◆ hi!,
--------------Welcome, but the way, call me Hannah or Han please. :) And, I just have a few pointers!
--------------Ok, first, you say Allie has a twin who is a demigod, correct? Well, you'd need to fill out ANOTHER form for her as well, since she counts as another character.
--------------Also, your length on everything is good, but just to make them better, you could go into depth more. Add what their childhood was like, how they acted with their father and siblings, and even how they got to Camp. And also, same for personality and appearance. Go into depth more, what do they wear, weight, height, stuff liek that. And maybe explain why the nickname 'chatterbox' describes her so well.
--------------Also, for talents, maybe you could explain then better. How do they dance so well? Did they take lessons as children? That could go into history, and reading. How is reading a talent? Do they read very fast? Or, if they just enjoy reading, then put that with maybe personality, you know, as a hobby. And also, include a little power. What did they inherit from their goddess mother? Are they good in battle? Are they very smart? Thant kind of thing.
--------------Of course, I am not responsible for accepting characters, so you don't HAVE to listen to me. But, those are just some pointers! Hope you have an awesome time here! :3
MODBREAK: THE TWIN DOES NOT NEED AN APPLICATION UNLESS YOU PLAN ON RP'ING WITH THIS CHARACTER TO. IF NOT THE TWIN IS AN NPC.
Subject: Allie101300's characters 
Mon Aug 27, 2012 7:11 pm
