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PostSubject: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Sun Jul 08, 2012 8:36 pm

Alright, I'm going to try and make this my LAST character topic. Hopefully that'll work out... Anyway. Please don't post here unless you are an Admin or a Mod accepting or telling me to edit my characters. Comments are welcome, just not in this topic. I have removed all of my characters except for Chloe. Acacia is still around, but she's about to die so I'm not putting her in ths topic. She's still in the old one though. Also, I'm bringing Zaylie out of inactivity. She doesn't need re-accepting though, because I only changed her appearance to suit her play-by. Without further ado, here are my characters...

Character Count : 7
Zaylie Marie Brile, daghter of Poseidon, 17
Katriel Neve, daughter of Khione, 17
Chloe Leate, daughter of Demeter, 16
Jade Sharpe, daughter of Hermes, 16
Ameilia Faith Smith, daughter of Aphrodite, 15
Terra Knighte, daughter of Nyx, 15
Willow Grace Mitchells, daughter of Phanes, 18

Character Colours:
Zaylie = lightseagreen
Katriel = deepskyblue
Chloe = springgreen
Jade = hotpink
Ameilia = violet
Terra = #CC6666
Willow = #3D9140

Relationships:
Zaylie - Single
Katriel - Dibbed
Chloe - Single
Jade - Single
Ameilia - Dibbed
Terra - Single
Willow - Single

Play-bys:
Zaylie • Ariana Grande
Katriel • Katelyn Tarver
Chloe • Amanda Seyfried
Jade • Victoria Justice
Ameilia • Random
Terra • Jacqueline Emerson
Willow • Random (I think)

Topics:
Zaylie:
New Person
Waling or Sulking? [B A L I]
Katriel:
watch as the story unfolds [[private]]
Sitting on Top of the World {P U R P L E}
Chloe:
A Daughter of Apollo
It's all laughs and giggles until someone gets hurt (OPEN)
Jade:
Sun-Baking (OPEN to first)
Writing A Novel [OPEN TO FIRST REPLY]
Ameilia:
New, if that wasn't Obvious (OPEN)
Swimming and Sun Tanning (Balisugar)
Terra:
None yet
Willow:
The Swaying of the Willow


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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Sun Jul 08, 2012 8:36 pm





Name:
    Zaylie Marie Brile


Gender:
    Female


Age:
    17


Birthday:
    23 February


Godly Parent:
    Poseidon


Claimed:
    Yes


Years at Camp:
    4


Mortal Family:
    • Mother (deceased): Eliza Brile


Brief History:
    Zaylie's history is definitely one of the worser ones at Camp Half-Blood. Since she's a Big Three child Zaylie attracted a lot of mosters from a young age. Sice she was 10, in fact. Her mother kept moving around, trying to lose the trail of monsters. It didn't work though. Eventually there were so many monsters they couldn't escape. Zaylie's mother drove her to Camp Half-Blood. As they were climbing the hill one of the monsters caught up to them. It slashed at Zaylie, drawing blood. As it tried to attack again Zaylie's mother jumped in front of her. Instead of killing Zaylie the monster killed her mother. Spurred by wild fear Zaylie scrambled up the hill and made it to Camp Half-Blood.


Physical Appearance:
    Zaylie is very pretty. But some would say that her beauty is a bit synthetic. Zaylie is of average weight and average height, standing at around 5'6". Zaylie has curves, and she isn't afraid to show them off.
    Zaylie's skin is very light. But strangely enough she doesnt tan or get freckles. She has maybe a max of oe or two freckles on her entire body. It's weird, but her mum had really pale skin so it could just be heritage.
    Zaylie's face is heart-shaped and of regular size. Her nose is also of average size as are her lips. They are naturally pink in colour. Zaylie has pitch black eyelashes of average length. Her eyes are a very pretty brown. They look like they're dark brown, but as soon as the sun hits them they appear to be light brown. Zaylie just calls them brown. Her eyes are of regular shape and size.
    Zaylie's hair is her stand out feature. It is the shade of a red velvet cupcake. She dyed it like that when she was 15 because she was bored and wanted a change. She absolutely loves her hair. Lots of people around camp simply know her by her hair. This hair falls to the bottom of her ribs, so it is quite long. Zaylie's eyebrows are brown, the shade her hair used to be. She couldn't be bothered to dye them along with her hair.


Personality:
    Zaylie is a generally pleasant person. After her mother's death she has tried to make as many friends as possible so she won't ever be alone again. She especially enjoys hanging out wih boys. Mainly because Zalia is a huge flirt. One thing about Zaylie is she can get annoyed very easily. And she's not afraid to say that someone's annoyed her. Most people think this is just part of her charm for some reason. So she generally doesn't lose friends from it. If someone is mean or rude to Zaylie she'll instantly hold it against them for ages. A few weeks at the very least. Usually much, much longer thougher. Zaylie is quite bubbly and energetic mostly, except when she first wakes up.


Fatal Flaw:
    Zaylie holds grudges for way too long


Pets:
    None


Talents:
    Ω Water Manipulation: This is Zaylie's major talent. She can control salt and fresh water. At first she could only control salt water, but now after 4 years of training she can control fresh water as well. By fresh I mean out of a river or a stream, not a water bottle or anything like that.
    Ω Breathe Underwater: This is pretty simple to understand. Zaylie can breathe underwater as normally as she can on land.
    Ω Stay Dry: Once again, this is pretty simple. If Zaylie doesn't want to get wet then she doesn't.


Weapons:
    A dagger that turns into two earrings shaped like dolphins. To summon it Zaylie just has to touch one of the earrings.



Year-Round or Summer:
    Year-Round


Other:
    Her play-by is Ariana Grande. Accepted by Crispy Bacon via PM.




