Ryan McHale
Posts : 122
Join date : 2012-04-22
Location : Camp half-blood
 |  Subject: Looking for the right sword and maybe shield  Sun Jun 10, 2012 1:52 pm | |
| He walked in and headed over to the swords there were silver and a bronze one.He picked the bronze one up and started swinging it around he by accident cut a kid's hair but he did not notice Ryan headed over to the bows and arrows he picked one with a bronze bow and bronze arrows he picked it up and put it over his shoulder.He grabber a shield and it turned into a coin and his sword turned into a watch he kept all the weapons than walked out smiling three weapons a bow and arrow with sword and shield.He past a kid and his hair was cut off.That's the kid who he cut his hair off. | |
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➴ Katniss Everdeen
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Posts : 3533
Join date : 2011-07-23
Age : 25
Location : The Hunger Games Arena
| | Subject: Re: Looking for the right sword and maybe shield Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:38 pm | |
| Ok, I know you have periods, but there's not any puncuation, and a lot of grammar mistakes. I know I'm not an Admin or a Mod, I'm just trying to help! Because correct grammar is a rule for posting. Thanks! | |
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Ryan McHale
Posts : 122
Join date : 2012-04-22
Location : Camp half-blood
| | Subject: Re: Looking for the right sword and maybe shield Mon Jun 11, 2012 7:34 am | |
| Okay and next time just pm me cause you messed up my post or just delete your post. | |
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