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Whats-A-Monster



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Join date : 2012-02-20
Age : 18
Location : Camp Half-Blood

PostSubject: Whats-A-Monsters Character(s)   Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:27 am

I don't know if i'm gonna have enough time to RP with more than one character, but it depends on how much time I have. Anyway, here is my character I will RP with!

Name: Zak Underwood (Not the saytr, I could'nt think of a second name)
Age: 14
Gender: Male
God Parent: Apollo
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Maria Underwood (Dead)
Years in Camp: 2
Brief History: Maria got killed by a Titan when Zak was 9, so he ran away. Lived on the streets fighting montsers. A saytr found him when he was 12, and escorted him to camp. He has been there ever since, training to be a better fighter.
Physical Appearance: Blonde hair cut short, but alway seems to grow back. Misty blue eyes that many people can't resist looking at. ALWAYS wearing battle armor. But at night he wears PJ's, striped blue and white.
Personality: Very social, Can't complete a day without a chat or two. The worst lier ever, could'nt lie by the time he could talk. Easily angered because of his mother's unfair death. Tends to fight often, no-one is sure why.
Fatal Flaw: Thinking he can do anything.
Pets: No pets
Talents: Very good with a bow, even for an Apollo kid. Never gives up, ever.
Weapons: Bow, bronze knife.
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round
Other: Never been on a quest. Some people, who knew him before Camp Half-Blood, said he had a different relative.

Hope I get accepted! dance


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PostSubject: Re: Whats-A-Monsters Character(s)   Tue Feb 21, 2012 5:08 am

Nice character! I'm no mod, but I'd advise you to make the history, appearance and personality sections at least four sentences long. C:
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Whats-A-Monster



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PostSubject: Re: Whats-A-Monsters Character(s)   Tue Feb 21, 2012 11:12 am

Thanks for the advice. Doing it now!
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Skye
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Join date : 2011-06-25
Age : 19
Location : The Stratosphere

PostSubject: Re: Whats-A-Monsters Character(s)   Tue Feb 21, 2012 1:53 pm

Having a copy of a canon's weapon isn't something that we allow here, sorry. :/ Besides, backbiter was capable of harming both mortals and immortals, was able to create portals, and was a sort of modified version of Kronos' scythe. It's just way too powerful. But having a normal, celestial bronze sword is acceptable. :D

His sentences need to have basic sentence structure. Having two words does not make it a sentence. Example:

"Blonde hair." ---> "Zak has short, blonde hair, clipped in the style of a military haircut."

Fix those incomplete sentences, and then I can accept him.
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Whats-A-Monster



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PostSubject: Re: Whats-A-Monsters Character(s)   Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:37 pm

Done, I hope.

Anything wrong?
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PostSubject: Re: Whats-A-Monsters Character(s)   Tue Feb 21, 2012 3:09 pm

Accepted!
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PostSubject: Re: Whats-A-Monsters Character(s)   Tue Feb 21, 2012 3:10 pm

:D
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