Dean's Character List.

Oh awesome, I just make up my names, didnt think of that before I made them. Ya know not the brightest hahaha.

Dean Straga

Age/birthday: 15, December 14th 1997
Gender: Male

Years in camp: 3rd Year.
God parent: Ares, God of war and battle strategy
Mortal parent: Eleanor Straga (Not played in game)

Physical appearance: He has brown/blond hair and always spikes it up. His eyes are greenish but turn black when he uses his powers/talents. He si also tall and muscular but not unattractively so. He had a light tan just like Max.
Personality: Find out.

Pets: He is allergic to any kind of fur or feathers so he doesn't really see or touch animals.
Weapons: He has a thick two-handed sword which he has on his back and.

Talents: He knows a lot about wars and strategy which his inherited from his father. Because of that he can win mostly any battle unless going against someone with the same talent, then he mostly fights until they both collapse.
Other: His best friend Max is a demigod aswell and they are like twins. They have a brain connection but they can 'turn it off' if they want.



Age/birthday: 16, August 10th 1997
Gender: Male

Years in camp: 3rd Year
God parent: Ares, God of war and battle strategy
Mortal parent: Katharine Gregory (Not played in game)

Physical appearance: He has short blonde hair. His eyes are bright blue but turn black when he uses his powers/talents. He is tall and muscular but not unattractively so.
Personality: Find out.

Pets: No pets.
Weapons: He has two shorter thin swords so he can use both at the same time.

Talents: He knows a lot about wars and strategy and speed and strength is enhanced because of it which his inherited from his father. Because of that he can win mostly any battle unless going against someone with the same talent, then he mostly fights until they both collapse.
Other: His best friend Dean is a demigod aswell and they are like twins. They have a brain connection but they can 'turn it off' if they want.

Update of my first Dean and Max characters!

nice

Thanks :D

but of course! :P

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OMG thanks xD

CST

Wha? xD

ya I'm like what? whass that mean?

Charrie's songs:

Lizzie:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fxq8Y30b3OI&NR=1

Crischaela:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sjSG6z_13-Q

Dean:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pM94vtaR0K0

Max:

https://www.youtube.com/watch#!v=e82VE8UtW8A&feature=related

songs?

Yeah, describes them alittle.

Love 'em!

cool!

Thanks :D

Dean Straga wrote:

Name: Daniël Black
Panan's Notes EP 1: A NEW CRITISISM STYLE
Age/birthday: 18, June 29th 1992
Gender: Male

Years in camp: 6 Years
God parent: Odyne.
Mortal parent: Jackson Black.

Physical appearance: He has short blonde hair and green eyes, green eyes. He is tall and muscular, very muscular. yeah, this dosen't need to be here. unless he's some kind of body builder i guess :P
Personality: Very distant and ignorant. He barely speaks and has a hard shell.
Pets: No pets.

Weapons: He has few daggers hanging from his leather X belt over his chest and two swords I FROWN UPON MULTIPLE WEAPONScalled Demeter and Ares because he had once fought along side them with other demigods. good explanation, but you could be a bit more clever with the naming.
Talents: He is a amazing fighting making even some Ares kids hesitate because Ares himself had trained him for some reason. NEEDS AN EXPLANATION. ALSO, THIS SEEMS OUT OF CHARACTER FOR ARES. He inherited something big from his Mother. needs a' da' splainin' again He can create an illusion of pain (Think Jane from Twilight saga). He simply glances and they crumble to the floor whithering in pain if he wants to. godmod. Flaws: He uses his talents to much making alot of people hate him. Also he had to do it to Erebus LITERAL GODMOD when he had to see Nyx and talk to her so now Erebus wants to kill him as soon as Zeus would give him permission which he is never going to get gods like to break the rules, if you haven't noticed since Zeus uses him alot.

that's all folks

nice!

Edited the flaws and all :D

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So he is like friends with Nyx?

Not really, she doesn't hate him or like him but needs him at certain times I dunno xD

Your character is kind of overpowered and could cause a lot of unfair situations.
Please tone down your characters powers or give him some drawbacks.