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Join date : 2012-08-27

PostSubject: Allie101300's characters   Mon Aug 27, 2012 7:11 pm

Name: Allie Johnson
Age: 12
Birthday:June 16 2000
God parent: Athena
Claimed: yes
Mortal family: Adam Johnson(Father)
Mia Johnson(twin)
Connie Johnson(sister)
Years in camp:1
Brief history: She was born in Canada to a very nice family. But when Athena left her house her dad remarried. Things got really bad and she finally left with her twin. They found a satyr and were told they were half bloods. Then they finally made it to camp half blood.

Physical appearence:Allie has straight caramel colored shoulder length hair. She has hazel brown eyes. Allie is not very strong but she does have some muscles. Allie is very skinny and has a dancers body.

Personality: Allie is a shy quiet girl around people she doesnt know. Around people she knows she is talkative and outgoing. To her old friends her nickname is chatterbox. It describes her very well.

Fatal flaw: loyalty
Pets: 2 dogs, Hershey, and Lexy
Talents:Dance, Reading
Weapons: A regular shield and sword
Year round or summer: Year round
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PostSubject: Re: Allie101300's characters   Mon Aug 27, 2012 7:38 pm

◆ hi!,
--------------Welcome, but the way, call me Hannah or Han please. :) And, I just have a few pointers!
--------------Ok, first, you say Allie has a twin who is a demigod, correct? Well, you'd need to fill out ANOTHER form for her as well, since she counts as another character.
--------------Also, your length on everything is good, but just to make them better, you could go into depth more. Add what their childhood was like, how they acted with their father and siblings, and even how they got to Camp. And also, same for personality and appearance. Go into depth more, what do they wear, weight, height, stuff liek that. And maybe explain why the nickname 'chatterbox' describes her so well.
--------------Also, for talents, maybe you could explain then better. How do they dance so well? Did they take lessons as children? That could go into history, and reading. How is reading a talent? Do they read very fast? Or, if they just enjoy reading, then put that with maybe personality, you know, as a hobby. And also, include a little power. What did they inherit from their goddess mother? Are they good in battle? Are they very smart? Thant kind of thing.
--------------Of course, I am not responsible for accepting characters, so you don't HAVE to listen to me. But, those are just some pointers! Hope you have an awesome time here! :3

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PostSubject: Re: Allie101300's characters   Mon Aug 27, 2012 7:41 pm

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