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 The sacrifice - Poem

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welshy
out of town girl
welshy


Posts : 3630
Join date : 2011-11-22
Age : 25
Location : burning in the underworld

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PostSubject: The sacrifice - Poem   The sacrifice - Poem I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 30, 2011 2:58 pm

Sitting out on the warm grass,
holding his hand.
Watching the clouds as they pass.
It feels like home.

The rain falls as you wave gooodbye,
The sky inside you turns grey.
He made you a promise but it was a lie.
You are suddenly scared.

Reading about it all over the news,
Crying as his name is called.
His king has been check-mated.
You all lose.

Silent tears streak down, a rose in your hand,
He passes you, wrapped in the union Jack.
You place the flower on top of him, rubbing your bloated stomach.
You whisper "Daddy is finally home."

A girl sits out on the porch,
Holding his dog-tags in your hand.
Her Mother hugs her, saying it will be alright.
Yet the girl feels all alone.

He watches up from the clouds at every acheivment and mistake.
He smiles at every step his daughter takes.
When the time comes, they'll be reunited,
Finay at peace.
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Ninja Poet

Ninja Poet


Posts : 1722
Join date : 2010-11-05
Age : 26
Location : IN THE HARSH NORTH

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PostSubject: Re: The sacrifice - Poem   The sacrifice - Poem I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 30, 2011 3:08 pm

DUUUDE
AMAZING.
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It's so beautiful. =')
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welshy
out of town girl
welshy


Posts : 3630
Join date : 2011-11-22
Age : 25
Location : burning in the underworld

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PostSubject: Re: The sacrifice - Poem   The sacrifice - Poem I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 30, 2011 4:10 pm

Thank you xx
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KaySpyGirl

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Posts : 1132
Join date : 2011-02-01
Age : 25
Location : I don't know.

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PostSubject: Re: The sacrifice - Poem   The sacrifice - Poem I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 30, 2011 8:04 pm

Awesome. Don know a better word for it. Almost made me cry. I never cry.
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cher
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cher


Posts : 2315
Join date : 2011-09-19
Age : 23
Location : I have no idea. I just woke up here, dude.

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PostSubject: Re: The sacrifice - Poem   The sacrifice - Poem I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 30, 2011 9:57 pm

This is beautiful *tear* You even got it past me. The very, very picky and harsh critic. *bows down*
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welshy
out of town girl
welshy


Posts : 3630
Join date : 2011-11-22
Age : 25
Location : burning in the underworld

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PostSubject: Re: The sacrifice - Poem   The sacrifice - Poem I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 01, 2011 4:59 pm

Haha, thanks guys. You all rock!
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