Blake's Characters (New Character Needs Acceptance)

Last edited by BlakeShrimps on Wed Dec 21, 2011 6:53 pm; edited 3 times in total

Name: Toby Pierce
Age/Birthday: 15. June 1
Gender: Male
God Parent: Apollo
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Mia Pierce (Mother).
Years in Camp: 2
Brief History: Toby lived in New York since he was born. When he was young his mother always played music around him. At that time Toby was dyslexic, didn't know much and got confused with letter. He hated being dyslexic, for some reason it bothered him. Toby was popular in school though, mostly cause he could sing. At the age of 10 he tried out for the school talent show. And he singed which got him first place. He played instruments without learning them, and got into a band at the age of 12. That time, Toby's mother owned a music shop. Which got his mother really rich. Age of 13, his mother gave the answer to him. She told him everything, demigod, god parent, and Camp Half-Blood. Toby didn't know if this was a joke or not, but he followed his mothers steps. And promised her, he would return when the school term begin.
Personality: He is like every average Apollo child, he can sing, play instruments, and also be good at Archery. Toby didn't care about appearances that much like some Apollo children do, all he wanted was to actually have friends and be known. In Toby's spare time he usually tries to practice with his archery not like he needed practice or anything, he is just connected to it. Doesn't like when he is left out of the crowd.
Physical Appearance: Toby has dirty blonde hair, with dashing brown eyes. He has a skinny figure, kinda has some muscle. You would mostly see him wearing skinny jeans or not, its possibly 50/50. He has peachy skin.
Fatal Flaw: Doubtful a lot. Really over confident. Can get jealous easily.
Pets: None
Talents: Mason is good with Archery, and playing with instruments also singing.
Weapons: A oak wood Bow and Arrows. Also a dagger with a carving of a sun on it.
Year-Round or Summer: Summer

Blake's Characters (New Character Needs Acceptance) Worthy001

Name: Christian Roberts
Age/Birthday: 15. April. 5
Gender: Male
God Parent: Athena
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: David Roberts (Mother), James Roberts (Step Brother), Isabella Roberts (Step Mother)
Years at Camp: 1 Year
Brief History: Christian lived in Florida when he was born. When Christian was young, he was a clever child. Never got into trouble or anything. Its not like he was a bad child, but still using his time to hang out with friends or sneaking out to go to an arcade game. At the age of 11, his dad married a woman name Isabella. She was friendly, kind, and sometimes get tempered. And that's when James came in. James wasn't a bully to Christian. But was really a bad influence. Christian, didn't do much what James did, cut class, steal from a candy store, or anything. Sometimes Christian would just watch and see
James steal the thing. And most times, to see if he got into trouble. Christian and James were the same age. When Christian was turned 14 on his birthday his dad to took him to "Dave and Busters". Over a few deserts, Christian dad told him everything. Which most telling things, almost made him choke when he was eating his hamburger. After that day, Christian didn't know what to do. He didn't want to leave his own family. But had to do what was right, in case any monsters decide to raid them.
Personality: Can be trusted with any type of secrets. Is kind to others. Likes to meet friends, and treat them right. Always in his spare time he trains with his weapons, to get prepared for any sort of battle. Is always willing to go with everything. Doesn't like to be yelled out, always fight back no matter what.
Physical Appearance: Is sorta skinny for age, not much fat. Has shocking gray eyes. Also has red hair, his skin is pale. You would always see him wearing some sort of fashion wear, making sure he looks perfect.
Fatal Flaw: One of his fatal flaws is Authority, he never is a coward or anything. Always fighting back what is right. It's not like he did it to his family, mostly because he didn't need to.
Pets: None
Talents: Like any Athena child, he is very good at fighting and planning battle strategy. And is very clever with anything.
Weapons: Has a 2 foot celestial bronze sword. And a handy celestial bronze dagger that he keeps in a secret place when need for backup.
Year-Round or Summer: Summer

accepted

Posts : 302 Join date : 2011-12-03 Age : 25

Vampire, You can't accept people. A. That is your FIRST POST. B. You aren't a mod. C. You need to read the rules. Thank you.

Okay, I like the out come of your characters! However, there are some things I do hope you'll edit.

-Toby: Uhm, a little more flaws, personality wise, please. He seems too be too perfect, a Gary-Sue. Another thing, Toby needs another sentence or two to make him acceptable in the PERSONALITY category.

-Christian: Christian, although I like the thought of having a dependent character, I really do like him, he still needs a fatal flaw. Fatal flaws are flaws that could lead to the iminent death of a person, like Grudge Holding. Toby could have passed it, but Christian seems to lack one. I really don't think being Claustrophobic enough could kill you.

Anyways, edit it, and I'm sure their both acceptable!

Fixed

I like the characters!! (: and Vampire, please read the rules before posting...

Accepted! Although, Christian's Fatal flaw seems to be more of an over-confident kind of thing.

Blake's Characters (New Character Needs Acceptance) Nickrobinson

Name: Ethan Campbell

Age/Birthday: 16/ February 4

Gender: Male

God Parent: Hecate

Claimed: Yes

Mortal Family: Jack Campbell (Father), Samantha (Step-Mother)

Years in Camp: 2 years.

Brief History: Ethan was born in New York. He was a regular child at the time. Of course his father was a history teacher at college. His father was also a nice man. Ethan's father always taught Ethan some things. Even when he was dyslexic. Ethan didn't know he was dyslexic, until he started fourth grade.

