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Sundial
Posts: 7 Join date: 2010-11-09 Location: Somewhere over the rainbow~ xP
 | Subject: Sundial's Characters (Waiting approval) Tue Nov 09, 2010 10:39 pm | |
| Name: Violet Mayer Age/birthday: 12 years old, birthday is March 30 Gender: female Years in camp: her 1st year. Year-round camper. God parent: Dionysus, god of wine, parties and madness. Mortal parent: Emily Mayer Physical appearance: 5-foot, 2inches. Weighs 100lbs. Green eyes, like grapevines. Slightly curly black hair that almost reaches her shoulders. She has a slight tan. You'll probably see her wearing jeans and a Camp Half-Blood shirt, with sneakers. Personality: friendly, extroverted, sarcastic, laid back. Can get so talkative that she may be annoying. Loves to talk and is a little lazy. Before a battle, she would usually spend her time giving out refreshments, but joins the fight after everyone is refreshed. Loves leopards, panthers and tigers (because they're Dionysus's symbols). Likes to garden and party. Pets: none Weapons: bow and six arrows of Celestial Bronze. When she shoots the arrows, they magically appear back in her brown quiver within a few minutes (like Riptide). It really depends on how far away the arrows are. When she's in the mortal world, the Mist makes the quiver appear to be a regular sack. Talents: gardening and making new friends. Other: has the power to grow grapevines out of nowhere, but it drains out most of her strength. Her fatal flaw is: she never hesitates. If she has a battle plan, she will do it without thinking twice.
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Juboo SICJ A WPMDERF; MEMBER

Posts: 2655 Join date: 2010-10-09 Age: 14
 | Subject: Re: Sundial's Characters (Waiting approval) Tue Nov 09, 2010 11:43 pm | |
| More discritive on physical Appearance and Personality |
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Sundial
Posts: 7 Join date: 2010-11-09 Location: Somewhere over the rainbow~ xP
 | Subject: Re: Sundial's Characters (Waiting approval) Wed Nov 10, 2010 12:00 am | |
| Okay, I'll do that. (but I'm not a really descriptive person..) |
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Juboo SICJ A WPMDERF; MEMBER

Posts: 2655 Join date: 2010-10-09 Age: 14
 | Subject: Re: Sundial's Characters (Waiting approval) Wed Nov 10, 2010 1:25 am | |
| The admins and moderators like that it to be discriptive. |
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Sundial
Posts: 7 Join date: 2010-11-09 Location: Somewhere over the rainbow~ xP
 | Subject: Re: Sundial's Characters (Waiting approval) Tue Nov 16, 2010 9:00 pm | |
| Is this good enough? I'm not quite sure. Any suggestions will do. |
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Mazzie

Posts: 101 Join date: 2010-08-24 Age: 14
 | Subject: Re: Sundial's Characters (Waiting approval) Wed Nov 17, 2010 5:37 pm | |
| My friend is making a sibling. She wants to run for CL do you ? |
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Sundial
Posts: 7 Join date: 2010-11-09 Location: Somewhere over the rainbow~ xP
 | Subject: Re: Sundial's Characters (Waiting approval) Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:20 pm | |
| No, but thanks for telling me. |
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Juboo SICJ A WPMDERF; MEMBER

Posts: 2655 Join date: 2010-10-09 Age: 14
 | Subject: Re: Sundial's Characters (Waiting approval) Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:49 pm | |
| It's better, but there's always room for more, maybe just a tad more like how much she weighs, simple things. |
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Sundial
Posts: 7 Join date: 2010-11-09 Location: Somewhere over the rainbow~ xP
 | Subject: Re: Sundial's Characters (Waiting approval) Wed Nov 17, 2010 8:06 pm | |
| Thanks for giving me all the suggestions to improve my character form. Any more suggestions, perhaps?... |
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Juboo SICJ A WPMDERF; MEMBER

Posts: 2655 Join date: 2010-10-09 Age: 14
 | Subject: Re: Sundial's Characters (Waiting approval) Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:32 am | |
| Uhh not on the top of my head, but I'll let you know. |
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Sundial
Posts: 7 Join date: 2010-11-09 Location: Somewhere over the rainbow~ xP
 | Subject: Re: Sundial's Characters (Waiting approval) Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:54 pm | |
| Okay, thanks. Does anybody else have any suggestions to improve my charrie? I want it to look as best as it can be. (I'm a little perfectionist...) |
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