allies are close by as she can't control the blast itself."Concussive Arrows" - Concussive Arrows work in the same way that Explosive Arrows do, however when they explode, they rely solely on large blunt force trauma to damage the target. Whilst they're stronger then an Explosive Arrow if they hit the target, Concussive Arrows lose tremendous amounts of force as the distance from the Explosion increases. Like the rest of the arrows, Phoebe can detonate this at will."Smoking Arrows" - Smoking Arrows work a bit like 'Fart Arrows', the only difference being: They release much more smoke and don't smell. When the smoking arrow detonates, whether by hitting something or by Phoebe's will, the Arrow immediately begins producing a thick cloud of smoke which severely narrows a person's vision and makes it harder to breathe - Though the smoke itself does no damage to a person or monster."Crying Arrows" - Crying Arrows are like Smoking Arrows in a way, though they differ. Crying Arrows release a strong smoke into the air which causes an extremely high irritation to the person's eyes, usually causing them to water up - Which is where they get their name from. If inhaled, they also cause discomfort to the throat, as well as the mouth and nose. Phoebe can willingly detonate this arrow, but if she is too close - The effects are the same on her as others."Burning Arrows" - Burning Arrows are not actually on fire, instead when they hit a target they release a quick burst of flammable gas within a 1 meter radius before subsequently igniting and burning at temperatures of over 2000 degrees centigrade. These arrows MUST his an object before the gas can be released, however the gas takes only a second to be released and ignited."Light Arrows" - Light Arrows can be detonated at any time by Phoebe, or when they hit a surface and once they detonate, they release a severe blinding flash of light - Activating all the cells in the eye and causing a complete blindness for approximately 4-5 seconds. As this happens, there is also an extremely loud bang that occurs, often to disorientate the opponent and throw them off balance."Spread Arrows" - Spread Arrows differ severely from other arrows, as they can only be triggered by Phoebe. Once triggered, the arrow head seemingly breaks down into approximately 15 smaller pieces of solid Celestial Bronze strapnel, each with the ability to pierce deeply into an opponent. The downside to this arrow, however, is that it rarely kills an opponent because the bits of metal are so small, meaning these are used mainly to maime and wound."Piercing Arrows" - Piercing Arrows are exactly how they sound. They're exactly the same as normal arrows, however they are capable of piercing through any surface in front of them, making them extremely lethal in battle but also very effective in wars as one could kill multiple enemies with a single shot."Shock Arrows" - Shock Arrows release a small burst of Electricty which doesn't actually kill the opponent, the electrical charge is more like that of a tazer and so - It causes all the muscles in the body to uncontrollably tense up for 10 seconds, leaving the opponent completely defenseless for you to either kill them, or for an easier retreat."Corrosive Arrows" - Corrosive Arrows, whether detonated by choice or when they hit a surface, release a thick liquid in all directions for 2 meters that has the power to melt and corrode just about anything, from human skin up to items harder than steel."Frozen Arrows" - Frozen Arrows are only released when they hit a surface, and once they do, the arrow head seemingly explodes but instead of burning the opponent, a large block of Ice materializes instantly, trapping the target in a large block of Ice."Glue Arrows" - Glue arrows are detonated by choice or hitting a target, and when they detonate, they release an extremely thick and sticky residue which sets after about 5 seconds and can become harder than cement. The Glue will lose it's stickiness after only about 15 seconds but completely immobilizes your opponent."Gust Arrows" - Gust arrows are triggered in midflight to detonate and when it does, it releases a sharp Gust of Wind designed to hit the opponent and throw them backwards about 5-10 meters, depending on their weight, as well as cause them to turn away and momentarily close their eyes - Making them good for distractions."Sleeping Arrows" - Sleeping Arrows can only detonate on a surface, and when they do, they release a Gas into the air which - When inhaled - Travels into the opponent's brain and causes them to first become drowsy before eventually falling asleep and becoming incapacitated. These arrows are perfect for capturing people or beasts."Rubber Arrows" - Rubber Arrows work differently to the other arrows. With Rubber Arrows, they don't do anything in particular, so they are like normal arrows - However - The arrows themselves will bounce off the first surface they hit and actually gain speed and momentum from it.(Note: These arrows are only available to this character aside from the 'Sonic Arrows' and as such require my permission to use - Which isn't hard to get, all you have to do is ask nicely :) )
Year-Round: Phoebe now lives at Camp and as such, this means she resides here all Year-Round.
