Anna's Puppets (REVAMPED)

Active Characters

Maddison Benson-16

Gracie Kaiser-14

Allison Daren-17

Angel Deen-16

Onyx Nightshade-17

Alice "Dream" Rae-16

Songs

The Girl Next Door(My Babysitter's A Vampire Theme Song)

We Are Never Ever Getting Back Together (Taylor Swift)

Smile(Avril Lavigne)

Everybody Hurts(Avril Lavigne)

Little Lion Man (Mumford and Sons)

Darlin' (Avril Lavigne)

Colors

Purple

Pink

Maroon

White

Dark Blue

Red

Quotes

"Read, it will stop me from buying the 'I'm with the Stupid' t-shirt."

"Don't make me turn you into a pebble."

"I may be a love child, but don't bring up the stupid subject."

"I can read your aura like an open book."

"Leave me alone, or I'll send you down to my dad."

"Don't be afraid to be yourself. Be afraid to be someone else."

Love Life

Single

Single

Single(Dibbed)

Single

Single(Dibbed)

Single

Basic Info

Age:14

Birthday:September

Gender:Female

Godly Parent:Hecate

Claimed:Yes

Years in Camp:7

Year-Round or Summer:Year-Round

Pets:Mitten (kitten)

Spoiler:

History

Brief History: Gracie grew up in Virginia, near Washington D.C. Her father was fairly rich. She got every toy and trinket she wanted. Her father never mentioned her mother. He knew about Hecate, and didn't want Gracie to go to camp. Gracie was pretty popular in school. She got decent grades and did gymnastics after school. When she was 7, she began casting spells without realizing it. Her father could see that she needed help. So he gave in eventually and sent her to camp.


Family Members:Aaron Kaiser (father)

Appearance


Physical Appearance: Long, straight, brown hair. Tan skin. Dark brown eyes. Oval face. Pierced ears.

Style: Gracie is a tomboy. Her favorite store is Hot Topic. She loves wearing graphic tees, shorts, hoodies, and hightops. http://www.polyvore.com/grace-lauren_outfit/set?id=52704086

Jewlery: Gracie wears rubber bracelets and plastic pins with funny sayings and jokes on them. She wears fancy or funny necklaces.

Personality

Personality: Gracie is a really fun person. She cracks everyone up. She's rarely serious. She loves making new friends and introducing herself. She's a people person.

Fatal Flaw:Her lack of seriousness

Misc

Theme Song:

Spoiler:

Weapon of Choice: Dagger

Grace is ACCEPTED

But for the next character you make, could you try using some complex sentences for sections like personality? So instead of 'She cracks everyone up' you could have 'Grace is the life of the party and everywhere she goes she cracks people up.' It just gives the character more depth and makes it easier to see her personality. Other than that I thought she was a nice character :]

Alice "Dream" Rae

The Basics

Age: 16

Birthday: December 21st

Gender: Female

Godly Parent: Athena

Claimed: Yes

Years in Camp: 3

Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round

Pets: Several animals she sees in the forest. Kind of pets. Each have names.

History

Brief History: When Alice was little, she always talked about her dreams. Every morning she would retell them to her stepmom and her dad at breakfast. So she got nicknamed Dream. Alice went through life with not that many problems. She had ADHD, but it wasn't that severe. She was extremely smart, and was always put in advanced classes. Alice never really was bothered by monsters. When she was around thirteen, her dad decided to tell her about mom. He gave Alice two options. One, stay at home and continue life as a normal teenager. Or, go off to a camp for demigods where she could learn how properly act and learn to use her powers. Alice decided to go to Camp Half Blood. But she still visits her family for every holiday like Thanksgiving, Christmas, Halloween, Easter, etc.


Family Members: Darren Rae (father), Christina Gardener Rae (stepmom)

Appearance

Physical Appearance: Long dark brown hair with red streaks. Pale skin. Normally wearing eyeliner and red lipstick. She has brown, sweet eyes.


Style: Alice dresses like her personality, sweet and wholesome. She loves the color red. She likes wearing lace a lot. She doesn't really care about shoes or pants, so she wears jeans and flats. http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=59608468

Jewlery: Cool indie necklaces and interesting earrings.

Personality

Personality: Alice is really sweet. She's really friendly. Alice will make you laugh when you feel awful. She smiles all the time. But she does get nasty when people are out of line, rude, etc. She isn't perfect. For a long period of time Alice believed her real mom had died in a car crash so she hates cars. She screams when she sees texting while driving and that kind of stuff. She yells at people alot about them too. Also, Alice is a vegetarian so does get annoying with the whole, "You must be one too, think of the animals!" stuff.

Fatal Flaw: Her lack of agression and violence.

Misc

Talents: Organizing, mathematics, singing, and archery.

Theme Song:

Spoiler:

Weapon of Choice: Bow and Arrow

Well, I only have two problems with your character, Anna. While describing her personality, it was a bit Mary-Sueish, and you starred out a swear in there. If you could remove the swear and replace it with something like 'crap' 'poop' etc, that'd be great. Also, you didn't include a powers section.