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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Sun Jul 08, 2012 8:36 pm






Name:
    Katriel Neve


Gender:
    Female


Age:
    17


Birthday:
    5 November


Godly Parent:
    Khione


Claimed:
    Yes


Years at Camp:
    10


Mortal Family:
    All deceased


Brief History:
    Katriel has been at Camp for a long, long time. And it's all thanks to one day when she was 7. Katriel had just come home from school. Her father worked from home, so Katriel always walked home from school because it was only down the street from her house. When she got home Katriel looked around the house for her father. Bit he wasn't in the living room, dining room or the kitchen. Katriel looked in his study next and found a horrific sight. Her father was lying across the table, almost dead. There was some strange golden dust around him and a bronze knife was clutched in his left hand. Once Katriel had run over to him be quickly explained everything. Her mum, camp and the knife all became clear. After saying 'I love you' he died. Katriel wanted to honor her father's last wish so she followed her father's instructions and came to Camp Half-Blood without delay.


Physical Appearance:
    Katriel is a reasonably pretty girl. She's not the ideal beauty, but who is? Katriel is reasonably tall for her age. She stands at 5'9". Katriel likes her jeight. Mainly because she isn't short, but she's not the tallest girl around either. Katriel has a reather curvy figure that many boys admire. She is also quite lightweight, despite being tall. Katriel has rather long fingers and toes, but they suit her appearance.
    Katriel's skion is quite light in colour. It used to be lighter before coming to Camp. But after ten years of basically all sun her skin was bound to darken, if only a bit. Katriel's skin has a couple of freckles here an there, but not many. She also doesn't have any scars yet. And she would like to keep it this way.
    Katriel's face is in the middle of oval- and heart-shaped. It isn't as pointy as a heart-shaped face, but itr isn't as rounded as an oval-shaped one either. Her nose would probably be considered to be on the smaller side, but not by too much. Her eyes are of a regular shape and size. They are framed by Katriel's long and dark eyelashes. Her irises are a simple coffe brown in colour. Katriel's lips are a light pink, unless she decides to colour them. They are often open in a smile, which reveals her straight and white teeth.
    Katriel's hair is a middleish shade of blonde. It is pretty straight, but not dead straight. Her hair falls to the bottom of her shoulder bkades. It isn't too long or too short. When it comes to styling it Katriel doesn't try very hard. She usually just leaves it out, or she ties it up in a ponytail. Her eyebrows are a draker blonde than her hair, amost brown in fact, and arch slightly.
    When it comes to clothing it's pretty much the same as her hair for Katriel. She'll usually just have a shirt and shorts or jeans etc. But she can be fancy when she wants.


Personality:
    Katriel is a very practical girl. She doesn't like to believe in destinies or fates. She likes to think that your life goes the way it does by you making the decsions. Katriel is a rather sensible person as well. She doesn't really do many things on impulse, but she still knows how to have fun. Just not stupid or dangerous 'fun'. She does react on instinct sometimes though, just not on a regular basis.
    Katriel is a very good friend. She is loyal and caring. But it's a bit hard for someone to get to know the real Katriel. They'll usually just see her outer shell. The kind and bubbly Katriel. And this is a lot of the real Katriel, but definitely not all of her. She refrains from telling people about her past. It scares her, and the memories of it hide away in some dark corner of her mind. But Katriel usually stays positive and smiley.
    Katriel obviously has a few negative traits though. Firstly, she is very stubborn. If she sets her mind to something then there's no hope of changing it. But she will if it's the more sensible thing to do. You won't find Katriel getting herself killed to keep a promise. Secondly she can sometimes get annoyed at small things. Small noises or maybe certain people. Washing machines especially annoy her.


Fatal Flaw:
    Katriel is very stubborn


Pets:
    None


Talents:
    ❄ Ice/Snow Manipulation: This is easier for Katriel because she's just maniplating something that's already there. Sometimes she morphs ice into weapons, usually shaped like icicles. She likes to make snowmans etc.
    ❄ Ice/Snow Creation: As well as manipulating ice and snow Katriel can create them both. Ice is easier because she just has to freeze water. Snow requires more steps. As well as freezing water Katriel can also freeze other liquids. She likes to make icy pops and things like that. A darker side to this power is that Katriel can freeze blood. She can kill someone just by grabbing part of them and using her power. Of course, death isn't instantaneous. They'd live maybe hour or so before their blood was completely frozen and they died. And if they get a good heat source before the hour they'll live.
    ❄ Cold Toleration: This is a pretty simple power. Katriel can stand much colder temperatures than other humans. She could probably stand in a blizzard and live.


Weapons:
    Katriel doesn't own any weapons that are hers alone. She usually just makes an icicle weapon (they have some of her power in them so they work like Celestial Bronze) or she borrows one from Camp.


Year-Round or Summer:
    Year-Round


Other:
    Her play-by is Katelyn Tarver




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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Sun Jul 08, 2012 8:37 pm




eliana petriolis, gatherer huntress
When Eliana had heard about the battle at Camp she didn't really know whether to go or not. Hunters generally weren't welcome at Camp Half-Blood. Personally Eliana thought the Campers were just sore losers as the Hunters had beaten them at every game of Capture the Flag they'd had. Anyway, she didn't know if they like it if a group of immortal girls charged in and started killing some monsters. As she was thinking she spotted Charlie, her Group Leader, sprinting towards Camp Half-Blood. So, with a light shrug, Eliana took off after her. Now she was in a small clearing, firing arrow after arrow at monster after monster. Luckily her quiver somehow managed to collect the fired arrows, so she wouldn't run out anytime soon. The monsters started closing in on her, restricting her space. Eliana twirled around in a circle, silver hunting knife in hand. All the Empousai around her exploded into dust after receiving gaping wounds. In her brief moment of rest Eliana looked around. Where were the other Hunters? "Hello."






ELIANA PETRIOLIS

Name: Eliana Petriolis

Age: Appears 16 (really 2016)

Birthday: 1 January (she was born in the year 4 B.C.)

Gender: Female

Godly Parent: Aglaia - Grace of Splendor

Claimed: Yes

Mortal Family: None (actually, she probably has great, great, great etc nieces or something but she doesn't know of any mortal family).

Years in Hunters: 2000 years (she joined in 12 A.D.)

