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 Athena's Wrath

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Join date : 2012-04-15

PostSubject: Athena's Wrath   Sun Apr 15, 2012 5:17 am

Name:Ash Stenner
Gender: female
God parent : Athena
Claimed : yes
Mortal family : Simon Stenner(father) Pearl Stenner (twin sister)
Years in camp :1
Brief history : Ash use to live on a farm in Texas before they moved to New York
after he father was diagnosed with cancer. After he father passed away her and her sister got taken in by a stepfamily who hated their guts and were using them for money. Ash and Pearl started to attend a school where a state named Lief recognized them as daughters of Athena. When Ash came home to find her bags. on the front doorstep, she and her sister went to Liefs house who was their best friend,who took them to Camp Half Blood.
Physical appeared : Ash has short blonde curly hair and grey eyes.She is tall, skinny and has an tanned skin tone. Ash is usually seen wearing shorts, a singlet and.tall brown boots. Ash has no freckles or scars except for a tiny one on her right wrist where a hellhound got her.
Personality: Ash is a positive person,she is also fun and a bookworm. Her bad traits are she is bossy and jumps to conclusions.
Fatal flaw : thinks she is always right.
Pet : Ash owns no pets
Talents: good with a dagger, smart and quick thinker
Weapons : celestial bronze dagger
Year round
Other : she owns a watch that allows her to move super quick for a few seconds when the button is pulled out
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PostSubject: Re: Athena's Wrath   Sun Apr 15, 2012 8:21 am

you need a fatal flaw all demi have have one
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PostSubject: Re: Athena's Wrath   Sun Apr 15, 2012 10:43 am

Hey there, Azi! Whilst this is a good start to your character, her personality needs a few more sentences, and it may help to expand other sections as well. For her personality, you may want to describe her likes, dislikes and tastes - what can she absolutely not stand? You say she's a bookworm - what's her favourite genre? Just a couple of suggestions, if you get my drift. Also, for her fatal flaw, you may want to say how it is fatal. She thinks she is always right, but how could this lead to a near-death experience? Plus, it may help to run your application through Microsoft Word. The grammar and spelling aren't exactly up to scratch, although it's not My Immortal bad. A good start though, she just needs a little bit of work.

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