coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED

Hi Guest,
I am coolawesomeme and here are my characters;

Approved Characters:

Half-Bloods

Name: Jake Nightflare
Age/Birthday: 15 - 7/5/1997
Gender: Male
God Parent: Apollo
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Selena Dawson (Mother)
Years in Camp: 5
Brief History: Jake was dropped off at Camp Half-Blood at age 7 by his mom. His mom had gotten a message from Apollo himself to send him to Camp Half-Blood and let him be trained. He has defeated a cyclops when it was invited in by a rouge camper. He has since then become a great archer.
Physical Appearance: Jake is a tall, tan teen. He is tan because of his ability to shoot sun-beams out of his hands. He has cocoa brown eyes and a sharp nose. He can usually be seen wearing the color red.
Personality: Jake is a great guy, who loves to have fun and also is very friendly. He likes to play with his pet Blu. To most of the campers, he is a nice, fun loving guy. One thing he does not like, is getting a haircut.
Fatal Flaw: Claustrophobic
Pets: Blu (Mini Sun Serpent)
Talents: The ability to be healed when in direct sunlight
Weapons: Bow & Arrow
Year-Round or Summer: Year Round
Other:

Name: Bob Sapphiresword
Age/Birthday: 17 - 8/3/1994
Gender: Male
God Parent: Athena
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: James Morris (Father)
Years in Camp: 2
Brief History: Bob arrived at the camp at age 15. He came there when his father worried about him because he was being hunted by monsters. Many new campers consider to to be one of the best at making plans. He is now a skilled swordsman and a valued Athena cabin member.
Physical Appearance: Bob is an average height, handsome guy. He has a wide jaw and broad shoulders. He has emerald green eyes with a wide nose. He can usually be seen wearing the color green.
Personality: Bob is a nice, friendly and smart guy. He is always friendly to new campers. He is nice to pretty much everyone. He has a few fears of spiders, snakes, alligators and the worst, CLOWNS!
Fatal Flaw: Procrastinator, Fears
Pets: NONE
Talents: Makes really good plans
Weapons: Sword
Year-Round or Summer: Summer
Other:

Name: Selena Magykfyre
Age/Birthday: 14 - 2/9/1997
Gender: Female
God Parent: Hecate
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: John Rider (Father)
Years in Camp: 1
Brief History: Selena ran away from home when monsters started bothering her. She also ran away because because of her, monsters were also following her mom. Then Selena continued traveling until she met a satyr. Then, the satyr escorted her to Camp Half-Blood.
Physical Appearance: Selena is an average height, tan teen. She has green eyes and long hair. She is a slim and curly haired teen. She usually wears the color purple.
Personality: Selena is a great girl, who likes to have fun. She likes to hang out in/ near water. To the rest of the campers, she is a nice girl. She loves dogs and cats.
Fatal Flaw: Pride, Ambition
Pets: NONE
Talents: Magic Powers from her Mom
Weapons: Twin Daggers
Year-Round or Summer: Year Round
Other:

Unapproved Characters:

Half-Bloods

RESERVED SPOT FOR CHARACTER 4

Thanks,
coolawesomeme

Jake:
He doesn't appear to have any flaws. Both personality wise, and talent wise. I don't think he should be able to shoot sunbeams out of his hands, but maybe he can use the sun's rays to heal wounds? That sounds like a cool power I haven't heard of yet.

Bob:
Could you give him some personality flaws? Maybe he's too laid back most of the time, or he has fears, or he can be annoyingly nice. It's up to you, really.

Nico wrote:: Jake:
He doesn't appear to have any flaws. Both personality wise, and talent wise. I don't think he should be able to shoot sunbeams out of his hands, but maybe he can use the sun's rays to heal wounds? That sounds like a cool power I haven't heard of yet.

Bob:
Could you give him some personality flaws? Maybe he's too laid back most of the time, or he has fears, or he can be annoyingly nice. It's up to you, really.

Alright, I'll change it. Thanks for the feedback!

EDIT: Changed it. I'll take any other feedback.

Bob is accepted.

As for Jake, what I meant was, whenever he's in the sun, he gets a little stronger, and his minor wounds are healed.

Nico wrote:: Bob is accepted.

As for Jake, what I meant was, whenever he's in the sun, he gets a little stronger, and his minor wounds are healed.

Oh, ok.

UPDATED

Accepted! Thanks for editing! Welcome to CHB!

Thanks!

Jake was accepted in that acceptance.

New Character: Selena Magykfyre

You could use a few more flaws.

Other than that, accepted.

Koala wrote:: You could use a few more flaws.

Other than that, accepted.

Thanks, I'll add a few.

Uhm, I looked through your statistics and out of 183 posts you have roughly 15 posts that are RPing. The rest of your posts are in the games part of our forum, so you won't be getting a son of Poseidon anytime soon.

Just saying.

Princess Emzan wrote:: Uhm, I looked through your statistics and out of 183 posts you have roughly 15 posts that are RPing. The rest of your posts are in the games part of our forum, so you won't be getting a son of Poseidon anytime soon.

Just saying.

Yes, I know. That's why I listed him as Planned.

Selena is accepted, I guess. Just include more detail on your next character.

I deleted Bob because I wanted to change his age and then listed him as Unapproved. Except for that he is the same.

Looks good! He's just missing a birthday and a few more flaws would be great!

Updated. I can't think of anymore flaws except for the one I added.

Good enough. Accepted!