Luz
Posts : 21
Join date : 2012-03-07
Age : 26
Location : Ottawa
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| Characters,![Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Images41](https://i.servimg.com/u/f44/17/14/43/28/images41.jpg) Sia Nolan:- Spoiler:
Name: Sia Kellie Nolan
Age/Birthday: 15, born on September 6th 1996 at 5:47am
Gender: Female
God Parent: Polyhymnia-Goddess of dance
Claimed: No
Mortal Family: *Joey Nolan*
Years in Camp: 1-2 months
Brief History:
Sia was born in New York. Since she was 3, she was dancing. She took ballet and hip hop. Sia won many awards. Her Father was so proud of her, he sent her to a high-school just for Dance, Music and Drama. Sia started to make so many friends and alot more enemies. One of which, turned out to be a dracnae. Sia's father heard about her classmate attacking her and knew it was time. He drove her to camp and shes been here ever since.
Physical Appearance:
Sia has long sandy-blonde hair. Her eyes are deep blue with little shards of bright purple. Sia is 5"9" and weighs 140 lbs. She wears capri's or yoga pants with a camp t-shirt most of the time.
Personality:
Sia is very creative. She comes up with ideas for a dance left and right. She is a sore-loser though. Once when she was at a Dance Competition, she got thrid and she threw the trophy and hit the 1st place in the forehead. Sia is short-tempered but, hates getting into fights. She is known to be and open and understanding person. You pour your heart out to her, she won't tell a soul.
Fatal Flaw: Short-Tempered
Pets: None
Talents: Dancing, helping people settle problems, she is really good with her Crossbow.
Weapons: Crossbow with celestial bronze arrows
Year-Round or Summer: Year-rounder
Other: Nope [/font]
![Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Images11](https://i.servimg.com/u/f44/17/14/43/28/images11.jpg) Lance Atkinson:- Spoiler:
Name: Lance Ike Atkinson Age/Birthday: 16/ August 18th Gender: Male God Parent: Techne-God of art and skill Claimed: No Mortal Family: *Briggett Atkinson* DeceasedYears in Camp: 1 month Brief History: Lance was born in Seattle. He lived in a nice house on the coast of Lake Washington. His mom knew he was gifted. She sent him to a private school for special children. When Lance was 14 he and his mom moved to New York. She sent him to another private school. Lance didn't like this one. Mrs. Highsmith, his art history teacher, gave him a hard time. Lance knew she was dangerous even before she tried to kill him. Lance's mom knew it was time for him to go to camp. She drove him to camp with a Manticore on their tail. Lance's mother died while helping him to camp. Lance escaped with a few deep cuts. Physical Appearance: Lance's appearence is not unique or special. He has smooth, brown hair that just hits his eyebrows. He brushes it to one side in a kind of bieber look. His eyes are deep, dark, brown. He wears contacts. His eyes are orignally bright blue but, he hated them. He got contacts when he was 14. Lance's skin is tan and smooth. His hands get clamy when hes nervous. He stands at 6"2" and weighs 160 lbs. Personality: Lance always had his sketch book. He never leaves his cabin without it. He draws anything and everything. Lance is pretty easy to get along with. He smiles alot. He's doesn't hold a grudge and tries his best to keep his anger inside. He doesn't enjoy fighting so, when there is a war or even just capture the flag, he helps out with the injured. Lance can't stand to see someone suffering. Lance is extremely loyal. It takes alot to get him mad but, if he evr lashed out on you, watch out. He won't show any mercy if you harm his family. Fatal Flaw: He doesn't like to fight or kill, he is extremely loyal Pets: ![Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Images12](https://i.servimg.com/u/f44/17/14/43/28/images12.jpg) He has a mutt named Winnie. She never leaves his side. Talents: Lance is great with sketching, good at swordfighting, He has good people skills, He can run really fast Weapons: A normal camp sword. It's 2.5 ft long and has a gold and blue hilt. Year-Round or Summer: Year-Rounder Other: He is lactose-entolerant.
![Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Images42](https://i.servimg.com/u/f44/17/14/43/28/images42.jpg) Celia Cote: *Needs Accepting* - Spoiler:
Name: Celia Anamarie Cote
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Years at Camp: 100
Brief History:
Dwelling: Laurel Tree
Physical appearance:
Celia has long, red hair. Its reaches down to her butt and her bangs just hit the corner of her eye. Her eyes are blue with a thin rim of black. Her skin is pale and she has freckles across her nose and cheeks. She stands at 5"8" and weighs 130 lbs. Celia is fit and has an athletes body.