When Ethan was 12, new people moved to the neighborhood. Ethan wanted to greet them of course. And invited them into his home. He saw the weirdest thing happening. A boa constrictor eating an egg and many other species. Ethan had an awkward feeling to the stomach. He knew his true fear a snake. An at that time his friends Jimmy and Chris (twins and next door neighbors) tried to scare him with the boa constrictor.

At the age of 13, he was in a football team. Playing a wide receiver. At the time he was interested in sports a lot. Loving to play in his backyard with friends. When his team had a game, of course Ethan made this serious. It was the last quarter. And Ethan got put in. Just when the quarterback said, Hike. He ran all his life getting open. The ball came to him, and he caught it! The weirdest thing happened though. The football turned into a snake. It was a spell, but Ethan didn't know that yet. All he did was drop it, and it transfigured back to a football. And at that time his team lost.

After the football game, Ethan didn't care about loosing. He was still wondering about the transfiguration thing. Ethan did not know what happened! For some reason, he tried casting some magic on his own. And actually did something cool, he made the desk lamp in his room float. But he didn't want to tell his dad. Ethan thought that his dad was gonna start kicking him out of the house and sending him to an orphanage for being a weirdo! But one day when Ethan dad came in to get his laundry and caught him!
Ethan thought he was gonna be gone. But instead, his dad told him the demigod things.

At the age of 14, Ethan started to live up to his father's possibilities. And took his journey back to Camp Half - Blood. He liked it way to much, met some campers and some siblings. It's like Ethan never wanted to go back. He was happy here being with his own kind. Instead of being in a freak or circus convention.

Physical Appearance: Ethan has cocoa brown hair. His skin is sorta pale and peachy. It may be in the middle. Ethan looks really athletic. He's not Hercules strong or anything. But he's something. In Ethan's way of getting dressed, is liking to be in skinny jeans or something new. You would never see him wear anything the same in like 2 weeks. Unless its his Camp Half - Blood shirt. His eyes are cocoa brown just like his air. Some people say he has the appearance of his father.

Personality: Ethan's personality is simple. He like sports, meeting new friends, and of course exploring. Ethan loves to listen to rock and have fun. He never likes to see a person alone, left out, or anything. If Ethan has a wad of cash, oh boy! He's gonna go to the movies, mall, or Weaponry shop. Ethan is never sad, when he looses something. And like Hecate children, he loves to practice his magic or use his magic.

Fatal Flaw: Ethan is doubtful from time to time. He doesn't really know what to do, when he is in a situation. So prepares for the best.

Pets: Ethan has a cat named Charmus. Which has that word 'Charm.' It's named that since it is always charming to have around or in a magician way.

Talents: Like all Hecate children he has a very good talent at magic.

Weapons: Ethan has a double sided celestial bronze sword named 'Magica.'

Year-Round or Summer: Summer

Accepted!

Blake's Characters (New Character Needs Acceptance) Sterlingbeaumon

Name: Kevin Boyd

Age/Birthday: 14/ December 30

Gender: Male

God Parent: Khione

Claimed: Yes

Mortal Family: Oliver Boyd (Father)

Years in Camp: 1

Brief History: Kevin was born in Canada. Until he was five years old he moved to New York. At that time, his dad tried going on dates. Kevin's dad tried to find a woman so they could have a complete family, but didn't find a good one. At that time Kevin was suspicious.

When Kevin was 9 years old, he started to be an odd boy. In the winter when it started snowing. He actually slept in the snow. Kevin's dad didn't notice til 2 hours later. Luckily the neighbors didn't notice a thing. Kevin was fine about this, he loved the snow. Always like to go to a snowy fields.

At the age of 11, Kevin's dad went on vacation. His dad was in the military fighting in the war. And Kevin got a nanny. Which was not what he expected. She was aggressive making him do chores. Kevin had got so angry in his room, that grayish snow came hurdling down. He blinked twice, but it was still there until he hid his emotions. What was this? Did he have powers? All these questions kept appearing in his head.

It was Kevin's 13th birthday. And everything went totally normal, until he made a snowball in his hand. Actually every time there was a snowball fight. Kevin would throw a million snowball at them, like a machine gun. Everybody started to stop hanging out with him that time. They thought he was a freak. But Kevin didn't care, he liked being this freak. And a voice in his head told him to go to Camp Half - Blood.

Physical Appearance: Kevin's appearance is simple, you will always see him in a leather jacket. His leather jacket is always a symbol to him. Kevin wears it all the time, day and night. He has bright blue eyes, almost could be the color of snow. Kevin has pale skin. He's not very athletic, so he may be looking a bit skinny. And his hair is dirty blonde.

Personality: Kevin is the sorta guy that is forgiving. And always likes to be weird with his snow powers. He's really nice if you get to meet him. You will mostly see him Off Campus, the Library, or the Winter Festival. Kevin is always trying to find his way to get a wad of cash. He is no boring matter, he loves to have fun. Kevin doesn't get sad from time to time. He acts like its cool and nothing happened.

Fatal Flaw: Kevin's fatal flaw is most likely to hide his emotions. That's why if he gets bruised or anything he tries to hide it. And if he sad and mad you would see him hide that also.

Pets: None

Talents: Like all Khione children, he has the gift of snow.

Weapons: Kevin has a celestial bronze sword. Which on the hilt has a carving of a snowflake pattern on it. He calls it "Nix." Which is latin for snow.

Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round

Yay! 8D A Khione child!
Accepted

» Thienthy's Characters [New Character]
» orel's characters (new character needs acceptance).
» E.Man's Characters [Added One More Character]
» HybridMickey's Characters (Character -RFA-)
» Victarii's characters (New Character)