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 Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval]

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PostSubject: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval]   Wed Mar 07, 2012 11:16 pm

Characters,



Sia Nolan:

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Lance Atkinson:


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Celia Cote:

*Needs Accepting*
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Sylvia Bradshaw:

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Garett Payne:

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Enrique Goff:
*Work in Progress*
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Luz Smithson:
*Work In Progress*
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Theme Songs,


Shake It Up by Selena Gomez
How To Save A Life by The Fray
Hey Hey by Superchick
Boulevard Of Broken Dreams by Green Day
You're Going Down by Sick Puppies



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PostSubject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval]   Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:03 am

Admins/Mods....can you please take a look at my character...
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PostSubject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval]   Mon Mar 12, 2012 4:12 pm

Lance's god parent should relate to his skills. Which he doesn't seem to have any of.. D: So maybe you could add in a few traits such as 'excellent at swordfighting, natural knack for skill related games,' or something like that.

And everyone has to have a fatal flaw. It sounds to me like he's a people pleaser.

Also, her flaming arrows are a bit powerful. Maybe regular arrows? Other than that your female character is accepted. :)
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PostSubject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval]   Mon Mar 12, 2012 7:46 pm

Thanks, I edited Lance.
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PostSubject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval]   Mon Mar 12, 2012 7:57 pm

ACCEPTED
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PostSubject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval]   Mon Mar 12, 2012 8:02 pm

Thanks
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PostSubject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval]   Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:00 pm

Celia Needs Accepting...
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PostSubject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval]   Tue Mar 13, 2012 1:54 pm

New Characters:

Celia Cote & Sylvia Bradshaw & Garett Payne


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PostSubject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval]   Tue Mar 13, 2012 7:48 pm

Try not to triple post.

Also, I don't know what kind of nymph Celia is.

Sylvia is accepted. :)

Garrett needs more of a history. Those are short little sentences, they barely tell about his history. You should put more effort into characters. Also, Garrett seems a little bit physically strong for someone his age and height and weight.
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PostSubject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval]   Tue Mar 13, 2012 11:18 pm

Edited

Celia Cote & Garett Payne
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PostSubject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval]   Wed Mar 14, 2012 7:14 pm

Garett's physical description didn't really change, but okay. He's accepted. But, just barely.

I still don't know what kind of nymph Celia is. :p A dwelling is where she lives. How can she live in music?
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PostSubject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval]   Wed Mar 14, 2012 11:11 pm

I changed Garret's physical appearence

And Celia's dwelling is now a Laurel Tree...
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PostSubject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval]   Sat Mar 17, 2012 1:48 pm

Celia needs approval....sorry ofr double posting
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