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daughterofhades123




Posts : 1
Join date : 2011-01-03
Age : 28
Location : New york city

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PostSubject: daughterofhades123's characters   daughterofhades123's characters I_icon_minitimeMon Jan 03, 2011 5:36 pm

Name:Sonny Sunnyday
Age/Birthday:8 B-day: 8/20/02
Gender:girl
God Parent:undetermined
Mortal Parent: Amber Sunnyday
Years in Camp:first year
Brief History: killed an empousai that pretended to be my school teacher
Physical Appearance:Blonde hair,fair skin,eyes as blue as the sky,pretty white dress.
Personality:Kind, yet silent at times,friendly,caring, easily trusting.
Pets: a beautiful pegasus(not at camp)
Talents:Beautiful with music, helpful when someone needs help,and good with a bow and arrow.
Weapons: Bow and a quiver full of arrows
Other: Flow of light is brighter around me
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tethys
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Posts : 4230
Join date : 2010-05-13
Age : 26

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PostSubject: Re: daughterofhades123's characters   daughterofhades123's characters I_icon_minitimeMon Jan 03, 2011 5:48 pm

Try adding more detail. You'll need to add a fatal flaw, or a couple flaws. You also should add a color to your character. Anyways, welcome to the site and hope this helped :)
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selene
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selene


Posts : 3995
Join date : 2010-04-01
Age : 25
Location : I have no idea. I just woke up here, dude.

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PostSubject: Re: daughterofhades123's characters   daughterofhades123's characters I_icon_minitimeSat Jan 08, 2011 6:49 pm

Tethys is right. You need way more detail in your character form. Especially in the brief history. That tells us nothing about your character. You need a few flaws and a fatal flaw. It's not really telling us a lot about your character.
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