Group: Gatherers (although after 2 millennia she could be in any group)

Brief History: Eliana's father loved Aglaia (although he didn't know she was a Goddess). Eliana reminded him of her so much that he never wanted Eliana to abandon him like Aglaia did. He forbad her to leave the house and, just to make sure, in the days he posted a guard outside her bedroom and in the nights he locked her door. She never even went into the garden, she had stay in her room all the time. Eliana had a big window to let light in, but only two tiny bits at the top could open (they were there to let air in and were never closed). Eliana's mortal brothers and their friends would often tease and torment her about not being allowed out of her room. Eventually she hated boys and men alike. A week before her 16th birthday Eliana started to prey to Artemis. She prayed for freedom. She did this every night in hopes that her prayers would be answered. Eliana woke very early on the morning of her 16th birthday, so early the sun wasn't up yet. She got up and went to see if the door was locked, she did this out of habit - always hoping that it might not be locked one day. And that day was today. The knob turned easily in her hand and there wasn't a guard outside. Eliana quickly got dressed and slipped out of her room. It took her a while to find an exit because she had never seen the rest of her house before. When she did get out she went straight to the forest. There Artemis was waiting for her and Eliana immediately joined the Huntresses. *Note: Eliana lived in Greece.

Physical Appearance: Eliana is quite pretty and very elegant. She has glossy blue-black hair that falls to the bottom of her ribs. Her eyes are the colour of a polished Amethyst and are framed by long black eyelashes. She has absolutely perfect teeth. Eliana's skin is quite pale with a hint of a tan (it is pale because she never went outside, but it has a hint of a tan because she always sat by her window). Her skin has no blemishes or freckles. She has slender shoulders and the rest of her body is slim as well. Her arms and legs are slightly muscled from using weapons, but it is only noticeable if you look really closely. Eliana is quite tall for her age. She has long legs and long fingers and toes. She has a sapphire stud earring in each ear and always wears them, even when she sleeps. Her only other jewelery is a silver chain bracelet (it is actually her hunting knife). Most boys like the look of her, but she despises them. They can see the disgust in her eyes so they generally stay away. Whenever foolish ones make a move on her she beats them up or gets Artemis to change them into a jackolope.

Personality: When with girls Eliana is kind, thoughtful and very approachable. She becomes attached to all the Hunters because she is possibly the oldest Huntress still around and remebers when all the other girls came. Whenever a Hunter passes away Eliana is always one of the first people to arrive for mourning. She is incredibly loyal to her friends and the lady Artemis. On the few occasions that she meets boys she becomes high and mighty and annoyingly superior. She hates men and boys and is not afraid to show it. Eliana is very inteligent. She speaks lots of languages. Sure, some of them aren't used anymore but they still count. She is quite competitive and she hates being beaten. She doesn't like people besting her and will keep trying to best them until she does. Luckily after 2016 years of living most people can't beat her so they don't see this more unpleasant side of her personality. Eliana loves being free and hates being restricted (by ropes or otherwise).

Likes/Dislikes:

Likes - Being a Hunter of Artemis (she regards it as the best decision of her life), her silver hunting knife (a gift from her mother, so it is very precious to her), her personal tent; a gift from Artemis for following her for 2 millenia, Greece, travelling to new countries/areas.

Dislikes - Boys/Men (it is more appropriate to say she hates them), tomatoes, conceited/spoiled people (boy or girl), bugs that bite, spiders, snakes (unless they are tiny).
Talents: Eliana is very good at singing and dancing as well as navigating and tracking. She is also very good at combat and healing but this only because she has had 2000 years of practice.

Weapons: For long range she uses her bow and arrows. For short range she uses her silver hunting knife. It morphs into a sliver chain bracelet when tapped on the hilt. She named it Spledor to honour her mother.

Other: Nowadays Eliana prefers to be called Eli. She is one of Artemis' most trusted advisors. She has been offered the Liutenant's (is that how you spell it?) position before, but Eliana does not wish to lead, only follow (but not mindlessly).

ACCEPTED


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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Sun Jul 08, 2012 8:37 pm





Name:
    Saskia Wilson


Gender:
    Female


Age:
    16


Birthday:
    13 June


Godly Parent:
    Thanatos


Claimed:
    Yes


Years at Camp:
    6 months


Mortal Family:
    • Mother: Maria Sharpe. She always cared for Jade, but she was often distracted by Alison.
    • Father: Harry Sharpe. Harry married to Maria when Jade was just 3. They had a daughter almost immediately.
    • Younger Half-Sister: Alison Sharpe. Alison has learning difficulties, and she's always getting into trouble at school.


Brief History:
    First Life:
      text

    Second Life:
      text

    This Life:
      text


Physical Appearance:
    Jade is a very pretty girl. She's so pretty that people often mistake her for a child of Aphrodite. Firstly, Jade's skin is quite tan and doesn't have any freckles. But this makes sense, because she takes good care of her skin. Jade is of average height, but leaning towards the taller side. She has long legs that boys constantly admire. Her arms are if average length, although her fingers and toes are rather long. So are her feet. Jade has that sort of mischevioua look about her, but lesser than her siblings. But of course this only helps her all the more.

    Jade's face, like the rest of her, is rather pretty. She has high and structured cheekbones and a nose of average size, although some would say it leans to the smaller side of the scale. Jade's lips are naturally pink and her teeth are white and straight. Jade's eyes are brown, but they seem to have an almost golden glow about them. There are small golden flecks throughout them as well. Her eyelashes are long and as black as night.

    Lastly, Jade's hair. It's mainly brown, but it's slightly sun streaked. This is evident when she is in the sun. Little golden streaks light up. But generally her hair is brown. It's pretty wavy, br not quite curly. Jade's hair falls to the bottom if her ribs. She usually just wears it down without any arrangement, but for truing she puts it into a regular ponytail. She does know how to style it in a fancy way though. Jade's eyebrows arch a bit and are the same brown as her hair, just without the sun streaks.


