Alexander's Characters. ( Made a New Titan Character, needs acceptance!)

I FIXED HIM! IS HE ACCEPTED??

I think the shadow travel should tire him out quite a bit, since it's tiring for even Hades kids.
But once you make that change he's Accepted.

MADE MAH TITAN CHARRIE!!

It's definitely a nice character, but let me just break everything down for you in each section of the format (i.e - Brief History, Weapons, etc.):

Brief History:
What's this Demi-God Academy you were speaking of? There's only two safe half-blood havens; one that is Greek, and one that is Roman, and we don't even know much about the Roman one at this point. There is no such thing as the 'Demi-God Academy', and I doubt there ever will be. Demi-gods go to regular schools, be it boarding schools or just going to school during the day.

In addition, I doubt some random guy would just pick him off the streets and start training him. Just think about it!
Athena would also not, under any circumstances, interfere with a child of Hyperion and give him a weapon. Like I said on your first character, the gods cannot interfere with any demi-gods path. On top of that, imperial gold is used by the Romans, not the Greeks at CHB. This particular part is somewhat overpowering him before anything else.

So all in all, I would strongly advise you to change his Brief History quite a bit.

Physical Appearance:
This part looks terrific! Well done. (:

Personality:
His personality seems alright. (:

Fatal Flaw:
I don't really see how that flaw could be particularly fatal. I could see how many other ones that you put into his personality could be fatal, but the one that you decided to be his fatal flaw isn't exactly fatal. I would consider revising it, perhaps using one of the ones you mentioned earlier in that section.

Talents:
Well, Hyperion is really the Titan of light, and has really nothing to do with fire. Two completely separate things. I would suggest taking out that fire part.

Weapons:
Well, I really already discussed this part with you in the Brief History.

And on top of all of that, I realize that you didn't send this to an administrator. For Big Three and Titan characters, both of them have to be sent to an administrator as an outline before anything can occur. Because you did not do this, we won't be accepting your character at the moment regardless. Sorry. ):

Well, I never actually knew that you had to send anything to an administator, and his fatal flaw could be very fatal. He doesn't like anyone so he's usually a loner. If he went on a quest, then he would go alone, causing injury and possibly death and he won't want help from anyone, so if he was trying to fix something he doesn't know how to fix, he could make a huge mess of things. Also, fire is light right? I expected that would be the case. Sorry for that. Also the Demi God Academy thing, I have a different site and I originally wrote that character for that site, and then I decided not to so I used it here and replaced all tried to replace all of them with Camp Half Bloods, I must have forgot some. Sorry. I'll fix all those things.

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*looks at characters in your siggy* Is Damien single? I think it would be funny for a son of Hades to be dating a daughter of Iris. Kinda like Opposites Attract, y'know?
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If he's not free, then I could try and snatch another one, if they're avaliable?

OMGEEZUS THIS IS MY FIRST CHARACTER TOPIC!!!! *MIND BLOWN*

And Damien is dead. Sorry!

Guest

*looks around* I suspected it looked old O.e

Anyways, would you mind sending the new one to meh? I'm too lazy to find it myself x3

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