Jason Darkblade's Charries

Name:Jason Darkblade
Age/birthday:15
Gender:Male
Years in camp: just beginning
God parent:Ares
Mortal parent: Alexandria Darkblade
Physical appearance: Short, jet black hair; cold emotionless eyes; slightly tan; 6 feet tall; 130 pounds slightly skinny but strong. Usually wears a black tee and a jet black cap and black jeans.
Personality: cold and unforgiving except towards his friend where he is then slightly caring but not a whole lot. Also he doesn't care if his friends does something bad to him.
Pets: He currently has only a lizard
Weapons: A sword made out of celestial bronze
Talents: Fighting with a sword
Other:no
History: Born normal like a regular mortal. Had normal demigod grades Ds and Cs. It was not until he was 15 he ran away. He then came across another demigod named Mason Grayback. They both traveled together until they came to half-blood hill.
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Pretty basic but he had left only 6 schools partially because he got enough referrals to get kicked out of school.
With his personality he has almost no friends except for Mason, And doesn't care for any more friends.
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By unforgivable I mean when someone does something to him he will remember and never forgives them if it was something bad to him. Also for cold that means he doesn't care for anyone but himself making people not like him and thus no friends except for Mason

Oh jeez...don't we have enough ruthless characters?

I think it needs to be more discriptive on physical Appearance and Personality.

I agree with Alphy on it. And he needs flaws. Not all characters are perfect. Psh, none are.

Try morphing what you already have. He's new, right? Maybe el-desperato for friendship, or shy. Maybe he's rude to everyone, which gets him in trouble. Does he want friends? Ever nice? Weakness or fatal flaw? Pet-peve(s)?

For physical appearance, I'd like to know his weight and height. How does he dress? Certain colors? Any scars or bruises?

Also, try to describe his weapon. Celestial bronze? Copper? Lead? Metal? Iron? How's the base of it? How is it shaped and how long? Named anything?

Try adding some more things to him! Maybe a history! That way, it's easier for people to roleplay with you!

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Better, but maybe some more info on his personality.

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He is also my next charrie a son of thanatos

The personality is still too short.

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Eh, better.

But am I accepted?

Wait for a member with a blue name to check you and they have the final say.

I know, Pooh-Bear.

Could a mod or Admin come and see if my charrie can be accepted?

You say he's both short and 6 ft. 6 ft. tall is the exact opposite of short. He's Gary-Stu-ish. Talents: pick three of those weapons, please.
A Stygian Iron and Celestial Bronze sword would be practically impossible to fight with and loose. Stygian Iron is more Hades/death parent, so Celestial Bronze is your best sword pick.

Koala wrote:

You say he's both short and 6 ft. 6 ft. tall is the exact opposite of short. He's Gary-Stu-ish. Talents: pick three of those weapons, please.
A Stygian Iron and Celestial Bronze sword would be practically impossible to fight with and loose. Stygian Iron is more Hades/death parent, so Celestial Bronze is your best sword pick.

Koala, I don't want to be rude or anything, but I thought I should mention something about your post. You might want to take another look at Darkblade's character. It is a little confusing, but if you look at if carefully you will see that he meant short jet black hair. Also, wouldn't children of Ares have great skills with all weapons with little training.

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Could some check my charrie?

Can some one please check my charrie. Sorry for the triple posting.

Cool charrie

Accepted.

Thanks.