Personality:
    Jade, overall, is a mischevious and fun-loving girl. She loves to play pranks on people, but not mean pranks that would hurt them. Just little ones that would maybe make the victim a bit annoyed for a while. Jade always takes part in Camp activities, even the lovey-dovey ones. She usually hangs around at the beach in her spare time, or maybe around the Camp playing pranks. Jade likes using her looks to her advantage. It doesn't really annoy her when people assume she's an Aphrodite kid just beacuse she's pretty. Instead she plays with them a bit before telling the truth.

    Jade is generally a very impatient girl. She hates waiting, and surprises. Unless it's a very good surprise of course. She doesn't like the bad or average surprise though. Jade has never been patient. Never in her life. She also detests being bored. Jade has to be active or doing something almost every second of the day. Even if it's only talking to someone. She was never diagnosed with ADHD, but she sure acts like it. Jade gets annoyed pretty easily, and she has a fierce temper when it is raised.

    Jade is a good friend, really she is. She's kind and caring and is always there. She's the shoulder to cry on when you have a problem. Jade is a very open girl when it comes to feelings. She hides them on her face, but you'll know if she's annoyed or angry. Jade is very energetic and she's a bit of a chatterbox. But she's also a very charming and sweet girl.


Fatal Flaw:
    Jade is very quick to judge people


Pets:
    None


Talents:
    ❖ Persuasion: It's not charmspeak, because people can resist it, but Jade is very good at getting people to do what she wants. She can sweet talk them or do anything else to get something.
    ❖ Thievery: Jade, like all Hermes children, is excellent at stealing things. She's especially good at picking locks.
    ❖ Quietness: You can't be loud when you steal things, so Jade has mastered the art of remaining quiet. Whether it's her breathing or her footsteps she's as silent as the night.


Weapons:
    Jade has a celestial bronze knife that morphs into a bracelet when not needed. It's just a regular charm bracelet by appearance.


Year-Round or Summer:
    Year-Round


Other:
    Her play-by is Victoria Justice




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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Sun Jul 08, 2012 8:37 pm




Name:
    Ameilia Faith Smith


Gender:
    Female


Age:
    15


Birthday:
    8 June


Godly Parent:
    Aphrodite


Claimed:
    No


Years at Camp:
    Just arrived


Mortal Family:
    • Father: Hunter Smith
    • Step-Mother: Mirella Smith
    • Step-Brother: Jason Smith


Brief History:
    Ameilia was born in New York City. She grew up with her father and step mother and brother in their very large home. Mirella is basically evil and cruel to Ameilia. One day, first day of summer vacation and ehem, Ameilia's biirthday, Mirella freaks out at Ameilia for not acting "Perfect" like Jason. They fight, and somewhere in there Mirella slaps Ameilia. The best part, Hunter is never awhere of any of this. Ameilia runs away and gets to camp safely after being found by some others. Monsters never chased her.


Physical Appearance:
    Ameilia has long dark that brown hair and eyes like a kaleidoscope. They change from brown to green to blue. She is tall and curvy but doesn't really like showing off her beauty as much as her siblings. She keeps her and her beauty locked away. It runs along with how shy she is.


Personality:
    Ameilia is very shy and castious. She isn't very out there like a lot of her siblings. She is very lovable and kind and great to be around. When it comes to the people she loves she can be very agressive and protective. She knows she can't do much but she tries her best at a lot.


Fatal Flaw:
    Ameilia has the tendancy to try and prove herself. This may have been inheritated from all the times she was pushed by her step mother to work harder and be "Perfect".


Pets:
    A Pegasus named Spirit


Talents:
    ♥ Charmspeak: Ameilia, like some Aphrodite kids, can charmspeak. She is not very powerful yet since she hasn't fully realised she has this ability.
    ♥ Flirting: Ameilia is very good at regular flirting, whether she's doing it on purpose or not.


Weapons:
    The one thing Ameilia is determined to go for, is to train hard. She pushes herself through her lack of confdence. She fights with a sword that turns into a silver bracelet that wraps around her upper arm. She isn't too bad with fighting with it too. She has strengths that she didn't even know she had before coming to camp.


Year-Round or Summer:
    Year-Round


Other:
    Adopted from Kat




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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Sun Jul 08, 2012 8:37 pm





Name:
    Terra Knighte


Gender:
    Female


Age:
    15


Birthday:
    27 March


Godly Parent:
    Nyx


Claimed:
    Yes


Years at Camp:
    1 year


Mortal Family:
    • Father: Aaron Knighte. He is Terra's biological father, but they don't really get along that well.
    • Step-Mother: Anastasia Knighte. She is horrible to Terra, but of course she only reveals her true colours when Aaron is not around.
    • Step-Brother: Liam Knighte. He is Terra's ten year old sister. And, like his mother, he is an absolute monster to Terra. He has nicknamed her 'Terror'.


Brief History:
    Terra's history isn't particularly bad, but it's not good either. It started off okay. Terra would go to school, she had loads of friends, and then she could come home to a loving father who spent most of his attention on his only daughter. But this perfect life was torn apart once Aaron met Anastasia. They only dated for a few months before getting married. And as soon as they were married Anastasia moved in with her son Liam. It was after that when things went downhill. Aaron started spending his attention on Liam, and Terra was slowly pushed to the background. It got to the point where she didn't even get to speak to her father on a daily basis. Instead Anastasia criticized her and Aaron tormented her. Pretty soon Terra was sick of it. She ran away from that house and was subconsciously guided to Camp Half-Blood.


Physical Appearance:
    Terra is, overall, quite a pretty girl. One if her more noticeable features is her milk pale skin. Terra isn't very fond of the sun and that's the main reason why she's so pale. Thanks to her sun avoidance Terra hasn't tanned or collected any freckles over the years. Her skin is also completely free of scars. Terra has a slender frame that would probably be described as willowy. By just because she's thin doesn't mean that she is weak. Terra is quite strong for her age and stature, her muscles just aren't very visible. Terra is quite tall, standing at 5'11". She is also quite lightweight naturally.

