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King of Trolls



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PostSubject: King of Trolls' Charries   Sun Jan 29, 2012 7:02 pm

Name: Norm Normal
Age:15 DoB: March 2nd 1996
Gender: Male
God Parent: Ares
Claimed: Yessir
Mortal Family: Celicia Normal
Years in camp: 3
Brief history: Norm's mother died shortly after he was born, so he toughened up in the streets of New York, raised by his aunt. He was plagued by monsters for a few weeks as he began to come on-radar. He stumbled upon Camp Half-Blood after the (erroneous) thought that the monsters could not get him if he was across water. He struggled for a while with the schedule of camp, but he slowly adapted to the new way of life.
Physical Appearance: Norm is an average-height figure at 5'11. He has mid-back length white hair and odd violet eyes (Presumably from his mother). He usually wears cargo pants and a gray shirt, though that changes every now and then. The kids he hung out with at a younger age teased him about his 'lady fingers' and his soft appearance.
Personality: He is surprisingly mild for a child of Ares, but he makes up for that with his combat skills. He likes to just hang around lazily with friends, and often can be seen at the beach at sunset. He is a bit impassive and indecisive in normal circumstances. He can be a bit blunt with people who act like they have no common sense. He can be a bit of a prankster.
Fatal Flaw: He can be manipulated by women easily.
Pets: German Shepard
Talents: Juggling, marksmanship
Weapons: Long Celestial Bronze sword
Year-round
Other: None


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cher
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PostSubject: Re: King of Trolls' Charries   Sun Jan 29, 2012 7:44 pm

Sorry! But guns aren't currently allowed on this site. They may be apprived later on, but for now, your character isn't allowed to have guns at camp.
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PostSubject: Re: King of Trolls' Charries   Sun Jan 29, 2012 8:05 pm

I see...
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PostSubject: Re: King of Trolls' Charries   Mon Jan 30, 2012 7:32 pm

All you have to do is remove the grenades and you'll be set to go. ^^ The reason we don't allow weapons like that is because it makes it easier to god-mode and kill other people's characters. The topic of allowing modern weapons has been discussed, but it's still in the works.
So all you have to do is remove that and you can consider him Accepted.
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PostSubject: Re: King of Trolls' Charries   Mon Jan 30, 2012 8:15 pm

That makes sense.
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PostSubject: Re: King of Trolls' Charries   Mon Jun 04, 2012 8:04 pm

Name: Lohy
Age: Unknown (appears 16 or 17)
DoB: Unknown
God Parent: Phobos
Claimed: Yessir:
Mortal Family: Unknown
Years in camp: Newly arrived (1?)
Brief hIsToRy: Lohy was a bad egg from the beginning, causing a painful death for his mother during birth. He wanders the earth, spreading fear and death wherever he sets his feet. It begins with a child or two going missing. Within months everyone in the community is dead, brutally maimed and left to die in pain. He is presumed to be working with a negative force.
Physical appearance: Lohy has smooth, pale skin usually painted with the blood of his recent prey. He has long red hair and red eyes that openly show his madness. He usually dresses in red. Red red red.
Personality: He's going to try to butcher you. Do I really need to explain more?
Fatal Flaw: He's stark. raving. mad.
Pets: He had a puppy. He ate it.
Weapons: A red sword made of fear from daddy(Oscura)
Talents: Singing, believe it or not
Year...round?
Other: Run.
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PostSubject: Re: King of Trolls' Charries   Mon Jun 04, 2012 8:40 pm

I'm not an admin or a mod or anything, but Lohy seems to be a pretty powerful character. I mean, a 16 or 17-year-old kid who can wipe out a whole town within a couple of months? Seems pretty powerful if you ask me.
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PostSubject: Re: King of Trolls' Charries   Mon Jun 04, 2012 9:06 pm

I see what you're getting at, but I'm saying he'll pick them off one by one. Not at once.
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PostSubject: Re: King of Trolls' Charries   Wed Jun 06, 2012 11:43 am

Still, I find Pip correct. It was even hard for military forces to invade a country with guns and almost every weapon in their arsenal- except nuclear bombs- and for a 16-17 year old kid, it'll be virtually impossible.

King of Trolls, I know Camp is a fictional site, but please still come into terms with the real world's standards. Although, given the fact that he is a demigod and maybe powerful, I highly doubt the claim that he wiped out a community within months. As a mod, I say could you kindly change that? He could easily kill another member's character and honestly, it's like having a weapon on a killing machine- which isn't actually fair.

Plus, you'll need 4 sentences for his personality. And as interesting as the statement: 'He's going to try to butcher you. Do I really need to explain more?', you still need to work on how he do things. What is he like when he is alone? Does he need friends? Is he crazy? What?

Also, his appearance is kind of sketchy. What do you mean by 'Red, red, red.'?

And I highly doubt his fatal flaw. Uhm, does he get battle crazy? What's his limits?

Lastly, his weapon is too powerful for me...I don't know, you might need a second say?

Although I find your characters quite terrifying, which is actually the point since they do have good basics, I might suggest taking the time and be descriptive? Or even diving into more areas, like soft and gentle characters? Ones that make people smile? Uh, friendly altogether? Don't lose hope, you could do it!
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