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PostSubject: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeThu May 24, 2012 8:05 pm

Name: Kimberly (Kim or Kimmy) Walker

Age/Birthday: 17, July 22

Gender: Female

God Parent: Khione

Claimed: Yes

Mortal Family: Robert Scott (Father) Olivia Scott (Step mom)

Years in Camp: First

Brief History: When Kim was younger, her mom left. So she was alone with her dad. He got remarried to Olivia Scott. Olivia was nice but when she found out that Kim's dad was a criminal she left him. At age 11, Kim saw her dad rob a bank. When she was 17 they found the money and he was arrested. Before they could send her off to an adoption center, she ran away to Camp Half Blood.

Physical Appearance: Kimberly has red hair. She is not short or tall. Kim, is like medium size when it comes to height.Kim is about 5 feet and 5 inches. She is the average size. She has brown eyes. Her skin color is fair.

Personality:Kimberly is friendly and lovable. She tries to forget the past and move on. She is very laid back, but loves to be wild and have fun. She is shy, but after meeting you for a bit, she will warm up to you.

Fatal Flaw: She always wants to help, but she often lacks the knowledge and hurts others.

Pets: She has a dog named Pinky.

Talents: Kimberly can surf and swim. She is good with water sports.

Weapons: She has a pocket knife that is blue.

Year-Round or Summer: Year Rounder

Other: Nope


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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeThu May 24, 2012 8:06 pm

Name: Kelly Brooks

Age/Birthday: 18, February 3

Gender: Female

God Parent: Hermes

Claimed: Yes

Mortal Family: Daniel Brooks (father) A.J. Brooks (sister) Kaitlyn Brooks (sister)

Years in Camp: First

Brief History: When Kelly was 2 her mom couldn't the care of everything so she left. Her mom was very stressed because she just got promoted to supervisor at her job. Plus, she had a new boyfriend named Randy. Randy got along very well with the three girls. But, soon left her for a richer lady. To make things worse, Kaitlyn disappeared. When Kelly was 8 and A.J. was 7 they found Kaitlyn dead. A.J. went to live with her grandma years after at age 10. Kelly ran away to Camp Half Blood.

Physical Appearance: Kelly has blond hair that is wavy. She has hazel eyes and fair skin. She has a beauty mark behind her neck. She is tall and thin.

Personality: Kelly is bubbly and fun. She has many friends and is a winner. She is caring and if you touch her she will hit you back. Even though she may have a temper she sell is lovable and friendly.

Fatal Flaw: Kelly is very temper mental. She only has a temper if you take something away from her or touch her. She is over-protective of her sister A.J.

Pets: Kelly has a pitbull named Max.

Talents: Kelly can sing and dance. She loves to perform too.

Weapons: Kelly has a bow arrow.

Year-Round or Summer: Year-Rounder

Other: None


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[center]Name: Bella Jones

Age/Birthday: 13 June 15

Gender: Female

God Parent: Athena

Claimed: Yes

Mortal Family: Davis Jones (brother), Frank Jones (dad).

Years in Camp: First year

Brief History: When Bella was just 3, his mom left her. She was alone with her dad and brother Davis. Her father and her were never close. He worked 24/7. And when he was home, he was with his new girlfriend, Monica. Monica was very nice and kind. She seemed two faced though. Then on there one year anniversary she dumped him for a doctor. He became a mess and Bella wanted nothing to do with him. so she said to her brother he could stay or come with her. He stayed. So Bella packed her bags and said goodbye.

Physical Appearance: Bella has red hair with a blond touch. She has blue eyes and is short. Bella is skinny and lean. She has bangs and pinkish red lips that are about the same size.

Personality: Bella is bubbly and just wants to have fun. She is a real risk taker and doesn't care who says what about her. She may not be the smartest one in the room, but she is caring and knows whats rich to do, even though she may seem edgy.

Fatal Flaw: Bella will not listen. She just likes to do what she wants. She also lies a bit. Bella lies her way out of trouble.

Pets: A turtle named Curtis.

Talents: Bella is a very talented dancer. She also is very good at sewing. Also a gymnast. She could do a back handspring like its nothing.

Weapons: Bella has a anklet that can turn out to be a pretty good pocket knife.

Year-Round or Summer: Year-Rounder

Other: Bella has dyslexia. That means she mixes up some letters. But she is learning for read better.


