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What's a Good Opening Sentence for My Story?
Penelope ran away when she was 13.
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Penelope lives in a alternate universe, where faries exist and life happens in unbelievable ways.
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Imagine yourself in an alternate universe.
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jessica
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PostSubject: STORY!!! STORY!!!!!!   STORY!!! STORY!!!!!! I_icon_minitimeFri Dec 31, 2010 2:55 am
HELLO! I'm writing a story. The only problem is I need a good opening sentence that will hoot the reader and make them want more. Please answer the poll and leave comments below.
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tethys
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PostSubject: Re: STORY!!! STORY!!!!!!   STORY!!! STORY!!!!!! I_icon_minitimeFri Dec 31, 2010 10:39 am
I like "Penelope ran away when she was 13." because the other choices introduce the story too quickly. That's something you want to tell as you go along. If someone saw that she lived in a fairy universe right away, they'd automatically think "weird." But with the first one, it gives the reader some suspense, like, "Why did she run away," or "Where did she run to?". Just my opinion :)))
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jessica
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PostSubject: Re: STORY!!! STORY!!!!!!   STORY!!! STORY!!!!!! I_icon_minitimeSat Jan 01, 2011 1:25 am
Thanks for your input.
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Colby
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PostSubject: Re: STORY!!! STORY!!!!!!   STORY!!! STORY!!!!!! I_icon_minitimeSun Jan 02, 2011 9:54 pm
You think this is the only place on earth. But Penelope knows better. She ran away and pretty much just fall off this wolrd. She in a alterive universe. Penelope knows.
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Location : Cali Baby!! nah, just kidding.

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PostSubject: Re: STORY!!! STORY!!!!!!   STORY!!! STORY!!!!!! I_icon_minitimeSun Jan 02, 2011 10:21 pm
I like Penelope ran away when she was 13.

I also like your signature.
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