    Terra has deep blue eyes. Not as dark as the night, but fairly close. These eyes never seem to portray much emotion. Sometimes they show none at all. This is just part of Terra's exterior though. By she likes to keep her feelings to herself, so her closed off eyes work fine for her. Terra's lips are a fairly light pink in colour. They're not incredibly pale, but light enough. They are also tipping towards the thinner side if the scale. Terra's nose is relatively slender and is of average length. Her face is pretty much the shape of an oval that comes to a sligt point at the bottom.

    And finally, Terra's hair. It is a shocking contrast to her skin. Her hair is a bright mane of orangey-red. It flows down her shoulders to stop at the bottom of her shoulder blades. This coppery waterfall is relatively straight, you couldn't even call it wavy. Terra usually just leaves it outright cascade down her back like a fiery rush of water. Her eyebrows are the exact same shade as the rest of her hair. They are on the thinner side and arch elegantly.


Personality:
    Terra used to be the sweetest girl out there. You could heap a whole lot of worries and insults onto her and she would just laugh it off. She never got angry or annoyed. Basically, she was the perfect person. Of course, that was then and this is now.

    Being endlessly taunted 24/7 hardens a person. And it has hardened Terra a whole heap. She has built up a tough exterior. This shell is the Terra most people now and kind of love. It really depends who you are, and how you meet Terra. The outside Terra is quite fond of partying. She's a terrible flirt and can even be described as sexy at times. She's also relatively sarcastic in her sense of humour and in everyday life. She likes to act that she doesn't care about things when she really does. She's relatively quiet in large groups, and she's not the loudest person in small gatherings either. Terra is generally quite pleasant. She knows how to keep her mouth shut and she understands when people just don't want to talk.

    The real Terra is basically the same as her exterior. She's less sarcastic though, and she's sweeter. The real Terra shows when she cares about something. As soon as you make friends with Terra you'll start to see the inside her. Since it isn't very hard to make friends with this daughter of Nyx (although she won't entirely trust someone for a while) quite a few people have seen this softer side of her personality.


Fatal Flaw:
    Terra is kind of selfish, and she's pretty stubborn too


Pets:
    None


Talents:
    ★Night Vision: Terra can see perfectly in the dark. To her it just looks like it's a cloudy day.
    ★Shadow Bending: Terra can manipulate shadows and bend them to her will, even in the day. She's pretty good at it. So far she can hold someone down with her shadows and create shapes with them. She especially enjoys making animals. Terra can engulf someone in shadows, effectively making them blind. But this tires her out a lot, so she can't do anything else in the day after doing this.


Weapons:
    Terra has a long and elegant celestial bronze sword. It turns into a simple but pretty ring that always sits on her middle finer on her left hand. She has name it Terror, so that whenever she uses it she can be bitter enough to kill her opponent.


Year-Round or Summer:
    Year-Round


Other:
    Play-By is Jacqueline Emerson




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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Sun Jul 08, 2012 8:37 pm

        willow grace mitchells,

the basics,
        Full Name: Willow Grace Mitchells
        Nickname: none.
        Age: 18
          Birthday: 23/07/1994

        Claimed: Yes
        Camp Stays: Year-round
        Camp Experience: 5 years.

the family,
        Mortal Parents:
        Cynthia Mitchell || Forty-Seven || Lawyer || Athena
        Joseph Mitchell || Forty-Eight || English Professor || Hermes
        Immortal Parent: Phanes; god of procreation and the night sky [the universe basically]
        Siblings:
        Carina Mitchell || Twenty Eight || Gymnast || Terpsichore
        Edwin Mitchell || Twenty Three || Unemployed || Apollo
        Lindsey Mitchell || Nineteen || Student || Bia
        Emilia Mitchell || Eighteen || Student || Athena

        History:
        The story of Willow is not an easy one for her to discuss with anyone, which may be the reason she lies about her own past whenever it comes up out of the blue. Willow has made a good attempt at trying to get a good semblance of direction in her life but her lack of it comes from a past riddled with loneliness and exclusion.

        Willow was never expected, she just happened to come about. Her mother had stupidly let herself go to someone who as it turned out did not truly love her for the way that she loved him. This is not to say that the father did not try to stick around her mother whilst she was pregnant because he did feel responsible for getting the girl pregnant in the first place. Neither of them really had plans for the child, nor did any of them really have plans for the future. Willow was simply the anchor point in their relationship and it was clear once she was gone that everything would go back to normal.

        Once Willow was born though it seemed that the very anchor point which had held these two people together was out in the open. Truth being said, the father didn’t want the child and neither did the mother. It was one stupid mistake that they had both been a part of since day one. The best thing for them both to do really was to go their separate ways and get on with the rest of their lives without each other. This, of course, led to Willow being branched into the Foster Care System but not before having inherited her father's own genetic markers and thus leaving her with abilities, he was a god after all, the one which would help her throughout this earth for the rest of her life.

        Now under any normal circumstances this might have been a good thing, but the truth was that the timeline Willow was born into was one where having an ability immediately put you under house arrest, regardless of how old you were or what it was that you could do out of the ordinary. For the time being though, everyone, including Willow, was oblivious to the fact that the child had abilities.

        Willow spent her first few years in the Foster Care System, being bounced back and forth between families who didn’t want her. With each rejection, her loneliness grew and evolved. The reason that no one wanted Willow was for the fact that they feared the worse. As a child, Willow grew into her abilities which while at first might have been unnoticeable grew into something far greater. It started off as small instances, things appearing on the other side of the room within a matter of seconds without being touched, and began to grow into much larger instances like the child being able to crawl on the walls. Honestly, it seemed like she was stuck being unwanted for the rest of her life thanks to something she never even asked for in the first place.

        A short while before her 3rd birthday, Willow was taken in once again by the Mitchell family. The family had a track record for connecting to the children who seemed unwanted, mainly because they were aware of special children and sought out to protect them from the government. Their own abilities made it easy for them to pass under the radar without ever being caught by the government or any of their agents. They had already adopted four other children who each were demi-gods and who were each turned down for adoption time and time again.

        When the time came to enroll Willow into school, it was fairly clear that she was rather hesitant to the idea. She had already suffered setback after setback in her life to the point where trusting people became near impossible for the young girl. She became introverted, not really making any friends in fear that she would lose control and be labelled a freak. The only people she truly trusted were her family.

