Posts : 77 Join date : 2012-02-12 Age : 19 Location : Bermuda
Subject: Fifa9o's Characters Sun Feb 12, 2012 7:48 pm
Name: Todd Smith
Age/Birthday: 15 Birthday: 23 of september 1996
God Parent: Athena
Mortal Family: Jack Smith
Brief History: He grew up with his father he has never completed a year of school and he has never had any friends. He is very attached to his father and has a photo album of him and his dad. He knows nothing about his mother other then she was very beautiful and that she is a goddess. The only thing remembers about his mom is her saying "Wisdom" to him as baby and her smile.
Physical Appearance: Todd is tall and has short sandy brown hair with golden blonde streaks. He has a small yet muscular build. His eyes are a striking aqua blue he weighs about 125 pounds. He has very straight white teeth. He has a slight tan and he has really long legs.
Personality: Todd is very calm and quiet He doesn't get mad very easily. He is a very dependable person and can keep a secret. He doesn't start fights he usually stops fights. Thought he trusts a bit too easily and he is also a little to laid back when it comes to certain things and he doesn't say anything if he's hurt.
Fatal Flaw: Personal Loyalty
Pets: A cremello pegasus named PepperMint
Talents: Drawing, Fighting, Knowledge
Weapons: a necklace with a bronze Owl that turns into a beautiful sword
Year-Round or Summer: Summer
Last edited by Fifa90 on Sat Feb 18, 2012 8:58 pm; edited 1 time in total
Posts : 1616 Join date : 2011-07-22 Age : 18 Location : 1800 got junk
Subject: Re: Fifa9o's Characters Sat Feb 18, 2012 8:53 pm
Nice character! However, Todd needs one more sentence each for his history, appearance, and personality. An attachment to his father isn't really a fatal flaw, but something like it is personal loyalty, so you could change the fatal flaw to personal loyalty if you like. Could you also maybe add a few more flaws to his personality?