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The Time Travelling Detective
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PostSubject: axe to sword (private to Lord_of_the_Sea   axe to sword (private to Lord_of_the_Sea I_icon_minitimeTue Jul 05, 2011 1:26 pm

Axl walked in to the arena fingering the hilt of his axe. looking at the sky he noticed it was a claer day and the sun seemed to spark the axe making it slowly fire red. glancing at the nearest people he noticed a boy no more than the age of twelve. Axl's shout carried across the arena directed to the child
I challange you boy


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PostSubject: Re: axe to sword (private to Lord_of_the_Sea   axe to sword (private to Lord_of_the_Sea I_icon_minitimeTue Jul 05, 2011 1:35 pm

1) Your roleplays must be at least four complete sentences.
2) This isn't really set up correctly. It should look something like this:
Axl sauntered into the arena, gripping the hilt of his axe. Axl held his axe to the sky with a grin. "I challenge you!" he bellowed. His voice echoed across the arena, resinating with a dull ring.

That's the minimum of what your post's length should be, and that's how it should be set up. With proper punctuation, quotations, and (generally) correct grammar.

That post I did was just an example, please don't use it exactly when editing your original post.

Thank you!
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