        And why should she have trusted anyone else, they were only going to let her down in the end.

        As she grew, her trust issues never truly fixed themselves. Sure Willow did allow herself to trust others to the point where she made a handful of friends, but she could never truly learn to trust them completely in fear that one day they would stab her in the back and make her look like a fool. The main thing that happened as Willow aged was that she grew more outwardly, always wanting to explore and never being able to truly sit still for more than 5 minutes before jumping onto a totally different tangent. One of the results of her outdoors nature was the fact that she managed to land a pretty nasty scar on her back when she fell off a fence during her earlier teen years.

        In an effort to try and control her own behaviour, her parents bought her a pair of roller-skates; they assumed that once she got bored of falling on them then she would become less active. Those were the best investments ever made towards Willow who seemed to take to skates like a duck to water, always growing and perfecting her technique on them. Combined with her abilities she became a severely advanced skater, always moving and never really staying still for anything that came her way.

        However, all the exploring came to nothing to be honest. Willow knew that she was simply doing this in order to try and fill the empty void which had been made through loneliness and not being wanted by really anyone except for her true family. She needed to explore more to fill the void and so that is exactly what she done.

        From as young as fifteen, with the help of one of her foster siblings, Willow began to embark on bigger adventures by travelling through the fabric of time. She had some great times and met some great people along the way. Her trust began to grow with the more people she met, of course that became problematic itself when she became too trusting towards others but she didn’t see any problems with it for the time being.

        Despite everything though she knew that the void still existed and would probably always be there until she went back and faced her biggest problem head on. And so now with an idea in her head Willow is settling down in Modern Day New York, of course her own mother hasn’t even been born yet but she could always wait around for a couple of years. Of course she, along with many of her other siblings, were send to Camp Half-Blood like their adoptive parents did before them to train to be heroes to keep themselves and others safe from many different monsters.


the psyche,
        Personality: Willow is everything you would expect her to be. She is someone who is trying to live her life on the edge just to prove herself to everyone who thinks that she is weak. If she is given the opportunity and the experience then Willow will jump at the chance to prove herself to someone. Some say it stems from a flaw in her past that she is unable to move past personal failure which is true in itself but it has more to do with the fact that the girl carries herself with an invincibility complex believing that she is superior to everyone else. This doesn’t exactly help when you combine this complex on top of a bunch of different other hormones which propel teenagers.

        From the word go she sets to prove that she is different from everyone else her age. She isn’t afraid to jump into a challenge head first, in fact she actually dives right in to anything that is put in front of her in hopes that she can accomplish the challenge. Her mind works on a semi-irrational plane where relevance of the situation at hand only matter when she is put in front of a life or death situation. If she feels like she can walk away from the challenge without a scratch then she will give it her all and never hold back. Along with this mind-set of jumping into the challenge at hand, her mind seems to have no filter whatsoever. Her brain and her mouth always seem to be running coherently with one another, Willow never really thinking anything through before she lets it come out of her mouth which has landed her in trouble on more than one occasion.

        The one thing that she always seems to be is secretive. When it comes to others she can talk for months on end without rest but the instant the spotlight is turned onto her she seems to clam up and unwilling to talk to anyone. She has a tendency to hide her true feelings from the world and painting this façade that everything is okay and that it will probably all turn out for the better in the end for her. She has spent so long living in a world where the real her is this other person that she has stopped trying to identify herself within this world. It is a constant feeling of being out of place that Willow feels and no matter how many times she tries to propel herself out there, the outcome will always be that she remains her closed of self.

        Social standards and rules are something which Willow seems to have no regard for. Manners and etiquette are totally lost on her and it isn’t often that you will find her being charming. She would rather get into bar fights and eat chilidogs than talk civilised to people who look down on her. She prides herself in being a mature member of society when the time calls for it but most of the time she is no better than the beer guzzling frat boys. Where once was a girl who had an idea in her head of what she wanted to do and where she wanted to go has now been replaced by a girl who has very little want for trying to be serious.

        Willow has a level of trust that seems to go a long way; she is willing to go as far as to put faith in complete strangers in hopes that they will come out for her. She treats people the way she expects to be treated which itself is flawed since she does tend to treat some people in a rather shitty manner. In return for having complete trust in others she also in a rather generous person, always willing to have a go and be a nice person.

        In complete contrast to this, Willow has a streak where she can be a total hell raiser. She feels that chaos and anarchy are so much fun when they are paired together and so if Willow finds some way to use whatever strengths she has to create a little tension or drama then you can bet that she is gonna get right on it. She’s done everything from breaking laws to conjuring raptors from a time past just to satisfy her somewhat sadistic taste in humour. She likes to think that she does have some semblance of humanity somewhere inside her but that it is buried underneath years of being a total fun sponge.

        To recap, Willow is a girl who shows no interest in following the rules but at the same time knows how far those rules can be pushed before they snap in two.

        Weaknesses:
        Poor filter
        Rude/Crass
        Too trusting
        Lonely
        Lack of direction

        Strengths:
        Strong willed
        Generous
        Knowledgeable
        Ambitious
        Sociable


the physical body,
        looks: What you see when you initially look at Willow is the distinctive look of someone who really doesn’t care what people think about her or how they feel about her. She is her own person and she learnt that a long time ago; technically she feels that the only person she really needs to please is herself which might explain why she rarely puts much thought into what she wears or how she looks like. When it comes to her appearance she’d rather everything looked natural rather than her looking like someone that she wasn’t

        Willow’s hair is probably one of these features that she doesn’t even try to think twice with because she feels that it is perfect just the way it is. She’s not a big fan of spending hours on end just trying to fix her hair and will most likely spend as little time on it as possible. The hair itself usually falls past her shoulders, fairly straight. Most people would assume Willow to be a bottle blonde, but the truth is that her natural roots are blonde despite what everyone else thinks about her. She never feels the need to really try and accent her hair in any stylings feeling that it is perfect as it is

        Some people say that people’s eyes are the windows to their souls; well Willow simply provides the exception to the rule with grey-blue eyes which don’t seem to give a lot away about the girl. Most of the time she’ll tend to feign eye contact just to make sure that no one catches onto her own little lies.

