Hayhay0613's characters (need approval)

Name: Lucas Johnson
Age: 15
God Parent: Nike
Mortal Parent: Michael Jonhson
Gender: Male
Years in camp: 3
Breif History: Lucus was born when Nike met
Michael Johnson, a proffesinal baseball player
Weird things happened to him a lot. He
never knew why the happened. One day
a sphinx attacked his school. He didn't know
the answer but a styr helped him defeat
it and he fled to Camp Half-Blood.
Phisical Appearence: He has shaggy blond hair
and chocolate brown eyes. He stands at about
5''11 and doesn't really care about clothes.
He normally wears comfertable clothes so
he can play sports.
Personality: He is very proud and hates admitting
he's wrong. He also is very determined.He works
very hard but sometimes over-works. He us pretty
anti-social, but if you do become his friend he us
very helpful with helping you reach your goals.
Weapons: He has a double-sided bronze sword.
Pets: none
Talents: He is very athletic.
Other: None


Name: Abigail "Abby" Kackrue
Age:12
God Parent: Athena
Mortal Parent: Marcus Kackrue
Gender: Female
Years in camp: This is her first year.
Breif History: Abby was born after Athena met
Marcus Kackrue, an inventor. She was able to live
In the normal world until she was 12, when a hydra
attacked her at her grandmother's house.
That's when her father the truth about her and
sent her to Camp Half-Blood.She was just claimed
last month.
Personality: Abby is a very social person and always
tries to make new friends. She doesn't resent her mother
at all for leaving her and her father. Sometimes she
can get a little bit of a pest and talks a littleto much though, and she really can't get over the
perfect image of people she has in her head. Once you get
past all that though, you have a very caring and loyal
friend.
Physical Appearence: Abby has long brown hair that goes
to the small of her back and stormy grey eyes. She stands at
about 5''6 and is pretty skinny. She can normally be found wearing
bright colors and simple clothes.
Talents: She is very smart and a very good
stratigist.
Pets: She has a pet parokeet named Lulu.
Other: none

Pretty good for a beginner. Nice character too, I hope she is accepted! (:

Thanks!

A concisely written character, well done!
However, I'm just wondering about one thing... In the personality, when you say she can get a little bit annoying. What is it that you mean by that? Does she talk to much, or is she too loud? Don't forget there are a lot of ways to be annoying XD

Inaniloquist wrote:

A concisely written character, well done!
However, I'm just wondering about one thing... In the personality, when you say she can get a little bit annoying. What is it that you mean by that? Does she talk to much, or is she too loud? Don't forget there are a lot of ways to be annoying XD

Oh I mean she's a little annoying because she
talks and asks questions way too much

Accepted.