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 The Death of Jacob Hoffer [Open]

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PostSubject: The Death of Jacob Hoffer [Open]   The Death of Jacob Hoffer [Open] I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 22, 2011 3:55 am

" Turn away,
If you could get me a drink
Of water 'cause my lips are chapped and faded
Call my aunt Marie
Help her gather all my things
And bury me in all my favorite colors,
My sisters and my brothers, still,
I will not kiss you,
'Cause the hardest part of this is leaving you.

Now turn away,
'Cause I'm awful just to see
'Cause all my hairs abandoned all my body,
Oh, my agony,
Know that I will never marry,
Baby, I'm just soggy from the chemo
But counting down the days to go
It just ain't living
And I just hope you know

That if you say (if you say)
Goodbye today (Goodbye Today)
I'd ask you to be true ('cause I'd ask you to be true)

'cause the hardest part of this is leaving you
'cause the hardest part of this is leaving you "


Jacob Hoffer had gone to bed feeling miserable, far earlier than he normally would have. He slept. Sleep came easily. But he never woke up. His siblings found him, dead as if sleeping, peacefully in his bed, his cat curled up around his neck. He was then moved and covered with a simple purple sheet, with a golden grape embroidered in it's centre. There were few people there as the body was lit up - Jacob had liked to keep to himself. His battle with leukaemia was over. The cowardly cells of the disease had killed him in his sleep, during day they never would have dared. Jacob was defiant, taking only mortal treatments.

Jacob's Mother would, of course, not notice a thing. Insanity would bring her blissful ignorance. She didn't know, nor did she care, that Jacob had given up his health, and, eventually, his life, just in an attempt to bring her psychological wellbeing. But Dionysus didn't budge. And his Son fell.

" Turn the light off me
Take your arms from me
I don't see any other way
Close your eyes to me
Keep my love for me when you go
Don't make this to hard to say
At only 16 still a beauty queen
Lord I'm dying, let me leave


Goodbye, goodbye to all of this
I've got this golden ship
who said can save me
And tomorrow feels like yesterday
I cannot live this way, I'm sorry darlin'

And I need no more healing
For I can't stop the bleeding
So leave me with this feeling
And let me have this

One more day with you
One more hour for you
I don't see any other way
And don't you see I'm dyin'
Does this explain my crying, hope
I will not see another day

I'll save a place for you
Mend your heart
Even if you go out
Don't make this too hard
To say at only 16 still a beauty queen
Lord I'm dying, let me leave


Goodbye, goodbye to all of this
I've got this golden ship
Who said can save me
And tomorrow feels like yesterday
I cannot feel this way, I'm sorry darling

And I need no more healing
For I can't stop the bleeding
So leave me with this feeling
Help me find a way out
A door to keep the pain out
And I can't bear to stay now

At only 16 still a beauty queen
Lord I'm dying, let me leave


Goodbye, goodbye to all of this
I've got this golden ship
Who said can save me
And tomorrow feels like yesterday
I cannot feel this way, I'm sorry darling

Goodbye, goodbye my love
Goodbye, goodbye my love

Release your hands from me
So I can leave
Lastly, I would like to leave with grace
Today is just too hard
Too hard for me to stay "

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PostSubject: Re: The Death of Jacob Hoffer [Open]   The Death of Jacob Hoffer [Open] I_icon_minitimeTue Oct 25, 2011 4:04 am

OOC: Because I feel like I should, the two songs that I took the lyrics from are Cancer, by My Chemical Romance, and Golden Ship by Gin Wigmore. A song I also wanted to have there was dying die, by Gin Wigmore. As all three are great songs, please take the time to Google 'em and listen. If not all three, the Gin ones. But none are okay too.

As I'm quite proud of the above bit of writing, please tell me what ya think via PM or CB. Please?
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