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Ice
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Join date : 2011-03-09
 |  Subject: Ice's Characters  Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:32 am | |
| Approved Characters- Spoiler:
Name: Jake Ryan
Age/Birthday: Age: 15 Birthday: 21 January
Gender: Male
God Parent: Hecate
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Mother: Blake Ryan
Years in Camp: 6
Brief History: Jake Ryan was born in San Francisco, his father was working as an actor. When Jake was 4 years old, he asked his father about his mother but all that his father said was that her mother was away on a long business trip. At the age of 6, Jake was stalked by a cyclops wearing a large coat so he looked like a large sized man, when he told his father that the man had one eye in the middle of his forehead they immediately moved to New York the next day. Jake's dad died in a car accident when he was 8, he was sent to an orphanage and he lived there for the next year until he was 9 years old and attacked by a dracanae and brought to Camp Half-Blood by his friend who was a satyr but not before he was given a scar on his back. He has stayed in camp as a Year-rounder ever since then as he didn't want to go back to an orphanage.
Physical Appearance: Jake is of average height for a 15 year old with auburn colored hair, blue colored eyes, a creamy skin complexion and has a slim build. Jake always dresses in either the orange Camp T-shirt or a plain black T-shirt with either dark blue jeans or black jeans. Jake also has a scar on his back from his encounter with a dracanae before he joined the camp.
Personality: Jake is usually friendly unless he is irritated, angry or in a fight, he enjoys sleeping, practicing sword fighting and sparring with friends. Jake doesn't like being woken up to something meaningless, people that think their cool and noise when he is just woken up. Jake doesn't mind being a leader or a follower but prefers being a follower as it is less troublesome to him.
Fatal Flaw: Personal Loyalty
Pets: N/A
Talents: Sorcery, Witchcraft, Sword fighting.
Weapons: A ring that turns into a celestial bronze sword and shield when Jake wants it to.
Year-Round or Summer: Year-rounder
Other: Jake's clothes are enchanted to turn into armor when he wants to as well. His specialties in sorcery is Darkness magic and fire magic. Jake's proficiency in magic is quite high as he has been at camp for 6 years already.
- Spoiler:
Name: Ken Hayes
Age/Birthday: Age: 16 Birthday: April 17
Gender: Male
God Parent: Khione
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Father: Alfred Hayes, Twin Brother(Also in Camp): Shun Hayes
Years in Camp:4
Brief History: Ken was born in Quebec with his twin brother Shun, they were taught French by their father but Ken was lousier at it then Shun though both of them knew it well enough for their age, at the age of 5 they moved to California due to their Father having to go there for a buisness trip, they had to change from speaking French to English. English was hard for Ken at first but he caught on quickly, he prefered using it more then French. At the age of 10, Shun and Ken were attacked by a monster, they told their father about it and they moved to New York. The next school Ken joined had a bully he hated in it, one day he got into a fight with him. Ken won easily the bully easily but he was kicked out of the school the next day because the bully's friends made up a story that made Ken seem like the one that started the fight, his brother was also kicked out but Ken didn't know why he was(He wasn't listening). At the age of 12, Ken and Shun were attacked by a monster in school, their friend John, who was a satyr, helped them escape and make it to Camp Half-blood unharmed and has stayed there as a Year-rounder ever since.
Physical Appearance: Ken is of average height for someone of his age. He has messy black hair, a pale complexion and coffee brown eyes. Ken has a thin build. Ken usually dresses in the Orange Camp half-blood T-shirt or dark colored plain T-shirts with dark blue or black jeans.
Personality: Ken is a friendly person who is rather laidback but quick tempered and has a tendency to start fights when he is angry. Ken values all of his friends greatly and hates to see them sad, if any of his friends were being bullied or hurt Ken would defend them and fight whoever was bullying or hurting them. Ken hates bullies and people who boast about something a lot. Ken likes cold places, sleeping, training and sparring with friends.
Fatal Flaw: Personal Loyalty.
Pets: N/A
Talents: Winter Wind, Snow and Ice control, sword fighting and hand to hand combat skills.
Weapons: A necklace that turns into a Celestial Bronze sword whenever he wants.
Year-Round or Summer: Year-round
Other: N/A
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|  | | Inaniloquist
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| | Subject: Re: Ice's Characters Thu Mar 10, 2011 7:26 pm | |
| Welcome to CHB! I'm Inan, an admin here, if you have any questions, feel free to PM me.
Do you mind explaining your character's fatal flaw as well as his proficency in magic?
Otherwise, your character is really well made! | |
| | | | Ice
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| | Subject: Re: Ice's Characters Fri Mar 11, 2011 12:53 am | |
| Well my character's fatal flaw is basically the same as Percy's and as for his proficiency in magic could we discuss this is pms? I'm not really sure what the limits for it are yet so i want to discuss it with you or another admin. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Ice's Characters Fri Mar 11, 2011 1:06 am | |
| Nice charrie! And welcome to camp! I like your charrie! Wish you could rp soon! | |
| | | | Ice
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| | Subject: Re: Ice's Characters Fri Mar 11, 2011 1:08 am | |
| Thanks, i hope i can rp soon too. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Ice's Characters Fri Mar 11, 2011 9:33 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Ice's Characters Sat Mar 12, 2011 10:34 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Ice's Characters Tue Mar 15, 2011 9:15 am | |
| Ah, sorry, you need around four sentences for the physical appearance section. Also, maybe describe his personality a little more and add a few more flaws? I'm also not so sure whether flying is a Khione talent or not.. xD |
| | | | Ice
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| | Subject: Re: Ice's Characters Tue Mar 15, 2011 9:32 am | |
| Added a little bit more for physical appearance and personality, as for the flaws it says Fatal flaw right? I believe that every demigod has only one fatal flaw. As for the flying part, Khione is the daughter of the wind god Boreas so i thought maybe i could fly like Jason could in the lost hero. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Ice's Characters Tue Mar 15, 2011 9:37 am | |
| Demigods need only one fatal flaw, this is their greatest flaw - the one that may lead to their demise. However, it's encouraged to have your character have more flaws described in the "personality" section of the template. True, Khione is the daughter of Boreas but by herself, she is the goddess of snow, so who the god's parents are really has no effect on the powers of the god's children. For examply, Athena is the daughter of Zeus, yet children of Athena can't shoot off lightning bolts of their free will. xD |
| | | | Ice
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| | Subject: Re: Ice's Characters Tue Mar 15, 2011 10:03 am | |
| Alright added a few flaws and removed the part about me being able to fly. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Ice's Characters Tue Mar 15, 2011 10:04 am | |
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