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Theseus12



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PostSubject: My Charries   Thu Feb 09, 2012 5:57 pm

Theseus Kirtley, Son of Hermes. (Approved!)

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Ganon Dorf, Son of Hecate. (Approved!)
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Eddie Riggs, Son of Hephaestus (Approved!)

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Casey Auborez, Hunter of Artemis. (Approved!)
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Thu Feb 09, 2012 6:33 pm

That's a great first character :D
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Thu Feb 09, 2012 9:38 pm

Thanks...
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Fri Feb 10, 2012 8:54 am

Hello! Finally managed a legit intenet connection!

I can see where you're going wth the character, I really do, but I still don't get the history section. Could you edit that and make some inputs like what happened in his life? What he dis before camp? What were hisfamily like and such? Thanks. And I don't think I can allowthe Hunter bow- sorry!- considering he's not a Hunter nor a girl. And as said in the books, the Hunters don't do well with men....unless they're animals.
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Fri Feb 10, 2012 7:17 pm

Ok, Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Sun Feb 12, 2012 12:40 pm

Is anyone Looking?
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Sun Feb 12, 2012 1:12 pm

Looks good! (:
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Sun Feb 12, 2012 5:48 pm

Thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Wed Feb 15, 2012 7:35 pm

Theseus Kirtley is Accepted!
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Wed Feb 15, 2012 7:40 pm

yays
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Thu Feb 16, 2012 5:41 pm

ok, I've got a new Charrie form up there!
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Thu Feb 16, 2012 6:16 pm

Now, I'm not quite sure about the armor. Charles Beckendorf, son of Hephaestus himself, wasn't able to create the armor. I understand that he is a child of Hecate and all, but... I may be able to add the armor if you tone the fire power down a bit. Or, you can tone the armor down so it doesn't change into clothes.
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Thu Feb 16, 2012 7:19 pm

ok, they can't become clothes. I've edited my form.
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Thu Feb 16, 2012 9:15 pm

Accepted.
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Fri Feb 24, 2012 10:46 pm

Name: Eddie (technically Edward) Riggs
Age/Birthday: 18, May 1st
Gender:Male
God Parent:Hephaestus
Claimed: Yes or No
Mortal Family:adoptive dad: Lars Riggs. Biological mother is dead
Years in Camp:first day when he gets approved
Brief History:Riggs has led a traveling life, to say the least. Working as a Roadie for a band known as Kabbage Boy, he then was forced to quit when he was attacked by a small army of Demons at a concert. not that he needed much prodding to quit working for the worst Heavy Metal band in History. he learned many things on the road, including electronics. everyone knows he can fix anything, build anything... Face it. He's the Best Roadie in Rock History!
Physical Appearance:Black Hair, Shoulder length. Brown Eyes. very buff, and has the strength to back it up. not too tall, but he doesn't need to be, as he's very agile. no beer gut, as he's too fit for that. generally in black.
Personality:Eddie doesn't like too much attention. he spends time working in the shadows, where no one can see him. here's his basic outlook on life as a Roadie: "A good roadie knows his whole job is to make someone else look good, keep someone else safe, help someone else do what they were put here to do. A good roadie stays out of the spotlight. If he's doing his job right, you don't even know he's there. Once in a while he might step on stage just to fix a problem, to set something right. But then before you even realize he was there or what he did, he's gone."
Fatal Flaw: excessive attention to detail. while this was what made him the best Roadie in the Biz, it could get fatal if a minor detail popped up at the wrong time.
Pets:when does a Roadie have Time for pets?
Talents:extremely capable in many things except taking credit for them. he can fix anything, build anything(non-magical. after that he has limits) superb fighter with his "Dual Axe" combo. nice sense of Humor
Weapons:A double bladed Battle Axe named "The Separator", and an electric, Flying V guitar known as "Clementine."The guitar can electrocute and burn enemies for continual damage. Clementine is also capable of playing solos, which act as spells. These can do anything from summon cars and beasts to melting enemy faces.(solos explained below individually for approval)Eddie can also build various guitar strings that enhance different parts of Clementine's power, each with its own complimentary paint job. Clementine's magic power cannot be used constantly for long periods of time. If it is overheated, the guitar will burn red hot, the player will have to wait for a short cool down period before being able to use its magic again.
Year-Round or Summer:will be a year-rounder. where does he have to go Home to?
Other:Solos:
Rally Army: summons a giant spotlight on Eddie's location, Telling the Entire camp the action is HERE!
Summon Flag: plants a CHB Battle flag (not for capture the flag) on that location.
Summon Deuce: summons Eddie Riggs' personal car, The Druid Plow. up to 85 mph on highway, 55 mpg, 13 gallon tank.
FaceMelter: a powerful Solo that melts the faces of foes (non player) within 10 feet.
Bring it On Home!: a Solo that summons a burning Lead Zeppelin, crashing at the location. always a crowd pleaser. flames last 5 posts, and impact causes a 3.4 earthquake. flames affect a 7 foot radius.
Call of the Wild:Summons the angry forces of Nature! (5 wolves or a murder of 5 Ravens)
Light of Dawn: an Epic Sunrise erases all enemy buffs and friendly debuffs


