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Join date : 2012-02-18
Age : 19
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PostSubject: Fleur Pierce & Needs Approval   Tue Feb 21, 2012 8:36 pm

Name: Fleur Pierce
Age/Birthday: 15; 8/21/1996
Gender: Female
God Parent: Nyx
Claimed: Not yet.
Mortal Family: Dad- Michael Pierce; Siblings: Zack Pierce + Melody Pierce
Years in Camp: Just arrived
Brief History:
My name is Fleur, Fleur Pierce. I used to live with my family in the northern part of Illinois, near
the outskirts of the towns, but along the borders of a forest near a population of 20,000
or so. Why a foster home? Because I'm a reject. Nobody wanted me because I was
pure bad luck. Whatever I touched, looked at, they all went haywire. Besides that,
I was called "Paranormal Activity" because of objects that exploded randomly. It
was all true, my horrible life, was just my reality. I just left one day, leaving behind
my wealthy life that never bought happiness. I was desperate, until I met Jenny.
Who was Jenny? I still wonder that today. Jenny was my best friend. I met her
during my running attempt from my father. I didn't know she appeared
, she appeared next to me while I caught
my breath. From there, she guided me towards her home, a small hut. I spent weeks
side by side with her, her telling me how to control my emotions and such, but I never knew
why. One day, she just left me a note to another home, she disappeared
without a trace. From there, I've been living with
a kind family. They never blamed me for problems. They never rejected me at all.
I felt at peace for weeks, chatting and laughing like a normal girl would, a perfect reality. Until a
monster like beast attacked. It destroyed their home and left me running, running again
from my life, my family, and my reality. Not once have I seen them again. Instead,
I swore off to be independent relying on myself instead of bringing destruction
everywhere. I met another girl while I hiked endlessly for days, she looked like
Jenny and ran up to me with a simple note:
Camp Half-Blood, Half-Blood Hill, Farm Road 3.141
Long Island, New York 11954

I thought I would give it a try and after weeks, I got there. This is where I am now.
My new home, Camp Half-Blood. I feel a new feeling,
and it isn't destruction this time, reality isn't so bad after all. - Fleur Pierce, 2/19/12 3:49

Physical Appearance: A petite, medium sized girl. Around 5 ft 6.
A silky tumble of blond hair with pale amber eyes. Milky
creamy skin and coco almond shaped eyes with a small button nose.
Small, thin lips with a taint of pale pink. Skinny, but not curvy.
Can be seen wearing a Camp Half-Blood t-shirt
and jeans unless on a mission.

What would my father say? Stubborn, rude, tom-boyish,
curious, adventurous, vulnerable, creative, cold to strangers.
I have a lot of determination when I'm up to be and I
can be annoyed easily. If you go too far, I will judge you
and my decision will be final. Brave, wistful, serious.
Very mischievous when it comes to getting revenge,
very independent, but hopes to rely on others more.

Fatal Flaw: Too stubborn. Once I make my decisions, there's no turning
back, leaving the ones I love left to suffer my consequences.
I will always stand up for my freedom, even if it costs me my
life, my innocence is pure and determined, but forever may
my freedom not be trapped in a bird cage. My unthinkable
actions will be the greatest of my flaws, to do what my gut tells
me, and it's never right.

Pets: None

- More active during the night
- Can see during the night
- Hears 'whispers' in the night
- Fast reflexes
- Can make others scared

Will be decided.

Year-Round or Summer: Year-round

My name is Fleur, pleasure to meet you.
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PostSubject: Re: Fleur Pierce & Needs Approval   Wed Feb 22, 2012 9:23 am

Maybe just keep everything without putting a new line every time you finish a sentence, it makes it a bit annoying to keep :/
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PostSubject: Re: Fleur Pierce & Needs Approval   Wed Feb 22, 2012 5:02 pm

Thank you for the feedback, I'll be sure to fix it soon.
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