Personality:
Celia has never been one for being good. She goes against the rules and always questions authority. She does however, treat her friends nicely. Shes sarcastic and rowdy. Celia is ruthless and will never surrender no matter the situation.
Talents: Playing instruments, gardening, running, persuading people, swimming
Weapons: She has a bright blue bow and arrow with stygian iron arrows.
Other:
![Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Images16](https://i.servimg.com/u/f44/17/14/43/28/images16.jpg) Sylvia Bradshaw:- Spoiler:
Name: Sylvia Bettie Bradshaw Age/Birthday: 16/March 6th Gender: Female God Parent: Nyx-Goddess of Night Claimed: No Mortal Family: *Zachary Bradshaw* *Hanna Bradshaw* Years in Camp: 3 weeks Brief History: Sylvia was born in Quantico, Virginia. She lived with her father, an FBI BAU profiler, Zachary Bradshaw. They had a huge penthouse. Slyvia's dad was off on business alot so Sylvia was living with her step-mother, Hanna Bradshaw. Sylvia got kicked out of 5 high-schools. She felt neglected by her father and started to go against authority to get attention from her dad. Her dad never really cared. Sylvia ranaway when she was 15. She was taken to camp by a satyr. Physical Appearance: Sylvia has long, choppy, black hair. Her skin is pale. Her eyes are indigo. She has a tattoo of a half moon on her wrist. Sylvia stands at 5"9" and she weighs 135 lbs. She has a runners body. She never leaves her hair down, its always in a ponytail. You can see her wearing outfits like this: http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=45327477Personality: Sylvia just wants to be noticed. She doesn't exactly understand why she is a daughter of Nyx with the attitude she has. I guess it's just because she is more comfortable at night. Sylvia has quite the temper. She gets mad easily. Fatal Flaw: Short-Tempered Pets: ![Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] 220px-10](https://i.servimg.com/u/f44/17/14/43/28/220px-10.jpg) She has a kit fox named Tink Talents: She can envelope herself in darkness, she is really good with a sword, Weapons: She has a stygian iron sword. It's 3 ft long, has a blood red hilt and its scabbard is red. Year-Round or Summer: Year-Rounder Other: Sylvia gets a sort of rush at night, like she's on drugs
![Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Images43](https://i.servimg.com/u/f44/17/14/43/28/images43.jpg) Garett Payne:- Spoiler:
Name: Garett Justin Payne
Age/Birthday: 17/ September 1st
Gender: Male
God Parent: Ares-God of War
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: *Paige Payne*
Years in Camp: 16
Brief History:
Garett has been a camp almost all his life. His mother abandoned him when he was 1. She left him on the porch of the Big House.
It was a breezey, autumn day when Paige made the long drive to Camp Half-Blood. He long, drak, curly, brown hair whipped through the wind while driving her Thunderbird. She had Garett strapped in a car seat in the back. The local rock radio station was pounding through the speakers. Paige was driving down the country road to Camp Half Blood when the Hellhound came pounding down the road. She sped to 130 mph. When she reached Half-Blood Hill, she didn't slwo down. She drove the convertable up the hill until she reached the pine. Paige unstrapped Garett and held her bundle of joy. "I'm so sorry..." She kissed his forehead and pressed him to her chest. Paige ran as fast as she could to the Big House, screaming for help. Garett was crying and so was Paige. When the door to the Big House flung open and Chiron imerged, Paige dropped to her knees. Chiron came and took Garett in his hands. Paige mouth thank you before Chiron nodded and trotted back to the Big House. Paige snapped, twisted and turned in the teeth of the Hellhound.
Physical Appearance:
Garett has short blonde hair. He never brushes it. His eyes are dark brown. He has very defined cheek bones. His skin is tan and he is very fit and muscular. Garett gives a killer death glare. He benches 140. He stands at 6"1" and weighs 180 lbs.
Personality:
Garett is a hard-headed guy. He's ruthless and will never back down from a challenge. Garett is always up for a fight. He never backs down, no matter the odds. Garett is a trouble maker. He loves to start fights. He's always the one to throw the first punch.
Fatal Flaw: He never backs down from a fight, even if it might kill him
Pets: He has a huge Rottweiler named Riot
Talents: He is great with a sword or spear, he can run really fast, he is has excellant battle technique
Weapons: He has a 7 ft long spear with a blood red piece of ripped fabric tied right below the head, Garett also has a sword with a blood red hilt
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Rounder
Other: He never hurts girl, even if they are going to kill him.
![Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Images17](https://i.servimg.com/u/f44/17/14/43/28/images17.jpg) Enrique Goff:*Work in Progress* - Spoiler:
Name: Enrique Ryan Goff
Age/Birthday: 18/ October 21st
Gender: Male
God Parent: Grandson of Hermes & Zeus
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: *Ana-Maria Goff*
Years in Camp: 5
Brief History: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!
Physical Appearance: Enrique's hair is shaggy and black. He always has his brown hat on. His eyes are dark brown with specks of green. His mother was white and his father was black, making his skin tone a mixture of the two.
Personality: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!
Fatal Flaw:
Pets:
Talents:
Weapons:
Year-Round or Summer:
Other:
![Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Girl10](https://i.servimg.com/u/f44/17/14/43/28/girl10.png) Luz Smithson:*Work In Progress* - Spoiler:
Name: Aluzria "Luz" Tammi Smithson
Age/Birthday: 14/ December 17th
Gender: Female
God Parent: Alke-Goddess of Courage
Claimed: No
Mortal Family: *Bryce Smithson*
Years in Camp: 1 day
Brief History: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!
Physical Appearance: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!
Personality: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!
Fatal Flaw:
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Talents:
Weapons:
Year-Round or Summer:
Other:
Theme Songs, Shake It Up by Selena GomezHow To Save A Life by The FrayHey Hey by SuperchickBoulevard Of Broken Dreams by Green DayYou're Going Down by Sick Puppies
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Luz
Posts : 21
Join date : 2012-03-07
Age : 26
Location : Ottawa
| | Subject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:03 am | |
| Admins/Mods....can you please take a look at my character... | |
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Zan
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Age : 27
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| | Subject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Mon Mar 12, 2012 4:12 pm | |
| Lance's god parent should relate to his skills. Which he doesn't seem to have any of.. D: So maybe you could add in a few traits such as 'excellent at swordfighting, natural knack for skill related games,' or something like that.
And everyone has to have a fatal flaw. It sounds to me like he's a people pleaser.
Also, her flaming arrows are a bit powerful. Maybe regular arrows? Other than that your female character is accepted. :) | |
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Luz
Posts : 21
Join date : 2012-03-07
Age : 26
Location : Ottawa
| | Subject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Mon Mar 12, 2012 7:46 pm | |
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Zan
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| | Subject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Mon Mar 12, 2012 7:57 pm | |
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Luz
Posts : 21
Join date : 2012-03-07
Age : 26
Location : Ottawa
| | Subject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Mon Mar 12, 2012 8:02 pm | |
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Luz
Posts : 21
Join date : 2012-03-07
Age : 26
Location : Ottawa
| | Subject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:00 pm | |
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Luz
Posts : 21
Join date : 2012-03-07
Age : 26
Location : Ottawa
| | Subject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Tue Mar 13, 2012 1:54 pm | |
| New Characters:
Celia Cote & Sylvia Bradshaw & Garett Payne
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Zan
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| | Subject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Tue Mar 13, 2012 7:48 pm | |
| Try not to triple post.
Also, I don't know what kind of nymph Celia is.
Sylvia is accepted. :)
Garrett needs more of a history. Those are short little sentences, they barely tell about his history. You should put more effort into characters. Also, Garrett seems a little bit physically strong for someone his age and height and weight. | |
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Luz
Posts : 21
Join date : 2012-03-07
Age : 26
Location : Ottawa
| | Subject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Tue Mar 13, 2012 11:18 pm | |
| Edited
Celia Cote & Garett Payne | |
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Zan
Mega Asshole Duo
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| | Subject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Wed Mar 14, 2012 7:14 pm | |
| Garett's physical description didn't really change, but okay. He's accepted. But, just barely.
I still don't know what kind of nymph Celia is. :p A dwelling is where she lives. How can she live in music? | |
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Luz
Posts : 21
Join date : 2012-03-07
Age : 26
Location : Ottawa
| | Subject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Wed Mar 14, 2012 11:11 pm | |
| I changed Garret's physical appearence
And Celia's dwelling is now a Laurel Tree... | |
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Luz
Posts : 21
Join date : 2012-03-07
Age : 26
Location : Ottawa
| | Subject: Re: Luz' Character(s) [Celia Needs Approval] Sat Mar 17, 2012 1:48 pm | |
| Celia needs approval....sorry ofr double posting | |
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