It seems good! I'd love to read more.
About the "Blood poured from Elly's stomach and arms, and she coughed up blood." part; I think you need more detail, as opposed to what Artemismoon said. . . Something like, "Rivers of thick, red blood bubbled out of her torn stomach . . ." Don't copy it word for word. By the way, I'm joking . . . Unless, you want to add more detail, of course. :D