        Part of what makes Willow the way she is, is her abundant use of eye makeup. The fact is that she is trying to highlight her own bland eyes a bit more by giving the appearance of rather smoky eyes. What this leads on to though is a major case of racoon eyes which have sort of become like a signature look for Willow ever since she could first pick up an eyeliner pencil.

        Willow might be the type of girl to run around and get herself into trouble but she is far from having an athletic figure. Her body is fairly slim with Willow making an effort to try and get more muscle definition with mixed results thus far. Her height never stretches past 5’7’’ on a good day which is pretty good for a teenager of her own age. Her weight is fairly average to go with this, faltering up and down 130lbs. Her complexion is fairly pale, as if echoing a child who has never seen the light of day even though it is the opposite of this which is true.

        dressing style: There isn’t really one word which describes Willow’s own style of clothing. Many have tried to classify it as typical rock chick but she always seems to deter from this when most people think they have her pinned down. She is a big fan of all types of clothing, usually wearing what feels natural for her on that day whether it be something simple like a tank top or something more sophisticated like a shirt. More often than not when she is trying to make a first impression she will wear a plain tank-top or a tee and boot that up with a leather jacket. Never wanting to apply herself to social situations, she will more often than not either wear short skirts or shorts and then cover up the rest of her legs with stockings of some sort, though that is not to say she will never wear jeans because they do feature heavily in her own wardrobe. When it comes to footwear, every kind of shoe you could think of is what she would wear; she has boots, converse, shoes, heels and everything in between. The most featured attribute to her clothing is her shades on her face and the things which usually jangle on her arm.

        skills:
        •   Rollerblading; Willow is a trick roller skater, capable of holding her own on the streets and treating every jump like an obstacle that can be conquered. She always seems to do it in a flawless way without losing her balance
        •   Cooking; A talent which hardly anyone has been acquainted with is the fact that Willow can cook, always improving on ideas and having a sharp tongue and taste buds
        •   Silver-Tongue; Willow is capable of lying through her teeth without showing any signs of remorse.
        •   Bilingual; Willow is capable of speaking not only English but Dutch flawlessly


the camp information,
        weapons: many. more than anyone can imagine. all borrowed however. or stolen.
        pets: none.
        talents: Willow has an ability which allows her to alter the space in a specific area to her own will. Whilst it might not sound fairly powerful compared to other abilities Willow has had years of practice with her own ability making her technique and use of her ability near the prime level that it can reach. The ways in which she can affect an area are as follows

        Warp; One of the main attributes of her ability is that Willow is capable of warping the space around her to put herself at an advantage. The most useful extent to this is to distort the space between two objects making them either closer together or further apart. She can distance herself from a subject by making each step seem the equivalent to a single millimetre or she could in turn get closer to a target by doing the exact opposite. It is this manipulation of the space in front of her which has become one of her greatest tricks and one of the most used attributes of her own ability.

        Bend; Willow is also capable of bending space in such a way that she can either divert attacks away from her or make something reach it’s intended target. Willow does this by altering the dimensions of an area and where objects exist within the area. By tapping into the area’s dimensions and orientations she can cause it to spin or even inverse upon itself which in turn throws all sense of directionality out of the window. Willow uses this to assure that she is never under attack from gunfire or long range attacks by simply willing the space in the area to affect the directionality of the object and thus make it miss her completely.

        Flip; Another one of the attributes which her ability allows her to do is flip space within an area entirely so that she is able to turn an area on its head. This is usually used as either an escape manoeuvre or a way to gain the upper hand when she starts to walk across the walls of the arena by making it the floor simply by flipping the area itself. This can itself disarm some due to the fact that they will become confused as to what is going on. When using this aspect of her ability Willow is in complete control of the direction in which the universe flips. Of course all sense of gravity is still applicable to the situation itself meaning Willow could not do anything which could be defined as completely out of the ordinary.

        Crush; Crushing space is what Willow would call the most taxing of all her attributes mainly because it focuses on merging two points of space together to be one point and therefore crushing all the space that exists between the two points. Willow could do this in order to make anything in between the space itself seemingly disappear into nothingness even though it still does exist. Crushing space itself does not crush the item that exists within the space, only conceals it.

        Vortexes; Over time Willow found out that she is able to fold space in such a sense that she could make an item take up two different places and therefore is granted a rather limited form of teleportation within the space she is manipulating. Of course she could use this further and open up a wormhole which will begin to suck up everything that exists within the space she is manipulating unless she stops it willingly.

          Limits: Whilst Willow has an extremely useful power, it is the vast of uses that it can be used for which can become the biggest limit to her own ability. Due to the fact that her ability manipulates the entire space around her she needs a lot of energy in order to perform one simple manoeuvre. Of course where this leads is the fact that the more difficult the aspect, the more energy she needs to put into performing the action. For example, rotating the axis of the area she is in will require a lot more effort than warping the space to make the distance between two points seem shorter. Area is another thing altogether; for Willow the radius for the area in which she can manipulate is about 50 meters meaning anything that goes out with her radius of control will remain unaffected by her own abilities.

          When her abilities activate, it’s sort of like a dome of energy; nothing can get in and nothing can get out. Of course when you watch from the outside, space seems normal but the people within the space seem to be doing abnormal feats, however within the dome it is the exact opposite. Despite the fact that Willow is able to do all these things gravity still applies to her and so therefore she can’t really do anything out there.

