My dad is poseidon's carachter(s)

Name:
Jason Frazier

Age/birthday:
About 12 and January 26

Gender:
Male

Years in camp:
1 to 2 years mostly year rounder

God parent:
poseidon

Mortal parent:
Sally Frazier

Physical appearance:
Messy black hair, and about 4 feet 7, Jeans, and a black hoodie

Personality:
Nice (But dont make him mad), tends to walk around, and practice fighting

Pets:
No pets

Weapons:
2" long Censitle Bronze knife called swift

Talents:
anything thats got to do with water

Other:
nothing really

Unfortunately you cannot have Canon Charries included anywhere in your charrie so Sally is out of question, plus you cannot have a Big Three child until you are a active member/poster and have permission from an Admin & have send an outline of the character to them.

The detail in this template is very very bad, you will have to be more detailed if you want your character accepted by a admin/mod.

Not a lot of detail, and you cannot have a child of a Big Three god : | Do people read the rules anymore? I don't see why you think you can have Percy's mom your characters mom either -_-

Denied.

Ok sorry ill make a new carachter and change my last name on jason

His god parent can't be Poseidon.

His only personality can't just be Nice.

Name:
Jacob Burrow

Age/birthday:
13 birthday is Febuary 2 the 2

Gender:
Male

Years in camp:
1

God parent:
Unclaimed

Mortal parent:
Sara Burrow

Physical appearance:
Mostly shorts, Blue hoodie,and blond hair

Personality:
Depends on the day

Pets:
None

Weapons:
A sword

Talents:
Shooting a bow and arrow, and sword fighting, also gret at riding pegusi

Other:

You still need more detail!

That's all I can think of What needs more detail Fine ill try to get this done right :D

Just read other templates, like Colby's or mine :D

Yeah it's not that hard.

The main place where you need to add detail would be in personality. You simply mention that his personality changes during the day, but you don't really say what those personalities are.

You just have to say what he's like in the morning, noon, night, whatever. Also, just as a reminder, fatal flaw. Gotta have one of those.

For physical appearance, all you mainly say is about what he wears. Explain more.