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 Ilanahope's Charrie

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Join date : 2012-08-06

PostSubject: Ilanahope's Charrie   Mon Aug 06, 2012 2:28 pm

Name: First and Last Name-- Luna Christine Korrs
Age/Birthday: 17, 8/16
Gender: Female
God Parent: Apollo
Claimed: Yes or No-- Yes
Mortal Family: First and Last Name/s-- Mom- Cindy Kylie Korrs, Step Dad el Lee Korrs, Step Sisters- Jessica and Jacklynn Korrs
Years in Camp: 7
Brief History: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details! She lived in NYC for all of her life. She loved it there. Until her mom met Dan Her life was a disaster. Dan and the twins hated her. the twins wouldn't do their chores and blame it on her and Daniel would ground her for no reason.So she ran away and eventually came here. Now look at her.
Physical Appearance: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details! Luna is tall and slim. She has ever-changing eyes that usually are a light green color but sometimes change with her mood. Her hair is a goldish blonde color and is up to her shoulders. She has one scar on her wrist in a diagnol line.
Personality: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details! Bubbly, sweet, creative, caring, nice. A typical camper. She loves music and can never be found with out an ipod. Alot of the time she's in her own world day dreaming. So you won't be able to get her attention alot. But unlike her siblings she sucks at shooting a bow and arrow. Be warned she has an awful temper so don't go and get her mad. She can also fight with a knife pretty well seeing as she survived the battle of the labryinth and manhattan. And be warned she will not regret murdering you if you hurt her friends and or half siblings
Talents: Singing, writing, dancing, reading
Weapons: Gold Knife called sunset
Year-Round or Summer: Year Round
Other:Her Fatal Flaw is Hubris / Loyalty

Last edited by ilanahope on Mon Aug 06, 2012 8:42 pm; edited 2 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Ilanahope's Charrie   Mon Aug 06, 2012 4:30 pm

Firstly, welcome to the site! Secondly, before I can accept it, I'll need a few more flaws in your character, personality-wise.
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Claymore Warrior

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Join date : 2012-03-23
Age : 19
Location : Philippines

PostSubject: Re: Ilanahope's Charrie   Mon Aug 06, 2012 8:38 pm

where is the... fatal flaw?
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PostSubject: Re: Ilanahope's Charrie   Tue Aug 07, 2012 3:43 am

Great character! I just have a few tiny notes. Firstly, thanks for editing her personality; it's much better now. The Fatal Flaw part of the form usually has it's own section, but that's not mandatory. It would just make the flaw clearer. And one last thing, the Greeks used Celestial Bronze weapons, not golden ones. The Romans used them. So if you could just change the Gold Knife to a Celestial Bronze one it would be great.
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