          Warp; Willow technically calls this the easiest attribute of her ability because it is less demanding than some of the other stuff she is capable of doing but that is not to say that it is not difficult. For one, she can stretch the distance between two points to a mile at the most, which whilst handy places some heavy constraints on her. Adversely she can get very close to a point despite standing a few feet away, capable of squashing distance to a quarter of a millimetre regardless of where she is standing within the radius of her ability. Despite her being able to get so close, sometimes her own abilities have a tendency to backfire meaning she could miss completely

          Bend; Sure it sounds easy enough and some might think it is fairly easy for her to bend the fabric of space within such a minute area but that’s where most people are wrong because it is more difficult than it seems. Directionality is everything within this aspect of her ability because if she doesn’t nail the direction she wants to send the attack in then the chances are that she could miss or that she could be attacked. Even so, bending space can only go so far even for a veteran like Willow who has honed her abilities for years. The best she can do is move something a few inches from its intended target which might even still hit its target since the distance the object being hit might cover more than a few inches. Sure in combination with warping she can make these few inches become a mile apart from their original target, but again it would be fairly taxing for her to use two aspects of her ability at the same time.

          Flip; This trick itself can be risky to even her if she is not careful with it because whilst she can in effect change the entire environment and plane she is on, she still must adhere to the basic laws of physics. What this means is that once she tilts a landscape, everything (including her) is thrown to the angle in which the environment is being flipped around. Also whilst inside her bubble, she is in complete control of what becomes the ground, however the instant she loses that concentration and her ability starts to turn on itself she has to ensure that the plane of the landscape is back to normal to ensure she doesn’t tumble out of control and hurt herself.

          Crush; By crushing the space, Willow is simply making objects between two points disappear. Of course others viewing from outside of the dome of her ability can still see the objects. The objects still exist and will show themselves after Willow has been drawn of all energy which is more often than not the end result of using such a difficult aspect of her own ability. She can keep up a crushed area of space for at least a few minutes before she feels herself growing faint and feels the need to let go of the hold she has over the space.

          Vortexes; This is mainly limited by the dome which her ability works in; all teleportation must take place within the dome and the end position must be another point within the dome. It is a fairly limited form of teleportation, only allowing her to teleport within this 50 meter radius. The vortexes are fairly small and can only remain open for a few seconds before they begin to close in on themselves. While she is working on strengthening this the fact remains that she can only teleport herself through these vortexes. The gravitational vortexes she creates can become strong but must start out weak and take a long time to build up the necessary mass to absorb something bigger into it


        Note: Adopted from Dean



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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Mon Jul 09, 2012 9:25 pm

Canons



Character you're applying for:
Demeter

Brief description of the character:
Demeter has always been one of the kinder Goddesses. She isn't exactely known for blasting people into dust. She's more known for her non-violence ways. When all the other Major Gods and Goddesses are sitting on their thrones bickering about something Demeter will be quietly watching it all, maybe even trying to stop it. But sometimes it's just hopeless though. Although Demeter is one of the kinder Goddeses she does have a grudge against a certain God of the Underworld. Even Goddesses are allowed to hold grudges, you know. Demeter is a very out-doorsy sort of person. She loves camping in forests, or anywhere where there are plants. Other times you can find her inspecting plants on a farm. On Olympus Demeter feels too restless. All the flora up there is perfect. But down on Earth she can help. Demeter is generally more invloved with her children then other Gods/Godesses. Not physically, because that isn't allowed, but she always watches over them.
Demeter is quite pretty. But that is kind of predicatble. Who would be ugly when they could be beautiful? One of Demeter's greatest fears is growing old, so she keeps her appearance at roughly 30 years of age. Her favoured look has long blond hair that falls in loose ringlets. Her eyes are a soft and calming green. Her eyebrows are a bit darker than the rest of her hair and are relatively thin. Demeter is very slender, and she is fairly tall. After watching over mortals in Olympus she likes to transfer a bit of that into her mortal form. Demeter has light pink lips that are fairly even in size, although her bottom lip is fuller than her upper one. She has straight white teeth, perfecting her pretty smile.


Sample Roleplay:
Demeter brushed her hand along the wooden fence that surrounded this little forest. This area was a nature reserve, and for good reason. It was absolutely beautiful. Demeter had merely come down here to check on a tree she had planted here a couple of years ago. All she had to do to get in was smile at the ranger. After that he had practically opened up the gates for her. Demeter didn't have much time though. Soon the ranger would realise that he had let someone into a protected area. Demeter wound her way through the trees, aiming for the center of the forest. In a few minutes she had reached her destination. Her pretty little apple tree was in the centre of the small clearing. It had grown a lot from the sapling it had been when she'd planted it. Demeter brushed her fingers across the tree trunk lightly and smiled as she looked up at its branches. They were laden with fruit. Demeter reached up and plucked an apple. She turned it over in her hands and smiled again. Then she took a bite and nonchalantly walked back the way she had come. Now she had to return to Olympus. Otherwise she would be late for the meeting...

Why do you deserve/want to roleplay this character?
I would like to play Demeter because she is one of my favourite Godesses. My first character that I ever made on this site was a daughter of Demeter. Anyway, she has quite a few children in Cabin 4 so I thought someone should really RP as her. I think I deserve to play Demeter because I am on this site at least once a day, even if it is only for a few minutes. I have been on this site for a while as well. I've always wanted a canon, and Demeter sounds fun. I hoped you like my application!


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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Tue Jul 10, 2012 12:46 am

One thing I'd like you to change in her app before I accept her: the freeze blood thing. Maybe instead if making it a kill straight away (because that's open to god modding and is a little overpowered) maybe have a timer on it. So she starts the freezing process and if they don't get near a good source of heat within an hour they die. That way if you're attacking someone you're rping with it's not an insta-death.

Fix that and she's ACCEPTED. I like her :)
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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:37 am

Oh, I never meant for death to be instantaneous. But I've edited it so it's more clear.
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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Thu Jul 12, 2012 9:50 pm

Jade Sharpe



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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Thu Jul 12, 2012 10:57 pm

Jade is ACCEPTED
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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Sat Jul 14, 2012 7:06 pm

Amelia Faith Smith
has been added. She is adopted from Kat and, since I have not made any major changes, does not need re-acceptance
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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Fri Aug 03, 2012 4:35 pm


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PostSubject: Re: Balisugar's Final Character Topic   Fri Aug 03, 2012 9:59 pm

Terra looks great! I love her nametag.
She's Accepted!
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