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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeThu May 24, 2012 8:16 pm

Name: Austin Smith

Age/Birthday: 16

Gender: Male

God Parent: Apollo

Claimed: Yes

Mortal Family: Jacklyn Smith, Matt Smith and Amanda Smith

Years in Camp: 4

Brief History: When Austin was only 3 his father left him and his family. His mom was cruel. She got remarried to another man when he was 5. He was really nice and caring. However, his mom was unthoughtful and rude. A few years later, he died of a stroke. Austin put his sister in foster care and ran away to camp half blood.

Physical Appearance: Austin has blonde hair and blue eyes. He has light skin and is tall. He wears glasses for reading. Austin has birth bark on his left leg.

Personality: Austin is funny and caring, although a little mischievous and a trouble maker. He likes animals and roller coasters. He is wild and adventurous. Even though he is generous, if you push his buttons, he will beat you up.

Fatal Flaw: He is stubborn. Austin has a bad temper. He likes to lie and look in mirrors.

Pets: He is a bulldog named Spike and a parrot named Mario.

Talents: Austin is amazing at sports. Especially football or baseball. He is also a straight A student.

Weapons: Austin has a silver bow arrow.

Year-Round or Summer: Year-Rounder.


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[center]Name: Claire Robinson

Age/Birthday: 13 June 17

Gender: Female

God Parent: Aphrodite

Claimed: Yes

Mortal Family: Miller Robinson

Years in Camp: 3

Brief History: When Claire was 5 her mom left her. Her father was always careless about everything. One year later he met a woman named Jessica. Claire's house went on fire. Then she had to move in with Jessica. So she ran at 10. A satyr found her and took her to Camp Half Blood.

Physical Appearance: She has blonde-brown hair. She has brown eyes. She wears purple glasses for reading. She wears earrings that looks like diamonds. She is fit also.

Personality: Claire is bubbly and likes to be herself. She is funny and sweet to others. She loves animals and sports. She loves her family and friends. She can be a bit selfish and shows personal loyalty. She is very talkative and is very lazy sometimes. She stands up for herself and for other people.

Fatal Flaw: Her fatal flaws are personal loyalty and selfishness.

Pets: She has a hamster named Shelby. Shelby has fluffy tan fur.

Talents: She is good at writing, reading, and swimming.

Weapons: She has a silver sword. When not in use it is a purple bracelet.

Year-Round or Summer: Year-round

Other: N/A



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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeThu May 24, 2012 8:38 pm

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ame: A.J. (April Jen) Brooks

Age/Birthday:11, August 7

Gender:Female

God Parent: Hermes

Claimed: Yes

Mortal Family: Daniel Brooks (dad) Kelly Brooks (sister)

Years in Camp: First

Brief History: When AJ wasn't even born, her dad couldn't take care of everything so he left. Her mom was very stressed because she just got promoted to supervisor at her job. Plus, she had a new boyfriend named Randy. Randy got along very well with the three girls. But, soon left her for a richer lady. To make things worse, Kaitlyn disappeared.Kaitlyn was her sister who never got to live. When Kelly was 8 and A.J. was 1 they found Kaitlyn dead. A.J. went to live with her grandma years after at age 10. BUt, when Kelly told her to come, she did.

Physical Appearance: AJ has blond hair and baby blue eyes. She is short and thin. She wears glasses to see the board. She is always wearing her bracelet Kaitlyn made Kelly before her death.

Personality: AJ is funny and smart. She has a bit of an attitude. However, she will make you feel special. She likes to be wild and have fun.

Fatal Flaw:AJ is too wild. SHe is pushy and arrogant and that can get her in trouble.

Pets: She has a pit bull named Max.

Talents: AJ is a fast runner. She was on the swim team.

Weapons: Kelly has a bow arrow.

Year-Round or Summer: Year Rounder

Other:N/A


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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeFri May 25, 2012 3:37 pm

April Jen Brooks is Accepted
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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeFri May 25, 2012 4:41 pm

Name: Alissa Millard

Age/Birthday: 16, April 10

Gender:Female

God Parent: Poseidon

Claimed: Yes

Mortal Family: Nikki Millard (Mom) Olivia Millard (sister)

Years in Camp: This year is her first in camp.