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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Sat Feb 25, 2012 10:19 am

Nice character! What colour is his hair and his eyes though? Also, could you possibly remove the Battle Cry solo and reduce the radius of FaceMelter to influencing enemies within 10 feet, please? After that, I or another staff member will accept him. :]
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Sat Feb 25, 2012 2:06 pm

ok. BTW, i added a couple more solos on the bottom of the page. color is added, and battle cry is removed, and facemelter's effective range is reduced
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:07 pm

Could you change it so that Call of the Wild calls 5 wolves OR 5 ravens? Also, what do you mean by buffs and debuffs?
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:12 pm

ok, it's edited. Buffs/Debuffs are effects that effect others. Light of Dawn erases negative debuffs on allies, and positive buffs on enemies.
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:17 pm

Alright, thanks for editing! Edward Riggs is Accepted!
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Sun Mar 04, 2012 10:04 pm

New Charrie Form!!

Name:Casey Auborez

Age: 17

Birthday: October 31

Gender: (Always female)

Godly Parent:she was mortal before becoming a Huntress

Claimed:N/A

Mortal Family: Mom: Lynn Auborez. Dad:Frank Auborez

Years in Hunters:42

Group: Healer

Brief History: Born in New Orleans at about 1962, Casey was raised by a family of Doctors. When she was in her Teen years, she found love in the form of one Samuel Jones. then he ditched her for someone whom he thought was fairer. imagine her heartbreak, amd then you will understand her hatred of males. she was found and taken in by the Hunters, and eventually, she discovered the world of Heavy Metal. particularly, it's black metal, doom metal, and gothic subcultures. she is also a veteran of the Titanomachy.

Physical Appearance: Casey is a Tell redhead with redder eyes. she has always had a nimble frame, and spending her life hunting has not helped depreciate that. she is generally in black, wearing clothes after the fashion of Black Metal. her Bright Red hair is often in her face, covering her left eye. her pale skin is inscribed with tattos.

Personality: Casey is more than an appreciater of Black Metal, she is a major fan. you could say she is absolutely nuts about it, in fact. She is very loyal to her lady, as well as to her Sisters. she has a natural Distrust of Males of any kind. she is very Individualistic, even for a Hunter. for her, nothing is more Important than three things: Her Lady, Her Freedom, and Her Metal.

Likes/Dislikes: She like Hunting, serving the goddess, and Black Metal/Doom Metal as well as their gothic subcultures. she doesn't like Rap, she doesn't like Metal-Haters, and she especially Hates that self-centered bimbo(in her opinion) Lady Gaga. She also can't stand Chihuahuas, for some reason.

Talents:she is very skilled with her bow and knife. a natural Gymnast, and an especially gifted Healer. Very accomplished with her Bass guitar.

Weapons:bow(turns into a ring on left finger) quiver just appears when bow is out, and can hold 75 arrows. one silver knife. a bass guitar in her tent that heals allies slowly in a 5m radius. she can't use this in combat, or while hunting, however. (broken arm in 7 posts, to make an example of speed.)

Other:her Theme Song is SkeletonWitch, Soul Trashing Black Sorcery


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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Mon Mar 05, 2012 5:07 pm

'absolutely nuts about it' is not a sentence for one.
Two: You need to describe her personality more. Which you didn't. You just said that she was a huge fan of metal. Which could go in the likes/dislikes.
Three: Her brief history doesn't say where she grew up, what year she was born in etc. You need to actually give her a history. That was more like a sample roleplay.

Fix it.
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Fri Mar 09, 2012 10:16 pm

Ok, i posted the Edited. would you mind accepting/critiquing?
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PostSubject: Re: My Charries   Sat Mar 10, 2012 3:02 pm

Thanks for editing! Casey Auborez is Accepted!
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