The Dark Night

A while ago, I thought up of this story, and I plan on making this a manga (I'm still working on it) and so I wanted to know what you think of it!! This is only the first part, but I just want to know what you think!!

There's a small girl, 3 years old. She's playing in her yard with a small dog, whose yapping at her feet. She trips and falls, and then begins to laugh histerically. As she laughs, a butterfly flies from the girl's mother's garden, and onto the girl's nose. Her eyes widen, and begin to sparkle. She gives a smile, and then laughs. The butterfly flies off and the girl run's into her house, shouting "Mama! Mama!"

Inside, the house is light up from the sun outside. The girl runs through the whole house shouting "Mama, Mama!" But cannot find her mother any were. She ends up in the celler, and see's a women in here early 30's. She's lying on the floor, her pale pink dress is splotterd with (JELLY). The young girl's eyes widen, and she shout's "Mamma!!" She runs over to her mother's side, and kneels down.

In the shadows, a boy smiles. He walkes out, with a (CANDY CANE) and goes over to the young girl. "I'm sorry, but there was nothing that I could do." The girl begins to sob. The boy kneels down next to her. "My name is Davin, may I ask what yours is?" He asked. "K-Kathrine." say's the girl. Davin holds out his hand. "We can help you, all it takes is a simple 'yes'." Davin says. Kathrine looks at davin, with her blue-grey eyes. "H-help me?" She sobs. She looks down at her mothers body, the (JELLY) has changed her white apron from white to (PURPLE). Kathrine takes a deep breath, and then takes Davin's hand. This will have been the worst decision of her life.

Ok!! That's all that I have so far, I'd love to see what you think, and if you like it, than I'll make it into a manga series, and perhaps even a story on here!!

Well, I said jelly because the real word was kind of inapropriate for younger kids or whatever.

Ooh ooh

We're no strangers to love
You know the rules and so do I
A full commitment's what I'm thinking of
You wouldn't get this from any other guy
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand

Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching but
You're too shy to say it
Inside we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it
And if you ask me how I'm feeling
Don't tell me you're too blind to see

Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye

Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

(Ooh, give you up)
(Ooh, give you up)
(Ooh)
Never gonna give, never gonna give
(Give you up)
(Ooh)
Never gonna give, never gonna give
(Give you up)

We've know each other for so long
Your heart's been aching but
You're too shy to say it
Inside we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it

I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand

Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

Please no spamming, or Rick Rolling. Thanks! :3

Whilst I do commend you for having those lyrics, like stated before, please no spamming or trolling.