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:02 am | |
| Awesome charrie! You're pet owl makes me remember Hedwig of Harry Potter. xD | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:06 am | |
| Haha, thank you.
And yeah, I only remembered that AFTER I had wrote it, but I've always wanted a Pet Owl in real life, but it's Illegal here - So I figured, might as well let my role play character have one. ^.^ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Thu Apr 21, 2011 3:07 am | |
| Looks good so i'll be saying accepted!
On a side note, an average 16 year old (from my experience) lounges about 130-150. 180 is like fat kid territory... (again from my own experience) Just letting ya know in case you want to make some changes : ) | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Thu Apr 21, 2011 3:10 am | |
| Err... I'm 6ft tall and weighing 180 pounds and I'd like to think of myself as not being fat... Lol, and according to my B.M.I test I actually fall under an ideal weight - But thank you anyway. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Thu Apr 21, 2011 3:25 am | |
| O.O
Wow then my school is a bunch of cheerio anorexics... AM I TOO THIN?? I'm only 127, but i'm 5'11".. Too lazy to look up = fattening myself up xD | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Thu Apr 21, 2011 3:28 am | |
| You have a BMI of about 17-18, that's perfectly normal. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Sat Apr 23, 2011 3:05 pm | |
| Bump for Second Character which needs approval. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Sat Apr 23, 2011 3:16 pm | |
| That is an incredibly amazing character but there's just a few things that I think would make him better.
Err, I think that the tungsten armor is a little too strong - especially if he's always wearing it. I'm alright with him having strong full body armor but I would prefer it if it were made out of a different, slightly weaker metal and if he only wore it sometimes. Also, I'm reluctant about his ability to predict what coming at him. I have to ask that you remove that ability, please, because having both that and the ability to slow things down around him is a bit powerful.
Otherwise, he's pretty awesome! |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Sat Apr 23, 2011 3:20 pm | |
| Well the Tungsten is an item of his father's, which was given to him - And he'd really only wear it to battle, which is the only time you'd actually see him... But I guess I can change it.
And also, his Grandfather is the God of Prophecy... So it makes sense for him to be able to see what will happen in his immediate future... | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Sat Apr 23, 2011 3:23 pm | |
| Most other children of Apollo stick to healing and archery though. I know of one that can see the future, but I think it comes to him in flashes or something. Even if it's 30 seconds, it makes all the difference and it isn't really fair to others. o u o |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Sat Apr 23, 2011 3:26 pm | |
| Apollo is the God of Prophecy, evident in the Last book, but I guess I can change it. I figured giving him a Fatal Flaw which basically nullified his abilities would counter act that... But nevermind. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Sat Apr 23, 2011 3:49 pm | |
| Lol, thanks... See what happens when you read the 'Fatal Flaws' properly? xD | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Sat Apr 23, 2011 3:50 pm | |
| I will not be hushed.... DX! | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Sun Apr 24, 2011 10:42 am | |
| I love the detail! Just the 'fatal flaw' section is like the size of my 'physical appearance' section for my characters. xD
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Sun Apr 24, 2011 12:22 pm | |
| Thanks, I plan on putting as much detail as possible with my Third character, and not just writing a bio with only half my maximum effort. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Wed Apr 27, 2011 2:03 pm | |
| I now have a Third Character which requires Approval.
Thank you. :D | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Wed Apr 27, 2011 6:14 pm | |
| Nice character! Only thing is that I don't think she should be able to heal injuries by looking at them since she does have various other abilities. However, I'm fine with her healing the minor injuries of other people with all the other talents she has other than the one I said. It's just that healing significant-ish injuries of others + healing of minor injuries of herself + flawless aim with a bow + never ending super cool arrows seems a little unfair, even with her fatal flaws taken into account. |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Wed Apr 27, 2011 6:50 pm | |
| Oh my gosh. That is probably the biggest character form on here. o-o | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Wed Apr 27, 2011 11:21 pm | |
| My bad with the wording... She was meant to be able to KNOW how to heal any injury by looking at it, and I edited it to say that.
I also removed the ability for her to heal small wounds from herself... Anything else you think needs changing or is she okay now? | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Thu Apr 28, 2011 6:42 am | |
| Nope, she's great now. o u o
Phoebe is accepted! |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Thu Apr 28, 2011 7:16 am | |
| I keep on laughing as I read it! You weren't kidding when you said how long it was! HHAHAHA! I'm weird. Awesome charrie (as usual) Freddie. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Third Character needs approval. Thu Apr 28, 2011 8:33 am | |
| Why would I joke about writing a 5.5k word bio? xD | |
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