Brief History: When Alissa was a baby, her dad left. Her mom was struggling with her money. She married a man named Rob. Rob hit her mom because she worked part time. Alissa was stressed like her mom. Olivia, was only 8. She became scared and shy. She and Olivia became closer, until they had an argument to run away or not. So Alissa ran away and Olivia lived with her Aunt Valentina.

Physical Appearance: Alissa has blond hair with brown highlights. She is average size. She is 5 foot 6. Alissa has blue eyes. She has fair skin, but not pale. Alissa has long legs. She is tiny, but still is healthy.

Personality: Alissa is fun and funny. However, she is a little clingy and gets attached easely. She is smart and tries not to be a downer.Alissa is also an overreactor. She may go to far sometimes. Alissa is a little shy, but if you know her she will talk to you a lot.

Fatal Flaw: Alissa is to attached to things and can easily get upset. She is sensitive, too.

Pets: A dog named Liv. Liv is fluffy and brown. She wears a blue collar.

Talents: Alissa can play softball very good. She is a pitcher or catcher. She is also a very good swimmer.

Weapons: Alissa has a silver sword.

Year-Round or Summer: Year-Rounder

Likes: Ice Cream, softball, swimming and dog.

Dislikes: Monsters, spiders, snakes, and the color orange.




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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeFri May 25, 2012 4:45 pm

Alissa Millard was Approved by PM.
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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeFri May 25, 2012 6:24 pm

The Demi Gods

Its a good thing there aren't any Hermes kids here.
Why? You still have me!
Oh would you be quiet. Your a little annoying.
Yeah! I'll freeze him!
I wish you all had a green thumb! Literally!!
Green thumb! Does that hurt?
Oh guys! Be quiet! I'm trying to read a magazine here??


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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeFri May 25, 2012 6:36 pm

~Relationtionships~

Claire Robinson -----------------------> Single
Austin Smith ---------------------------> Almost Dating Abigail Dellington
Bella Jones -----------------------------> Single and Just Fine
Kimberly Walker -------------------------> Single
Alissa Millard ----------------------------> Single
Stephanie Martinez --------------------> Dating Jonathon Teal
[color=blue]Derek Henderson ------------------>Dating Alexi Nevoso]


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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeFri May 25, 2012 6:49 pm

~Their song~


Claire Robinson ---------------------------------> Starships by Nicki Manij
Austin Smith ------------------------------------> What Makes You Beautiful by One Direction
Bella Jones -------------------------------------> TTYLXOX by Bella Thorne
Stephanie Martinez-------------------------------------------> Only you can be you by Cymphonique
Kimberly Walker ---------------------------------> Mr. Know It All by Kelly Clarkson
Derek Henderson ---------------------------------------------> Boyfriend by Justin Bieber
Alissa Millard ------------------------------------> Make It In America by Victoria Justice


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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 01, 2012 10:15 pm

Name: Derek Henderson

Age/Birthday: 17, August 21

Gender: Male

God Parent: Ares

Claimed: Yes

Mortal Family: Erin Henderson (mom) John Lynch (step-dad) Amy (sister)

Years in Camp: First

Brief History: When Derek was a baby his dad left him, his mom and sister Amy. He took everything. Before you could blink, Derek was living on the streets. One day his mom met John. John was a lawyer who seemed fishy. He was nice, but fake. His mom then became fake. She lied to the children about what or where she went. Derek's mom became mean to John and John became nice.

Physical Appearance: Derek is tall and muscular. He is around 5 feet and 9 inches. He has blue-ish green eyes. Derek's hair is almost like a fohawk, but not really. He has pink lips and a long neck.

Personality: Derek is funny and sporty. He is far from perfect, but is a real character. When times are tough, he's the person you can go to for help. Derek is a bit sarcastic. But you shouldn't get hurt because thats just how he is. He is mishchevious sometimes and gets into some trouble. Derek is a very kind person, but if your not kind he will treat you unkind

Fatal Flaw: He is rude sometimes. Derek may come off edgy and seem like he is a jerk and only cares about himself.

Pets: Derek has a boxer names brownie. Brownie is a brown boxer who has kind blue eyes.

Talents: Derek is a baseball player. He writes poetry and is a smart student. He is also a quarterback.

Weapons: Derek had a golden celestial sword.

