Hi Josh, welcome to CHB! Before you start creating characters, be sure to read through all the rules of the Forum thoroughly so you know exactly what to do.
We don't allow any user to obtain a demigod of the Big Three until they have made a significant impact on the Forum - namely, have around 500+ posts, be well known, be a great asset in roleplays; things like that. I suggest either change your demigod to one of the 12 Olympians, or perhaps just a minor god or goddess that's easy to work with.
Another thing, be sure to have your information for your character at least four sentences long, and be sure to include every single detail possible so you make a well rounded character, which is easy to RP with. Also, be sure to have correct grammar, as well as correct spelling.
When you make a different character, please elaborate more on the Brief History; don't focus in on how the character was claimed, but moreover how they spent their life before they came to CHB. For example, what they did as a child and how it tied into their Olympian parent, their relationship with relatives and friends, and things as such. Elaborate more on the Physical Appearance as well -- namely how tall (feet and inches), and put in as much detail as you can. Do this as well for the Personality. If you were to elaborate on what you have now, say how the character was funny, and don't say things repetitively. And you should put what they wear in the Physical Appearance section.
I think that's it, I'll check back on this topic soon to see if you edited your character or not. As of now, this character is still under construction.
Subject: joshfletcher's characters (revised again) 
Sun Feb 20, 2011 9:04 pm
