| Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] | |
|
+5Angel Colby Ninja Poet Nico Remplissage 9 posters |
Author | Message |
---|
Remplissage Golden Oldie
Posts : 4998 Join date : 2010-03-30 Age : 29 Location : Standing in a shower of narcissism.
| Subject: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] Sun Mar 27, 2011 7:51 pm | |
| Prologue The world was in flames. After two years of collapse, the government of America shattered. The economy fell apart, and the currency was useless altogether. People began rioting, and the few innocents, a group that consisted of only about 20,000, were shoved into underground communities. The walls were plated with metal, and the doors sealed. Foreign countries began throwing around the idea of war. The strongest country in the world was being destroyed under the pressure of rebellion. They were weak, and the Middle East was strong. It was official, the United States of America was in ruins. This is where we are now... April 3rd, 2013 Shaking... God, there was so much shaking. The vibration of the Earth threw us upon our backs, and it knocked over everything. It could've been the wrath of god, or it could've been an earthquake. The only fact was that it was neither. Standing in UC-190, you could realize quickly that it wasn't an earthquake, nor was it any wrath of god. There was no god in this new land. The quiet, whistling sounds they make before pounding the earth, the large, gluttonous clouds of ash that devoured everything in their path. This wasn't an earthquake. It was a bombing. Clutching the edge of a desk, I gasped for air, my body shaking violently. The only thing I could do was count how many they had dropped here so far. One...two...three...four...five... The list continued on, and continued to grow. Smoke began creeping through the door of 190, most of the sealant just melting right away. That was when everything grew quiet. It was so silent in that under-town that you could hear a pen drop from the other side of the community. This was it. This was the end. And the only thing you could hear as the place I had thought was the safest on Earth was a foreign news-broadcaster reading a report of the bombing, the sound drifting from a radio nearby. "May the lord have mercy on their souls."
Last edited by Remplissage on Sat Apr 02, 2011 11:49 am; edited 2 times in total | |
|
| |
Nico Chatbox Ruler
Posts : 5539 Join date : 2010-12-04 Age : 24 Location : your mom's house
| Subject: Re: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] Sun Mar 27, 2011 7:55 pm | |
| OhEmGee. I love it Remp. Write more now, or I'll bite you. *Snap, snap* | |
|
| |
Ninja Poet
Posts : 1722 Join date : 2010-11-05 Age : 26 Location : IN THE HARSH NORTH
| Subject: Re: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] Sun Mar 27, 2011 7:56 pm | |
| I. Like. Love. it. Seriously, it's wicked, man... You should be a writer or something... | |
|
| |
Colby Elite Writer
Posts : 5714 Join date : 2010-06-26 Age : 27 Location : 42 degrees to your right
| Subject: Re: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] Sun Mar 27, 2011 8:23 pm | |
| Sounds... scary and thirlling and very omeness | |
|
| |
Angel The Puppet Master
Posts : 4752 Join date : 2010-07-10 Age : 30 Location : in zans belly huhuh
| Subject: Re: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] Mon Mar 28, 2011 10:03 pm | |
| ...Stop being amazing at everything xD It thoroughly depresses me. | |
|
| |
tethys Experienced Poster
Posts : 4230 Join date : 2010-05-13 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:13 pm | |
| Although I'd prefer America, er, not dead, it seems interesting so far. Write more! | |
|
| |
Remplissage Golden Oldie
Posts : 4998 Join date : 2010-03-30 Age : 29 Location : Standing in a shower of narcissism.
| Subject: Re: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] Sat Apr 02, 2011 11:50 am | |
| Alright, new 'chapter' posted. I've decided to do many of these small entries as chapters instead of a few long ones. It's to make it seem as if it's in someone's log, or something like that. | |
|
| |
Baby Lex Experienced Poster
Posts : 2917 Join date : 2010-10-10 Age : 28 Location : Dumbhairshire.
| Subject: Re: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] Sat Apr 02, 2011 9:05 pm | |
| | |
|
| |
Remplissage Golden Oldie
Posts : 4998 Join date : 2010-03-30 Age : 29 Location : Standing in a shower of narcissism.
| Subject: Re: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] Sat Apr 02, 2011 9:08 pm | |
|
Last edited by Remplissage on Sat Apr 02, 2011 9:17 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| |
Baby Lex Experienced Poster
Posts : 2917 Join date : 2010-10-10 Age : 28 Location : Dumbhairshire.
| Subject: Re: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] Sat Apr 02, 2011 9:15 pm | |
| YOU MAKE ME SOUND SO SMART. xD | |
|
| |
Remplissage Golden Oldie
Posts : 4998 Join date : 2010-03-30 Age : 29 Location : Standing in a shower of narcissism.
| Subject: Re: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] Sat Apr 02, 2011 9:25 pm | |
| | |
|
| |
Banana Moderator
Posts : 3497 Join date : 2010-12-28 Age : 27 Location : In your closet.
| Subject: Re: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] Sat Apr 02, 2011 11:54 pm | |
| | |
|
| |
Zan Mega Asshole Duo
Posts : 10035 Join date : 2010-05-04 Age : 26 Location : butthole PA
| Subject: Re: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] Thu Apr 28, 2011 2:19 pm | |
| HUHA. Adam I hatelove your writing. xD You so good at it. Like, in that scary way. If I ever get rich from harassing the president (WHICH I WILL ONE DAY) then you and I shall write a book. xD | |
|
| |
Nico Chatbox Ruler
Posts : 5539 Join date : 2010-12-04 Age : 24 Location : your mom's house
| Subject: Re: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] Thu Apr 28, 2011 10:24 pm | |
| -The last sentence was so spectacular. I WANT TO KNOW "WHO ES BOMBING US!"
Cliff hangers are epic. And I didn't have to bite you! *Stops snapping with mouth.* Good.- | |
|
| |
Sponsored content
| Subject: Re: Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] | |
| |
|
| |
| Winter [ A Nuclear Fallout Story ] | |
|