Year-Round or Summer: Year-Rounder

Other: None






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Name: Stephanie Martinez

Age/Birthday: 16, December 18

Gender: Female

God Parent: Demeter

Claimed: Yes

Mortal Family: Jason Martinez (dad) Christie Martinez (sister)

Years in Camp: 0

Brief History: When Stephanie was just an infant her mom left. Her dad was depressed and felt bad because he thought his daughters were lonely. He wanted to give them the best, but he couldn't. He got so angry, he took it out on the girls. He would hit them and yell. He went to anger management. The girls became angry at each other, so Stephanie went to Camp Half Blood.

Physical Appearance: Stephanie has medium length hair thats brown and curly. She has a bit of a tan and blue eyes. She has pink lips and white teeth. She is short. Stephanie is 5 feet and 3 inches.

Personality: Stephanie is smiley and funny. She isn't the smart one, but she's a dreamer. Stephanie is a caring person. She isn't a mary sue or a little miss perfect. She does not care what you think of her.

Fatal Flaw: She is light-headed and thinks too much of people. She gets disappointed when she finds out the rest. She's a gossiper.

Pets: None

Talents: Stephanie is a lacrosse player and soccer player.

Weapons: She has a golden dagger always kept in her pocket.

Year-Round or Summer: Year-Rounder

Other: None


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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 01, 2012 10:44 pm

FYI You can't have children of Hera, she's considered to be a maiden goddess because she only has kids with Zeus. And you can only have 1 big 3 character unless you have bought another one using drachma's.
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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 01, 2012 10:46 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 01, 2012 10:59 pm

Stephanie's accepted. Elaborate more on Derek's personality.
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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeSat Jun 02, 2012 8:27 am

I fixed it
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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeSat Jun 02, 2012 3:25 pm

Derek's accepted.
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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 21, 2012 9:26 pm

Inactive

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Kimberly will be up for adoption. Now, she is just in-active.[/center]

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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 21, 2012 11:19 pm

Name: Sutton Carter

Age/Birthday: 15, January 1st

Gender: Female

God Parent: Hermes

Claimed: Yes

Mortal Family: Alison Triolo, Olivia Triolo

Years in Camp: 0

Brief History: When Sutton was younger her and her dad were about to go grocery shopping. This trip was not getting milk. It was him running of with a one day year old Sutton on the curb. She was helpless. She didn't eve know here own name. A kind mother of one took Sutton and raised her. She was always a go-getter. One day she asked Alison why we had different last names. She explained to her what happened. Sutton was upset and became mischievous and a defensive person. She ran away to Camp Half blood to discover her powers.

Physical Appearance: Sutton has blond hair and it has a bit of very light brown streaks. She has dark blue eyes. Sutton is tall and lean, she is about 5 foot 5. Her arms are muscular as well.

Personality: Sutton does not talk much. She is a tom boy and likes to be considered as one of the guys. She is funny and is a bit aggressive. She tries not to be rude, but she cannot help it. You should not cross her or make her made because she will make you pay for it. Sutton also takes the blame for everyone.

Fatal Flaw: Sutton has some anger issues. She also can exaggerate the truth. Sutton is mischievous and often gets in trouble.

Pets: Sutton has a guinea pig named Fur-ball.

Talents: Sutton is good at many things. She can ride quads, ice skate and dance and is a talented hip hop dancer.

Weapons: Sutton has a silver knife. When not in use, its hidden in her pocket.

Year-Round or Summer: Year Rounder

Other: None



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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 22, 2012 7:39 am

Your charrie is nice, but you forgot to add a sentence in her personality. You might also want to add another fatal flaw and you should really describe her fatal flaw thoroughly in her personality section. In the personality and physical appearance section you can make better sentences by using comma and the word and. You also mentioned a girl named Alicia in her Brief History section. Is that supposed to be Allison? If so you need to fix that. You also need to fix you spelling and capitalization. Other than the things I just listed your character looks fine.
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PostSubject: Re: Purple's Friends   Purple's Friends I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 22, 2012 8:23 am

Thanks Pink. It was because I did this like at eleven.
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Nice charrie! But...


Because she's a daughter of Hermes, then her father wouldn't be able to live with her for three years. It would also be helpful if you elaborated more on Sutton's fatal flaw. I don't get how fatal it is.

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I fixed it.

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