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Natic



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PostSubject: Natic Nation   Mon Feb 20, 2012 2:13 am



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Elrohir Alevan Vanuir

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Isildren Garen Alorn

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PostSubject: Re: Natic Nation   Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:46 am

You might want to add in some flaws to the talents section because he seems pretty powerful right now....plus you must write your god parent and then after just say that he is still unclaimed ;)
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PostSubject: Re: Natic Nation   Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:03 am

Okay, so while I really like your character, and even though he's unclaimed, I think he might be too powerful for a first character. Even though it's clear that you've roleplayed before. But, I think maybe this character is a bit too powerful for a new person. So wait a few weeks, make a different, less powerful character, do some roleplaying and then use him.
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PostSubject: Re: Natic Nation   Mon Feb 20, 2012 11:31 am

Thanks for the feedback guys. I'll make sure to balance out his scale of power and weaknesses. I confess that I got carried away, as I had no initial planning for the character - and everything was literally written on the spot through Textedit from pure creativity, and at the time, I really liked what I had come up with :)

@Maximillian - I left his God Parent background as mysterious in the whole write-up because I want Garen to be the son of one of the Big Three - I haven't decided yet, and so when I'd finally reach 500 posts, I'd be able to claim Garen as such (hence the prospect in his quest of finding his immortal father.)

@Zan - Corresponding with my reply above, I believe that reserving him as you've said would be the most appropriate option to take as an alternative to what I was originally going for.
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PostSubject: Re: Natic Nation   Mon Feb 20, 2012 2:15 pm

oh, I really like it too. And thank you for reading the rules! :)
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PostSubject: Re: Natic Nation   Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:51 pm

New character has been posted under the spoiler for 'Ace...', let me know what you think : )
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PostSubject: Re: Natic Nation   Tue Feb 21, 2012 4:22 pm

ACCEPTED. *feeling extra accomplished*
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PostSubject: Re: Natic Nation   Sat Mar 03, 2012 12:32 am

THERE'S NOTHING TO ACCEPT /sob
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